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Title |
Scenery |
Author |
Nick |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
1,700 words |
Rating |
9.0 |
Summary |
Nick and Lee sit in a park and take in the "scenery". |
Commentary |
I did not see how Nick could improve on what LeAnna
wrote in "Ten". He did not try to. He wrote a different story
that just seemed to be the same story written from a
different point of view. It was very well done, although there was not much plot to it. Its basically just two people goofing off in the park and having fun doing it. I preferred "Ten" to "Scenery, because it was more of a story. "Scenery" was more of a vignette. |
ASSM |
Scenery |