COMMENTARY: This story is short but not simple. It isn't too complex, but it has enough twists and turns to make it interesting. The main character thinks she has everything figured out at the beginning, but
things don't work out exactly as she had planned. The tables turn, her father gets the upper hand but she doesn't give in. She continue to do her best to manipulate him, with some degree of success.
I don't like how none of the characters seems to have a name. It makes it very awkward for me when I am writing a spotlight.
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