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COMMENTARY: What do I like about this story? The fact that despite its short length, the characters do not spend it all sucking and fucking. There actually is some build up. Most importantly, Mr. J, the main character, actually has a conscience. He understands that that his lust is not acceptable in the world at large or inline with his own moral code.
What else? I also like how the tables turn about halfway through the story. That's about it. Short but sweet. Probably not for everyone, but I certainly enjoyed it.
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