COMMENTARY: This story is so over the top, so extreme (in some ways) that it is practically satire. From the author's notes I get the impression that he wrote it after getting requests from some of his readers for such a story and not because he had a burning desire to write a story about a man who finally get to know the sluts that live next door to him.
All in all I enjoyed this story quite a bit. There is more to it than just satire. It aroused me physically and tickled my funny bone, no pun intended. The story does actually have a flow to it, even if the characters aren't all that memorable. Will everyone be able to enjoy this story on two levels, like I did? Probably not, but hopefully everyone reading this story will find something in it that makes it worth their time.
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