COMMENTARY: I had high hopes for this chapter. I read the first intallment several weeks before and wasn't aware that there would be a second one. I really enjoyed the first part and I am glad to report that chapter two exceeded my expectations.
This chapter is just as well written and has all the kinks that the first chapter has, plus it throws in a couple more twists. A little bit of exhibitionism, a lot more lesbian sex, and something else that I won't mention for fear of giving away too much of the plot.
Honestly, there isn't a whole lot to this other than Chasey and Tasha's escapades before, during, and after a trip to the city. That said, I think that the author does a wonderful job with the dialogue and descriptions. For this reason, and because I enjoyed it so much, I recommend that you give it a try, even if you don't care for the kinks the author includes.
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