The Bitch Trainer

TITLE:

The Bitch Trainer

AUTHOR:

Laura Davis

LENGTH:

2,800 words

MAIN CHARACTER:

Female

COMBINATION(S):

Twosome (2 Females)

ORIENTATION(S):

Homosexual (Female)

RELATIONSHIP(S):

Domme-sub

KINK(S):

BDSM

SETTING(S):

Outdoors

CAUTION(S):

SUMMARY: A bitch trainer, a woman who trains other women to submit, has the tables turned on her by one of her students.

COMMENTARY: I usually don't care for stories that involve people being forced to have sex, but that isn't what happens here. The main character isn't forced to have sex. She is forced into submission. There is a difference. The story is about power. There is some sex, but that almost seems incidental.

One size does not fit all and accordingly there are people who will probably enjoy this story and others who will probably be horrified by it. It is intense. It is very tightly scripted. The author doesn't spend much time, if any, dwelling on what is transpiring, she just describes it.

TECHNICALLY SPEAKING: I usually prefer longer stories. I do not think this story needs to be any longer than it is already. It works just fine the way it is. Adding more details would not neccessarily make it better.

LINK(S)

The Bitch Trainer
- http://assm.asstr.org/Year2002/34612

Spotlights : May 2002