COMMENTARY:
There are two things in particular that strike me about this
story. The plot and the main character. The plot is well paced. The
author does not cut to the chase too quickly. Additionally the plot
develops as it progresses and is not repetitive. The main character,
Tony, seems realistic. He is moved by more than just his lusty feelings
for Missy. He also has a conscience and does not give in to his lust
felings too easily. Translation: He has a hurdle to overcome and this is
central to the plot.
Overall, I think that this is a superior effort. If the idea of Tony
watching Missy strip (and enjoying it) bothers you (too much) then maybe
you shouldn't read this story. Otherwise, I strongly recommend that you
give it a try.
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