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COMMENTARY: There isn't a whole lot to this story, other than Karen's seduction of Johnny and the sex that follows but a story doesn't have to be long or complex to get my seal of approval. It does need to have something going for it. In this case it is the writing, the use of descriptive language, the pacing, and the editing that did it for me. | |||||||||||||||||||
LINK(S) The Print Lady - www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=38794 | |||||||||||||||||||