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COMMENTARY:
What impresses me the most about this story, what
stands out in my mind, is the fact that the author gives much more
attention to the mind set of the narrator than to the sex. From my
point of view, the situation generates plenty of heat by its very
nature; thus, there is no need to overemphasize the sex or spend
too much time describing it. Reading about how torn and conflicted
Niki feels, stimulates me quite a bit. Mix in a brief description
of what she actually does with Sean and I am more than satisfied.
Less is more.
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