COMMENTARY:
Good stuff. That's what this story is. Great stuff. It moves
along at a nice pace. I liked the main character. I like how Justine is
both excited and frightened by her new lifestyle. The other characters
aren't quite as interesting as Justine, but they play their roles well.
I may be a bit biased when it comes to this tale. Bondage and discipline
stories have always got me going, throw in a little exhibitionism and
I'm really loving it. On the other hand, I'm fairly certain that a badly
written story won't catch or keep my interest even if it does include
the elements found in this one. Is this the story for you? Well, that
all depends on your tastes.
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