COMMENTARY:
Great story. Loved it. Not short, but not too long,
either. The pacing is part of what makes it so wonderful. It
doesn't open with Janet and Chris already in the sack. It takes
some time for them to get there. The foreplay that they engage in,
before they finally take the plunge, is as hot if not hotter than
the sex.
The other thing that impressed me about this story is the
characters. Janet and Chris both seem realistic. Their reactions
to the situations they find themselves in don't seem too
outrageous. Neither of them seems like a prop or too single-
mindedly focused on sex.
I strongly recommend you give this story a try. I could not find
anything that would make your average reader of erotica feel icky.
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