COMMENTARY:
This is a superlative effort in my opinion. Make no mistake, the story revolves around sex, but the author does a pretty damn good job, given this fact. The characters seem realistic enough. They have concerns and qualms. They do not turn into single-minded-sex-automatons at the drop of a hat.
The author sees to it that things move slowly enough. Charlie, Kim and Candice do not jump from casual introductions to wild, passionate sex in the space of a single paragraph. They actually get hot and bothered and think about their predicaments before they take any action. I find this to be, in a word, delicious.
There are a few misspelled words and misplaced words, but not so many that it got to be distracting.
This isn't a romantic story, but if you like something a little naughty, then you will probably like this one. I do think that it will probably appeal to more men than women. |