COMMENTARY:
Another story by another Ann(e). This one is only available in PDF format, which means that you need to have Adobe Acrobat on your computer in order to read it. Additionally, it is impossible to print the story, ergo you have to read it off the screen.
I really enjoyed this story. The author does a very nice job building it up without giving away too much in advance. In particular I enjoyed Grace's narration. She leaves in details that others might have thrown out. These are details that make her seem more realistic and make the story more enjoyable, in my opinion.
Some of you may not care for some of the twists and turns this story takes. I found them to be entertaining. |