The Substitute


 
TITLE:The Substitute
AUTHOR:Losgud
LENGTH:16,700 words
MAIN CHARACTER:Male
COMBINATION(S):Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Brother/Sister-in-law
Husband/Wife
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Car
Home
 
 

SUMMARY: Wayne finds himself in the (un)enviable position of having to spend the night alone with his sister-in-law.

 
 

COMMENTARY: Its been a while since I have written anything resembling a review, but here are some comments about a story that I re-read just the other night. I originally read it about two and a half years ago, before I started writing reviews.

It is very well written. It has plot and characters and dialogue and even some humor. If you are looking for a quick fix then this may not be the story for you, which is not to say that the story isn't arousing or entertaining or well paced, because it is all of those things. The whole story is arousing, not just the sex scenes, in my opinion. There doesn't need to be nudity or even sex play for a story to be arousing, there just needs to be sexual tension, in my opinion (again!). The author does a great job of creating that tension, although for the most part it seems to exist inside the main characters head, which in some ways makes it that much more interesting.

The bottom line is that this is a fun read, in my book, and I strongly recommend it. Add it to your summer reading list. Tell your neighbors, tell your friends. Write the author afterwords and tell him how much you enjoyed it.

Okay, I've run out of things to say so I am going to sign off. Take care.

 
 

LINK(S)

The Substitute - http://assm.asstr.org/erotica/assm/Year98/8633.txt

Stories Online - http://www.storiesonline.net/

 

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