SUMMARY: Philip continues to get himself teased mercilessly by Jessica and Ghita.

COMMENTARY: I like the premise behind this story, but I don't care for what the author has done with it. Part of the problem is the fact that the characters aren't all that interesting. Another part of it is the fact that the plot is very repetitive. The author has obviously put forth some effort, but I have to say that there doesn't seem to be a whole lot to the characters or plot that could not be found in his previous stories.

If you have not read his previous stories or have not read them recently then you may enjoy this one. On the other hand reading his previous stories will help to acquaint you with the characters. Its funny, but I found this story rather arousing the first time I read it, but when I tried re-reading it I wasn't quite as taken by it. I think this happened because the first time through I didn't know what I was in for, but after that I did.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 7.0 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 4/5
• Editing: 4/5
• Plot and Characters: 2/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good