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Alley of OoPS : 378 |
Title |
What Cape? |
Author |
The Cat |
Length |
3,000 words |
Main Character |
Male |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) |
Relationship(s) |
Married Couple |
Kink(s) |
Role Playing |
Setting(s) |
Home |
Genre(s) |
-- |
Caution(s) |
-- |
Summary |
Allen enjoys the games Sandy, his wife, comes up with. Her latest creation involves him dressing up as Batman and her as Catwoman. |
Commentary |
This is a very arousing story. The way Sandy and Allen dress while playing their game was one reason I found this story arousing. Considering how much they were showing off when they dressed up, I was tempted to list Exhibitionism under kinks. The other reason I found this story so arousing is the fun both characters seem to have playing the game. They really get into it. I like what the author does with the characters. The dialogue and narration, by Allen, seem realistic. The plot on the other hand did not seem to be quite as well handled. It seemed as though the author got a bit tangled in the details. It is worth mentioning that there are a number of spelling errors in this story. I enjoyed this story; it is a fun read. I enjoyed it because I found it very arousing and to a lesser to degree because of the way the author handled the characters. If you are looking for looking for something with a lot of plot twists or can't stand something that should have been run through a spell checker, then you might want to skip this one, otherwise I recommend it. It is not great, but it is a fun read. I have given it a Very Good. |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Plot and |
3 out of 5 |
Editing |
4 out of 5 |
Objective |
7.5 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Very Good |