Alley of OoPS : 288

Title

Stroke Story

Author

MichaelD38

Story Code(s)

M/F, M/F/F

Length

8,400 words

Rating

Good

Arousal Factor

Average

Story Factor

Low

Summary

Bret, a famous movie actor, bangs his way across the City of Angels.

Commentary

For the most part, this story is forgettable. It does not get interesting until Cindy, that's girl #5 in the script, enters the story. She adds some life to it.

I like to believe that where you begin it less important than where you finish. Having said that, I think that the reason I did not give this story a lower rating is for the simple fact that it got better as it went along.

Possibly I missed the point of the story. The author's notes indicate that this is supposed to be a satire. I guess the humor just went over my head.