COMMENTARY:
I seem to be drawn to stories about people ruining
their lives. People who allow themselves to be drawn into a web of
sex and mystery that gives them the release they have been looking
for, but that also changes their lives irreparably. This story
falls into that category.
What was it that drew Maggie in? The size of his cock? His
charming nature? His threats? The quality of her life? It may not
matter what made her do it. The end result is the same. You can't
change the past.
What I do know is that this is a very entertaining read. Maggie is
attracted to Josh but doesn't give in or respond to his advance at
first, even though he turns her on. Her initial restraint makes
her eventual capitulation that much more delicious. Her particular
circumstances (age, marital status, financial position) also have
something to do with why I found this story to be as entertaining
as I did. It would not be the same story if they were two single,
twenty-somethings.
There is something about the author's writing ability that
transcends the story. What I mean is that it isn't just the story
(that appeals to me) but also how the author tells the story. She
does not focus singly on the sex. She does use a lot of words to
describe how Maggie is feeling before during and after she gives
in to Josh.
|