OoPS: 16

Title	Dandelions
Author	Mat Twassel
Story Code(s)	M/F/F
Length	1,600 words
Rating	8.5
Summary	Mark, Pat, and Julie are taking a walk of a nice spring day. Pat and Julie spend some time comparing Mark's tool to a dandelion.
Commentary	This was a nice little vignette. It had a surrealistic feel to it. It also had a very naturalistic feel to it. It was sex in the outdoors. Like any vignette this was not really story, but I liked it a lot. The whole thing was very understated; no sudden orgasms or violent eruptions. A very nice piece.