Alley of OoPS: The Hot Tub Seduction


 
TITLE:The Hot Tub Seduction
AUTHOR:Janelle
LENGTH:6,200 words
MAIN CHARACTER:Female
COMBINATION(S):Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Older Female-Younger Male
Infidelity
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
 
 

SUMMARY: Paula is married and has two children, all of whom happen to be upstairs, asleep when she is seduced in her hot tub by Brendan, a college student.

 
 

COMMENTARY: I really enjoyed this story. The author does a great job building the tension. Paula experiences a mixture of emotions, including lust and guilt. She wants Brendan, but she can't seem to forget that she is married. Brendan isn't quite as fleshed out as Paula is, but I don't think that really matters since the two elements that dominate this story are her dilemma and how she resolves it.

The sex is steamy, but there is more to it than just sex. I've think that most people should enjoy this story.

 

Alley of OoPS