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I
wanted to ask her why she stayed and let Lou treat her like this
but I was afraid of being too personal. I wanted her to be happy
but not at the expense of my pleasure sitting here with her next
to me. Which was screwed up because I was married. I was excited
and anxious; interested to see what Lou would do next and afraid
of how far this all may go. Both of them pretended they knew when
to stop.
Tony's
Girl
is
about what happens when two men meet in a bar and a pretty girl
joins them. One of the men is a talker and he has ideas. The other
mostly just watches.
This
story was written in the winter of 2007-2008 and is about 8,600
words long.
There
is no graphic sex, though there is lots of sex talk. Partial nudity
and public masturbation (but not that public).
Tony's
Girl can be read here, as a single webpage.
Writing
the Story:
Elements
of the story came from several sources. A couple of years ago there
was a blog called "The Cee Word" by a slave. She told
the story in one post of being at a bar with her master and several
of his friends and because he wanted her to, she masturbated in
one of the booths while they stood around and watched. She took
awhile but eventually was able to reach orgasm.
Other
parts of the story are derived from events in my life or from stories
lovers have told me. Everything is so jumbled up nothing in the
story is based on a particular event or person.
Tony's
Girl was fun to write. The actual writing took five evenings.
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