A View On Writing Erotica - tenyari's VoiceWords and thoughts from the mind of an <a href="http://www.asstr.org/~tenyari/">online writer of erotic fiction</a> - what I have to say about life and what I do.tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-72405692006-04-16T20:50:11ZBlogger
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truetenyari2006-04-16T07:00:00-07:002006-04-16T20:50:11Z2006-04-16T14:02:39Ztag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7240569.post-114519615963376069Another story, my hopeful next after I finish my Alandra piece.Here's a little prelude of something I've been working on...
About half of chapter one... not yet edited :)
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Title: Justicia Cabrera - Naked Cop
Author: Tenyari
Part: 1
Universe: Naked Future
Keywords: MF FF cons rom viol interr F-solo exhib bi (F) ScFi NiS Naked
Summary: After Justicia busts a mob boss, she becomesfalsetenyari2006-04-07T09:28:00-07:002006-04-11T01:44:27Z2006-04-07T17:35:05Ztag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7240569.post-114443130508279936Rape fiction, and a feminist counter pointThis formed the bulk of a recent email I sent:
I know a lot of men around here seem to think rape is a topic for action and humor, a chance for their hero to lord it over the women he controls by showing how helpless they are without his aid... But for many, it is a shock to personal past horrors to even breach the topic, let alone describe it in detail. I personally know many women who arefalsetenyari2006-04-05T12:14:00-07:002006-04-06T07:30:17Z2006-04-05T19:24:28Ztag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7240569.post-114426506847606189Last chapter of Alandra coming ... soon ... A previewThe last chapter of Alandra is coming soon. I'm in writing on the final portions, where I have to build up what essentially amounts to a tragic climax for our 'heroine' of her own design...
A downfall based on elements I hope have been properly hidden into the previous chapters. However this project took me three years more than I expected it to, so I might have to go back and edit to make sure,falsetenyari2005-12-29T20:19:00-08:002005-12-30T04:31:18Z2005-12-30T04:31:18Ztag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7240569.post-113591707872242002Thinking of writing an erotic comic bookSee this cover image.
I'm thinking of writing an erotic comic book after I finish Alandra (Hopefully that will actually come to pass).
The idea is roughly -
Our protagonist would be trapped in a nude world, and must overcome a series of challenges to win some prize / santcuary / safety...
The usual 'in a strange land story', wherein the hero/heroine seeks to get some great deed done in order tofalsetenyari2005-11-27T17:04:00-08:002005-11-28T02:22:00Z2005-11-28T01:48:10Ztag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7240569.post-113314249005787406We can't do no grammar fix'n less you tells us.Now that I've written up a short piece on dialog, it seems only right to follow that up with a simple request to my readers.
If you see grammar errors in my writing, let me know.
Most writers want to know what they've done wrong. Those that don't, well, probably shouldn't be writing...
Sure, some grammar errors are going to be intentional, like a bit of dialog saying something like: (bear withfalsetenyari2005-11-14T23:12:00-08:002005-11-15T07:44:06Z2005-11-15T07:37:10Ztag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7240569.post-113204023092109854DialogDo I write good, or at least decent dialog? I don't know, but like any critic I've begun to get a little full of myself with the notion of what should be in good dialog.
I think we all know that porn is the last place one would ever find good dialog. The same is often true in the 'stroke' variety of erotica.
When I first started writing I read a few guides on dialog, and the best bits of advicefalsetenyari2005-11-11T16:36:00-08:002005-11-12T07:42:14Z2005-11-12T01:41:26Ztag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7240569.post-113175968623408409Legalizing prostitution (in the American context)?Gut reaction, yes or no?
Given who is likely to be my readership here I suspect most of you went through something like;
'Heck yeah, then I could bang those chicks and get away with it!' (at which point I have a mental image of 'Glen Quagmire' from Family Guy saying 'giggity giggity'...
You're then probably going to have 'moral second thoughts' at some later point in time when you 'think aboutfalse