A Summer at the Comeuppance Lodge Part 2
copyright 2007 by SusieQue, all rights reserved
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A Summer at the Comeuppance Lodge
a fictional story written by SusieQue
The Roberts children were their usual unpleasant selves on the long plane ride to their destination. To their delight no one told them to be quiet or to stop doing anything, but there were these 2 peculiar men sitting in back of them writing the whole time, who were now debarking the plane with them and announced they were their escorts to the bus that would take them to camp.
Once on the bus, the children marveled at the beautiful scenery and began to get excited about camp. "I wonder if there's horseback riding...or archery", Jordan pondered to the total delight of their escorts. When the bus started making its climb up the road to their destination Jordan read "Comeuppance? what does that mean?" His siblings shook their heads.
When they pulled into the parking lot of the huge complex the children felt uneasy with how clean..yet..Spartan the accommodations seemed to be it didn't really look like a fun place. "LOOK!" shouted Rebecca. Four noses pressed against the window..saw 5 children of varying ages totally naked and weeding a garden in the hot summer sun, occasionally swatting at a bug of some sort..when one stood up too long swatting and not weeding, a stern hefty man standing nearby with a stout switch in his hand, soundly applied the switch to the upper legs of the swatting child to piercing cries of "OWWWWWWWWWWWIEEEEEEEEEE" and the child quickly went back to work on the weeds. The Roberts children chuckled at the silly cry of owie but seemed uneasy at what they were seeing.
Once the bus stopped the children were quickly escorted off the bus and marched to a line of what looked like hitching posts of varying heights with assorted leathers, boards, sticks either propped up next to them or draped over the posts, and 4 stern looking husky men dressed in faded overalls, flannel shirts, full beards and wild hair with wild eyes, each with a kerchief hanging from their pocket. All looked muscular and were taller than average and all but one was quite overweight with considerable bellies. The largest and scariest of them stepped forward, and spoke. "Welcome to Comeuppance Lodge, the rules are carved on the board over there (he pointed) on our welcome tree. Read them, know them and live them. From this moment forward not knowing or following them would result in severe consequences."
The children went to the tree and started to read:
You are all here because your behavioral and obedience issues could not be resolved in the real world. You have now entered a new world that will correct any issues you have anyway it takes.
1. no personal items or clothing are allowed everything you came here with is to be deposited in the welcome bin immediately after you read this.
2. No contact with your family or friends..for the summer we are your family and these are your friends.
3. You are to refer to all adults as either ma'am or sir and all adults you encounter here are either daddy sir or mommy ma'am.
4. You will do anything and everything you are told to do by an adult here without question or hesitation or endure painful corporal punishment.
5. You must NEVER touch or cover your genital area out of modesty and hands are always at your sides unless told to do otherwise.
6. When you are punished you may not break position nor may you ever rub. You are allowed to cry out but the only word you may say is "owie", when your punishment is over you may or may not be allowed to do the owie dance at the discretion of your punisher. If your punisher says you may do the owie dance these are the requirements, hands must be on head fingers interlaced, you must hop or jump from foot to foot..no 2 feet can be on the ground at the same time for more than a second or two and you must constantly say Owie the whole time you are dancing. You are expected to spin and twirl, jump and crouch, and constantly say owie. When the dance is done you will have a 30 minute display time during which your spanked flesh will be on display and you will stand quietly and your hands will not leave your head.
7. When asked a question you will make eye contact when not your eyes will be downward. Correct answers are yes sir and no sir never yeah ok.
8. All older residents in the program will be frequently shaved or waxed of genital hair and boys heads will be shaved and girls have hair no longer than shoulder length worn in tight pigtails or ponytails and procedures needed to adhere to these rules will be carried out frequently and harshly.
9. The rest of the rules you will learn as you go along <evil grin>
Proceed to the welcome bin take off all your clothes and deposit anything you have in the bin. NOW!!
All 4 of the children were openly sobbing now, and Jeffrey was peeing himself, hoping no one would notice. The children were nudged by their escorts to move towards the bin. Slowly they all sobbing and shaking..started to undress and deposit their clothes in the bin. Embarrassed hands went to cover genital areas, and the 4 burly men each grabbed for the closest implement and started to wail on any child attempting to cover up. "yeouch!! Owwww STOP DON'T were all heard coming from the children..and the escorts continued to write. One of the men stepped forward. He spoke "Jordan!" "y-y-yes sir daddy" a trembling Jordan stammered. Proceed to bend over the wooden crossbar closest to your waist height, bend as far over it as you can, spread your legs wide and stretch your arms forward. NOW!!" Jordan moved to the proper bar and did exactly as he was told. He trembled and flinched at the vulnerability he felt and shivered as a cool breeze washed over his dangling chubby cock and heavy totally exposed and visible balls. he felt the blood rush to his genital area as his cock began to grow and harden and his balls seemed to swell up and droop lower. "Now the rest of you go grab your brothers hands and do NOT let him go or it will mean more severe consequences for you all"! "yes sir daddy" they all muttered and James and Jeffrey grabbed one arm and Rebecca grabbed the other. Stern eyes shot towards the children "Got Him??" "Yes sir daddy" they all chimed together. Jordan started to clench his chubby buttocks and with a vicious yank downward on his genitals by daddy, and an stern "NO CLENCHING" Jordan let out a yelp of OWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.............ie" Remembering at the last moment the proper word to yelp hoping it was acceptable. "Nice save" said his daddy...Jordans cock and balls were throbbing so badly that he was barely able to let out a "thannnkkkk youuu daddy sir" "If you do not have the self control to keep from clenching we have ways of training you to do so, but I highly recommend you use your own will power to remain loose in the buttock area to allow for proper punishment of your naughty fat ass." One of the escorts handed the daddy a piece of paper, he looked it over and announced "For acts of rudeness, misbehavior, irresponsibility and for the breaking of rules you are hereby sentenced to a welcome spanking of 20 lashes with the strap, across the buttocks, and 10 lashes with a green cut switch across your upper and lower legs followed by 2 laps around the race track pulling me in the rickshaw as you run around the track strapped into a harness pulling me. If you go too slow I will have a whip I can lash you with wherever I see fit to speed you up. Because of your disgusting weight you will spend a lot of time on the track. After your punishment, you will be shown to your living quarters and bathed by your house mothers and put to bed. Now relax your buttocks here we go!" Jordan found it in himself to relax and yelped the appropriate "OWIES" as his legs trembled and urine started spurting out as his helpless cock bobbed and jiggled under the impact of the punishment on his frame. Trying to stop the flow of urine he inadvertently clenched his buttocks and on stroke 7 his daddy stopped and said "I'm not surprised a disgusting fat ass like you couldn't control his clench" With that he reached into his shirt pocket and pulled out something that looked like a large cork from a wine bottle. He put it in his mouth and slobbered all over it as if to thoroughly wet it down. "Let go of his hands", "Yes sir daddy" the obedient children immediately let go of his hands. "Now Jordan listen very carefully do NOT rub..but simply reach back and pull your buttocks as far apart as you can and hold them apart til I tell you to let go." "yes sir daddy" Jordan did as he was told and let out a low pitiful "owwwwwwie" as his hands clenched his already reddened and welted previously un-spanked behind. He pulled as far apart as he could them was told "Now relax your butthole" he did as he was told and suddenly a painful and abrasive thrust filled his virgin butthole with pain and stinging and embarrassment. The other children gasped as they saw his puckered hole stretched to a circle the size of a nickel. "Excellent, now stretch your arms out like before the rest of you hold on to him" "yes sir daddy" they all said and moved into position. "Now try to clench your cheeks Jordan" daddy chuckled. "owwwwwie..I-I-I cannnn't daddy sir" "Exactly" daddy's eyes glistened as one hand playfully bounced around Jordans jingly loose butt cheeks, and the other hand clearly grabbed and rubbed his own genital area. The strapping continued and Jordan although sobbing and wriggling with pain did yell only "owies" and did not break position. Just as soon as the strapping stopped, daddy picked up a green switch dipped it in a barrel of saltwater and commenced whipping Jordan about the legs ankles and thighs. Jordan danced and yelped pitiful owies but his siblings did not let him break his position. As soon as that was over, Daddy yanked Jordan to a standing position and told him to put his hands on his head. Jordan said "yes sir daddy" and immediately complied. behind him the rickshaw was already in place once strapped in to the rickshaw, Daddy climbed in the cab and said "run boy!" Jordan replied "yes sir daddy" and began to jog towards the track, huffing and puffing like an old man.
"Lift those feet higher boy prance like a show horse," Daddy yelled as he struck Jordan with the whip on the outside of his left hip striping him almost down to his ankle. "yessss sir daddy Owieeeeeee Owie Owieeeee" he yelped as he tried to prance. Being very out of shape Jordan slowed down for the second lap and received several lashes with the whippy buggy whip making him lurch and leap and wish he had exercised more! Finally he had made the last lap and almost collapsed with exhaustion. After being unstrapped from the harness daddy said, Run and stand by your siblings" "Yes sir daddy and thank you for correcting me"
The largest of the 4 men stepped forward. He was the scariest of all and all 4 children cringed. "Rebecca!" he bellowed. "yes sir daddy Rebecca said as she stepped forward. "you know what to do young lady don't aggravate me by making me repeat it all MOVE NOW!!!" "yes sir daddy' she said as she moved to her proper height bar and bent herself over the bar, spreading her legs and stretching out her arms. Her siblings quickly grabbed her arms. Daddy couldn't help but notice that not only did Rebecca move quickly, but she also kept her cheeks unclenched and actually seemed to be raising her buttocks up to meet their fate with wicked anticipation. The escort handed her daddy a paper, after scanning over it he announced "Rebecca for acts of rudeness, meanness, socially unacceptable behavior and violation of lodge rules you are hereby sentenced to a welcome spanking of 20 lashes from the 3 armed tawse applied liberally to the sit down spot of your buttocks with legs spread far apart- Rebecca widened her stance without being told-special aim being taken to adequately redden your genital area without mercy to your cries, lashes will be hard and fast and will not stop til all 20 have been delivered. Rebecca heaved a huge sigh of air as her chest expanded and deflated in anticipation of what's to come. Daddy reached down and felt her buttocks..hmmm..firm..yet loose and unclenched she had one of the most spankable bottoms he had ever seen. Her pussy was already swollen and glistening with moisture as it winked slightly in anticipation of what was coming when daddy ran his hands over her engorged adolescent sexual organ. "Ready?" "yes sir daddy I'm ready" she said as she lifted her buttocks higher to meet the tawse. "no clenching" "Yes sir daddy I remember I won't clench"
Her daddy felt his cock and balls swelling and hardening and he reached down and unzipped the long fly on his overalls and pulled his cock and balls out to a huge sigh of relief. The children's eyes went to his huge cock and he yelled "Eyes down unless spoken to! " "Yes sir daddy" they said as their eyes shot to the ground. Rebecca squirmed and writhed and owied such pitiful cries daddy almost felt sorry for her. Not once did she clench or try to get up. When it was over daddy told her that she could owie dance. She remembered the owie dance perfectly and began immediately as soon as she was released. As she hopped in place several times her thighs brushed against daddy's exposed cock, but his hard throbbing member brushing her leg as well as his moans of pleasurable discomfort went unnoticed to her as she bobbed and leapt and screeched consecutive owies as her little mosquito bites of breasts danced up and down tiny nipples rock hard. Moisture spurting from her soaked punished pussy also splashed on daddy's cock furthering his "heavenly discomfort". When she was told to stop dancing, she took her place beside her siblings. Her reddened and tear streaked face still managed to shoot daddy a little smile, even as her knees quivered her thighs felt weak and her pussy burned and stung from harsh lashes and ached to be rubbed. The last 2 daddies each grabbed a twin by the shoulder and said "you may take your charges to their quarters we know you still have much shaving and hair cutting to do. We can handle the sentence of these 2 little buggers alone, James! over my knee now!" as he settled into a large chair.."yyyess sir daddy" ..James said as he lifted his lead feet one after the other to the chair to lay across his daddies lap ..."for a long slow and hard bare ass hand spanking of 100 spanks" his daddy continued, "sure to blister your naughty bottom for its offenses of the day" "Jeffrey same for you get across my lap as well for 100 hand spanks followed by 5 hard strokes with the privates paddle" , daddy held up the implement that looked like a riding crop with a short (4-5") 2 fingered tawse with a 3rd middle finger of a barely visible thin flexible nylon "rod" no bigger in diameter than the stick on a sucker with a nylon "ball" on the end slightly larger than a BB used in BB guns, "applied of course to your private area for the offense of peeing upon arrival" Jeffrey was bawling and said "yes sir daddy" as he ran to get in position for the spanking feeling like he was protecting his little twig and berries for at least a short time. The boys were spanked almost unison and their increasingly urgent cries of "owie" sounded like an angelic cry for mercy.
When Jeffery's spanking stopped he was quickly flipped over to a sharp OWIE as his painful bum lay hard on his daddies lap. Daddy raised the private paddle high in the air and THWACK!!! the two fingers of the tawse stung the sides of Jeffery's penis and landed HARD on his tiny testicles..and the middle whippy finger with the ball whipped around and
stung the tender tip of his penis just like he had been shot with a BB gun. His body uncontrollably twitched and almost levitated off daddies lap and before he could even catch his breath from the first whack the second, third, fourth and fifth fell as he twitched and gasped and felt such immeasurable pain..that he couldn't even cry out. Hetwitched and writhed glossy eyed snot bubbles coming from his nose and his balls were swelling and discolored, his little penis was red, striped and chubby with swelling and his velvet tender tip was the deepest darkest crimson it could be, covered with round welts that looked like his innocent tip had been stung by 5 bees. When his punishment was done he was raised to his feet and hands on head he felt every ounce of his blood rush to his genital area and his cock and balls felt like they weighed 100 lbs. He wanted to cup them so badly and fan them to ease the burn, but he dared not move. The boys were then marched to their separate compounds, their heads shaved, roughly bathed by their house mommies and plunked into bed, left in the dark to ponder their plight and try to sleep through the pain..they both knew..this was only the beginning....
Over in Rebecca's compound, her wild and free hair was roughly brushed and pulled into 2 tight and high pigtails..then a thick pair of shears cut close to 20 inches off each pigtail. She was then laid flat on a table and hot wax was applied to the peach fuzz in her genital area and she was waxed smooth as the day she was born again. Just then daddy came in..and inserted his fat finger into her private hole..and nodded that hymen was intact. He then yanked her off the table and smacked her soundly and told her to go to bed. Minutes after she settled in bed a bright flashlight was shined in her face. the flashlight was then turned to the face of the person holding the flashlight, her daddy, and his face looked scary and threatening lit in that way in the dark of the night. He grabbed her arm tightly, ands spoke in a stern voice "If you think that acting like you like being spanked and teasing my cock is going to make this summer easy on you, you've got another thing coming little girl. I am here to correct your ill behavior not encourage it and if I have to beat you til the cows come home to make you whimper and plead for mercy and reprieve from your ordeal and sob like a little girl instead of a teasing nymph then you can bet I'll do it. I'll whip you with every implement known to man until you are reduced to the baby you are. ONLY when you realize that the ones that sport THIS" the flashlight shot to his crotch where he was firmly gripping his cock and balls and waving them for emphasis "are the ones that dominate this world then and only then..will you begin your path to being a woman. So play your little tart role with me again young lady and I will flail the flesh from your hide til you look like road kill. DO we understand each other?"
"yyyyessss sir daddy" she whispered. "Rollover and stick your bare butt up in the air, face in your pillow NOW!" Rebecca did so and cried into her pillow and trembled at the thought of another stroke of punishment landing on her tormented flesh. She braced in anticipation..she heard something that sounded kind of "squishy" and within a few minutes felt something hot and sticky squirt on her buttocks. A rough hand rubbed it into her painful welts then she was pushed down into the bed and covered up. "THAT was because of you..don't let it happen again!" "yessss sir daddy" she said..not knowing what happened..the stickiness was uncomfortable..but at the same time..interesting..as was the odor that permeated under the covers of her new bed....
Over in Jordans compound the waxing was more extensive and painful than Rebecca's, the head shaving actually felt good..and after a rough bath..Jordan asked his stern mommy for some ice to put on his aching genital area. Her eyes widened with fire and she threw back Jordans covers, rolled him onto his back and holding both his wrists in one of her amazingly strong hands, she started HARD and fast hand spanking Jordans already tender tormented cock and balls. He cried out and pleaded in shock and tried to wriggle out of the line of rapid fire of relentless hard stinging spanks. she continued to spank until his entire area from just below his navel to the crease between his legs and torso to the tender thighs just below his package was bright glowing red. When she finally stopped as the boy painfully sobbed she said "You are punished to feel pain! We do NOT allow rubbing nor administering ice, pain relievers or anything to mask the pain you were meant to endure!! Do not ever ask for something like that again!!" "Yes ma'am mommy" the boy wailed. "Now as an added punishment you will sleep tonight without covers and sleep on your back so that the guardians and I can treat your fat little package to some treatments that won't let you forget this night for a long time." "Yes ma'am mommy I'm sorry" He was afraid to sleep but the days ordeal had been just too much and he soon drifted off. During the course of the night...guardians giggled and pointed at his tormented cock and laughed at his disgusting blubber..but they did nothing to him..but next morning..when he awoke..and began examining himself to see what been done..watchful guardians came out of nowhere it seemed..and said "JORDAN??? Why are you playing with yourself???