Picking up speed, her fingers squeezed more tightly around him, pumping him now, determined, strict, disciplined. Pumping.
Laurie was an efficient, fastidious woman, one of those people you could hand a task to, and then forget it. She used to be funny and spontaneous too, but nowadays that seemed to be left behind. Thursday was turning into a real bitch as well, the boss making incoherent and unreasonable demands; the rest of the staff working in the hot office as though their feet were dragging in molasses; the summer heat searing through the windows despite the dirt; the rattling air conditioning completely unable to cope.
Sweat, paper and stale smoke infested clothing all contributed to the familiar overpowering stench, but hey, this was publishing. How could it be otherwise?
Finally reaching the relative sanity of her desk, Laurie slumped in her chair, damp with the heat, unable to think any more. Just as her butt hit the cushion, her phone started to ring yet again. Summoning more strength from God knows where, she leaned forward and lifted the receiver.
"McBride Publishing. Can I help?"
"Yes, could I speak to Laurie Crandell please?"
"You're Mrs Crandell?"
"Yes. How can I help?"
"Mrs Crandell, it's the police. I'm afraid there has been an accident."
"Oh no, God no, what is it?"
"It's your husband Mrs Crandell. He's been involved in a collision with another vehicle. He's in the hospital now. He's in a stable condition."
"Stable? What the hell does 'stable' mean?"
"You'd have to discuss that further with the medical personnel Mrs Crandell. Could I give you some contact details?"
"Oh, well, yes of course. But how badly hurt is he?"
"I can't answer that Ma'am. You need to speak with Doctor Leeston at the hospital."
"Leeston? Right. Oh God. Thanks for calling. I'm sorry, I'm not thinking straight."
"That's alright. I'd be worse if it was me. Listen, can you get to the hospital?"
"Why, yes, my car's in the basement. I'll leave right away."
"Fine. Sorry to have such bad news."
Laurie placed the receiver again quietly, suddenly impervious to the surrounding insanity, picked up her backpack from beside the desk and walked out of the office, ignoring the questions and the looks.
Opening the door quietly, and peeking through into the dim room, Laurie relaxed, alone with Dennis finally. The meetings with the doctors, and the endless parade of explanations, diagrams, x-rays, good wishes and prayers behind her for now.
Dragging an armchair beside the bed, she looked at her unmoving husband with love and hope, making the effort to ignore the dire predictions from the staff. His coma was temporary. She knew. No matter what.
Settling into the chair, her tiredness overcame her, and within a few minutes, the warmth and the gloom conspired to allow her body to give in to sleep.
She couldn't tell what it was that woke her in the dark quiet room. A quick glance at the wall clock confirmed it for her. It was just after three in the morning. She could feel the pleasant weight of an old fashioned blanket over her lap. A nurse must have been in and put it there. She was silently thankful for the anonymous thoughtfulness.
Even though she was still very tired, sleepiness had deserted her for a time, and she looked across at the bed, her still husband a dark silhouette in front of the curtains. As she idly watched, she realised that she should be seeing the outline of a blanket, rather than the familiar body, and she hopped up off the chair for a closer look.
It was readily apparent what had happened. The bedcovers must not have been straight, and their weight had pulled them to the floor. Dennis, clad only in boxers was lying on his side on the bed, without any blankets at all.
Bending to the floor and retrieving the blankets, Laurie began to replace them on the bed, but noticed something interesting. Where Dennis' boxers were bunched up at the top of his legs, his penis protruded from his fly, a full erect penis, unexpected in the hospital bed, despite its routine familiarity around the home.
Stopping with the blanket still in her hand, she took the opportunity to look more closely at the organ, somehow impotent despite its physical state. She dropped the blankets then, and took the erection into her hand gently. Dennis didn't react in any noticeable way, except that his penis jerked a little in her gentle grip. Stroking it lightly now in her fingers, she noticed that it quivered gently with each slide of her hand.
She couldn't decide now if she was intrigued, aroused or disgusted, but her hand continued as if of its own accord, up and down the warm length of it, a gentle but firm caress. Her continued attentions had caused the penis to grow a little in size, and the increase of angle was pressing the hardness up against the boxers in a way that could not be comfortable.
Stopping now, and looking around, just to make sure they were still alone, she gently eased the boxers off him as best she could, lifting the cloth carefully over the erectness, and started to slide them down his legs. Unable to move his weight effectively enough, Laurie stopped for a moment, moved a little further up his body, and pushed him over onto his back. His erection immediately took pride of place in the silhouette, and she promptly forgot about removing his boxers, and returned her attention to the part of his body which was obviously attracting a large blood supply.
Taking him into both hands now, she stroked the length of him, long and slow, dragging her fingertips over the quivering tip of it, damp now with the lubrication seeping from him. Up and down, sensuous sawing movements, one hand now gently stroking the surface of his scrotum, feeling the pressure of his testicles through the thin cover without applying any substantial pressure of her own, as she knew he hated it.
She could tell her rubbing was reaching a culmination now, the jerking of the muscles within his hard handle more severe, more frequent, more profound in some indescribable fashion.
Picking up speed, her fingers squeezed more tightly around him, pumping him now, determined, strict, disciplined. Pumping.
Suddenly she could feel a distinct rise in muscle tension, and the penis tried to jerk away from her caresses, the muscles pulling it upward toward Dennis' stomach, and the power deep within him clenched in silent pleasure as he orgasmed, shooting gobs of white stickiness over his chest and stomach, Laurie's fingers, and finally dribbling down within the dark mound of hair around his slowly drooping penis.
Coming to her senses suddenly, Laurie rushed to grab some tissues to clean up the mess, gently wiped the wetness from his body, and then turned him to his side again before completing the postponed task of replacing the blankets over his now warm body. His still immobile face showed no signs of the recent exertion, his sleep continuing regardless.
Sitting in the armchair again, Laurie paused to consider her somewhat unusual reactions to the erection, a smile on her face as she thought how much Dennis liked her to masturbate him, and how seldom she wanted to take part. As she thought over the whole episode she realised that she felt more aroused than disgusted, and indeed could feel a somewhat unusual tingling now, deep between her legs, under her skirt, her panties.
Without conscious thought, she pulled the small blanket back over the chair, gently hiked her skirt up invisibly with her hand, and crossed her legs with seeming innocence on the chair. Placing both hands down under the blanket, she had easy access to the tingling area with complete privacy.
Reaching down now with one hand, she felt the damp heat through her thin panties, a rush of warmth passing through the rest of her body as her fingertips traced a thin gentle line up the centre of her panties, feeling the dampness seeping through. Pushing the panties gently aside with one hand, she dipped the other hand inside the slipperiness, an unwarranted but ever present guilty blush unseen on her face as her fingertips slid up between her labia, dropping into the source of the moisture and picking up lubrication before moving up to the erect desperate source of the tingle.
A wet hot finger travelled erratically, and erotically, around the pleasure point, her clitoris desperate for stimulation, nervous and apprehensive of bad handling, as always. Laurie hadn't done this for a very long time, and certainly never in a place as public as a hospital room, but the dark quiet of the room, the recent seduction of her innocent husband, and the time of the night contributed to her relaxation, and eventually her finger descended directly on the clitoris, crossing ever faster over the hardness, the wet finger slipping almost frictionlessly, transferring a little excitement on every pass.
Rubbing frantically now, squeezing skin against slippery skin, she could feel the orgasm coming, a hot flush travelling through her entire body, from the extremities to her clitoris, her finger, her mind. Speeding up even more, she felt her body pass the point of resistance, sensed the over stimulation of the nerve endings, picked up the rise in respiration and heartbeat, and then she was over the edge, her nerves exploded in orgasm, and she groaned, not caring now about the noise, as her muscles clenched and released like a factory assembly line, pumping pleasure pulses through her tired mind, slamming release at her body.
She sat there, shaking and quivering in the after effects until she felt able to uncross her strained legs, and the movements sent aftershocks up and down her body as she pulled her panties back where they belonged, straightened her skirt, and carefully lay the blanket over the top again.
As she pondered in the dark, considering what had happened, her tired body and mind gradually took over again, and slowly she drifted off into a dream filled sleep.
The next time Laurie woke, it was daytime. Light was filtering around the edges of the dark drapes, the room lights were flickering into action, and a young nurse was fussing around with pillows and a thermometer, entering numbers into the inevitable chart before hanging it again on the end of the bed.
"Oh, hello. You must be Mrs Crandell. Sorry to wake you."
"Laurie. Call me Laurie. And it's not a problem. I don't know how I slept so long."
"You looked very peaceful there Laurie, but I need to check on your husband's temperature. Nothing happened in the night then?"
"Oh.. oh, ah, no, well, the blankets fell off, and I put them back, but that's all."
"Okay, fine. Sometimes we get some erratic movements from patients in this condition. Just needed to check."
"Oh, okay. No, nothing to report."
"Great. How about you get some breakfast then, while I finish checking things out here?'
"Good idea. I'll be back soon."
Laurie escaped from the room as quickly as she could, embarrassed now by what seemed perfectly reasonable the night before. Walking quickly down the hallway, past a random seeming selection of ward doors, she suddenly had her doubts as to whether the entire episode actually happened, or whether she just dreamed it all.
Reaching the elevator, and flicking the button to call the car, she decided, in her usual efficient fashion, to put the whole thing out of her mind for now. She could consider it when more time presented itself. It seemed unlikely that today would provide that opportunity.
A few minutes later, as she slumped thankfully in a chair in the hospital café, hot coffee and breakfast in front of her, the insanity of daily life caught up with her, beginning with the urgent demands of her cellphone. A series of breakfast interruptions included the office, Dennis' sister, her own family, Dennis' employer, and the office again. She fobbed them all off, as she could do so well, delegating tasks and responsibilities to whoever would take them, planning to stay at the hospital with Dennis whatever happened.
Returning to his room with the plan securely in place, she switched off the phone and returned it to her bag, determined not to touch it again today. What followed was an impressive progression of visits: doctors, nurses, relatives, friends, flower deliveries. Laurie presided over the whole process, greeting, explaining as best she could, farewelling. Promises to contact people were made and forgotten through the day, and she managed to have another couple of meals with various people in the café without really noticing.
Suddenly it was evening again, the visitors had all gone, and the nurses were organising for the quiet time of the night. Laurie sat in the now familiar chair once more, and tried to straighten the day out in her mind. She'd learned very little about the prognosis for Dennis. Everyone seemed to be taking a wait-and-see approach, and avoided discussing any hard facts with her. She understood the approach. Publishing involved a fair amount of bullshit as well.
The dim warm room was not conducive to deep thoughts however, and as she sat watching her immobile husband, the tension and lack of sleep started to catch up with her, and she nodded off in the chair again.
Waking suddenly, eyes wide open as a metal dish was dropped in a nearby room, she looked around her. Everything shared a strange resemblance to the previous night. Dark, warm and late, quiet again after the metallic clang that woke her. Again someone had placed a blanket over her lap, and a pillow behind her head.
Looking around, she noticed that her husband's blankets had remained in place tonight, but the shadowy light from the street outside lit up his silhouette again. This time he was lying on his back, and a distinct bulge was visible above his thighs.
Curious, and embarrassingly aroused again, now sure that the previous night's adventures actually happened, she hopped up and approached the bed, eager to check under the blankets to see what state Dennis was in.
Just as she got near the bed, the door swung quietly open, and the room was bathed with a yellowy glow from the hallway. Rather than blur the bump in the bedcovers as she might have expected, the glow highlighted the shape, making it obvious to anyone who looked toward the bed. That included the nurse who strolled through the doorway. She looked across at Laurie, then at the bed. Smiling then, she spoke quietly.
"Don't worry Mrs Crandell. It happens all the time. Not just with comas either. We're used to it. Just ignore it, and it will go away after a while. We always seem to think it's a good sign. You know, that there can't be too much wrong with him if he can do that."
"Oh, I wasn't sure what to think."
"Nothing. Think nothing of it."
"If you say so."
"I do. He must be handy around the house, Mrs Crandell." With a grin.
And she giggled, despite herself. "Oh, he is. He is. And it's Laurie."
"Alright Laurie. Sorry to wake you. Get some more sleep. I won't be back until the morning."
"Thanks. I'll just talk to Dennis for a while first."
"Do that. Night."
As she left, Laurie's eyes were drawn back to the bed, and she reached over and pulled down the covers. As he husband's body was slowly uncovered, his chest muscles were apparent. Dennis had been working out lately, and it showed. Lower, his stomach was firm and flat. Lifting the covers over the protrusion, she could see his erection plainly.
His large penis was standing well at attention, pressed close to his body, having found its way through the waistband of his boxers this time. Reaching forward without hesitation now, she pulled the boxers down a little, releasing the firm tissue from the trap, and his penis popped up almost vertically, and she stood and stared at it for a time.
Taking the firm flesh in her hands, she began to stroke it, like she had the night before, gently but firmly squeezing it between her fingers, pumping her hands up and down its rigidity. After a while, common sense having taken a break, her actions governed by her feelings for once, she leaned forward, and licked across the tip of it with her tongue, the smooth skin comfortable on her tongue, swirling around the tip now, the whole rod jumping erratically as the muscles jerked in response.
As her fingers and mouth were busy at their task, her mind had a sudden idea. The rational part of her put the idea aside more than once, but it was insistent in its insanity, and eventually she gave in.
Moving away from Dennis for a moment, she reached up under her short skirt, looking at the door quickly before pulling her panties down her smooth legs, and removing her bare feet from them. Stopping again, she completely threw sense out the window, and slowly undid her blouse in the quiet next to the bed, threw it to the floor with the panties, and unclipped her bra. Her breasts felt cool and free, released from their prison, and she held them for a moment, thumbtips stroking the erect nipples. She smiled again, surprising herself once more. She hadn't done that for years. Reaching down to her waist now, she unclipped the skirt, and it fell soundlessly from her naked cool body.
Clambering up on the high bed now, she crouched over Dennis, her knees either side of his waist, and bent down to kiss him on the still lips, her nipples tracing a line on his chests, the skin dragging delightfully over him. As she lowered her body over him, she could feel the pressure of his erection on her pubic mound, and only a little movement was required to move him down slightly, the head of it brushing delightfully across her swelling clitoris and down between her soaking labia before settling in the entrance to her vagina, slippery with her excitement.
Pushing back slightly with her knees, she gently impaled herself on him, her nerves registering the thickness of the tip of his erection sliding deep within her. Eventually she had slowly slid all the way down the length of him, and sat there, revelling in the full feeling, the control, the power over his body and hers.
As she grew accustomed to the feeling, she started to move over him, raising and lowering herself slowly, with some inbuilt sense of rhythm. She could tell from the feel of him that he wouldn't last too long. That was alright. She was in no shape for a long bout herself, her body hot and wet, muscles tight.
Rubbing her hands through sparse hair on his tight chest now, she slowly increased her speed, his smooth wetness sliding effortlessly within hers, his body reacting to the stimulation with movement itself, lifting his hips to increase the effect of her thrusts, pumping in time with Laurie, a single well oiled machine.
As nice as the feeling was at this point, Laurie felt the pressure to complete the cycle, and her long relaxed movements became short and fast as did her breathing, her body driving her to release.
Suddenly three things happened at once: The pressure on and around her clitoris became too much to bear, and her muscles contracted in glorious orgasm, pleasure flooding her stressed body; Dennis' penis muscles tightened and exploded deep within her, releasing a seeming torrent of heat in her most private place; and Dennis lifted his arms, taking her breasts in his hands, and squeezed them intimately, as only he could.
Still moving as she wound down above her husband, Laurie looked down to see Dennis smiling at her, his confused look asking what the hell was going on, but happy nonetheless.
"Hello sweetie. Nice of you to wake up. I'll explain it all."
"That's alright Laurie. Must be the best way in the world to wake up."
"You've no idea honey."
Heart warming story
Outstanding! Very erotic, very nice!
Gentle I'm not sure how to take this story. It does not seem to me to be medically "correct". Sex is great but I never thought of it as a medical cure. Have to give you a 7 for this one.
GBF: It's my job to confuse. :-)
I'd like to wake up to this. . . or wake someone up in this manner! Mmmmm. . . .
GBF: Let me know how it goes.
Very cute and romantic!
GBF: Oh, thanks. Oh, you mean the story?
What a way to wake up! The desire of a spouse when their loved one is very ill can be overpowering. The setting was very well done and the development of the two main characters is so smooth and believeable. Thank you for creating this little section o
GBF: Must be time for bed. :-)
I enjoyed this story, it was very loving and very realistic. You know, I think medical science should fund research into this revival technique. You should send a copy to the May Clinic or one of the other high-profile research hospitals. Coma patients
GBF: Realistic? How do you KNOW? :-)
Just catching up on stories I've missed and this one is great! The ultimate happy ending. I'll be reading more of you as I have time.
GBF: Thanks a lot. Love to know what you think.
Much more enjoyable than my last week in the hospital.
THAT WAS A GREAT STORY!! WAS VERY BREATHE TAKING AND HIS WIFE WAS VERY DARING!! I LIKED IT ALOT!!! GREAT STORY
GBF: Is that why you're shouting at me? :-)
Boy I'll love to have that kind of treatment in a hospital. Wait I'll love to have that treatment anywhere. This story is really good.
GBF: Thanks a lot.
I love how your sexy mind works! Gotta go read (do?) this one to dear hubby, who's laying in the bed right now... not comatose but snoring like a bear and may as well be... ha!
GBF: I better get some feedback on that!
I had an erection just reading the story! Would loooove to have had such an experience... Good story.
GBF: Well that was the idea! :-)
I've been all over ASSTR. You're either the best writer or in the top two or three. Your descriptions of the place and the people are good that I'm there with them.
GBF: Thanks for the (completed unwarranted) enthusiasm!
kool got to get my wife to do that to me. she like to fuck in weird places
GBF: I'm not sure if it would be worth being hospitalised for...
That was so very different. I really liked it.
I can only hope & pray if I ever have a prolonged stay in a hospital, there will be a lady around to revive me or just do that do me, whether I revive or not. The story was lovely. You really are good.
GBF: Can't we all... And thanks. You don't know any publishers, do you? :-)
excells with lust
Great story, sounds very true, as it happened to me although I wasn't in a coma, I was in the hospital after an auto accident...kept for observation and had a mega dose of pain medication when I realized that *****. Thanks for bringing back good memories
GBF: Sorry to bleep you. I can't have you giving the story away!
Great storie wished it had happen to me.
Thats really good, I like the I dea of being helpless. how can I get more involved. I've been a sexual frustrated teenager, 19, for too long and this stuff is great
GBF: Well, first off, you need to get out more. Sitting at home reading porn won't help! :-) By the way, at 19, there's no rush...
it was sad but atleast at the end of the story he woke up...:-) that was hot
GBF: Hot=5? Bummer! :-)
Great story i enjoyed it very much and i have had an adventure or two in the hospital , brings back so great memories. Thanks so much for the reminder.
A little odd, but a nice story. Nothing like this has ever happened to me (alas) but then again I wouldn't like to be in his position. The sex was excellent though. Where did this idea come from????
GBF: My demented head!
Great story as always.
Really funny. I love it.
The story was excellant throughout.
Though my English is very poor, I knew - in the very moment I'd finished reading this story - that you indeed are a very talented author who's work is better than most of the stories I've seen on the Internet for a very long time. This far, I've read almo
GBF: Wow, thanks for the vote of confidence.
Heh-heh. Never got that kind of treatment when I was in the hospital. Clever story. A bit harder to suspend disbelief (boxers? on a comatose patient?) than the few other stories I've read of yours, but you manage to make the story work.
GBF: Well, so long as you managed... You're the second person in hundreds to bring up the boxers, so obviously it's not a biggie! :-)
it is a good start; will we see more?
GBF: More? Of this story? Nope, sorry.
GBF: 1? 1, and no comment? Now that's not polite...
just moved along with the story like I was Dennis waiting for Laurie.
GBF: Oh! Good, I think...
I thought you did an excellent job of describing the whole scenario of ***** in a hospital bed. In addition, I liked the description of the wife *****, and then *****. I am not exactly sure if ***** would be like you pictured it, with the man ***** - I t
GBF: Thanks Ted. I had to 'bleep' a bit of what you said though, or there wouldn't be any point in reading it!
Loved it, very romantic and fully erotic
GBF: Fully? Ooh!
I enjoyed the story but whats a caterer doing in a coma patient's room? (Just a small detail)
GBF: Umm... Good point... Hold on... There, no caterers. Easy. :-)
WOW as per your usual a very hot story To wake up ...
GBF: Thanks. Had to snip some of your comment, so you didn't give it away. Sorry.
::smacks lips judiciously:: Not bad. I like her ability to deal with the rest of the world so that it all goes away and she can stay focused on him. Impressive woman. I do think that some of your other stuff radiates more heat, but for believability,
GBF: Wow, thanks a lot.
Nice story, though I had to throw my disbelief switch to fully enjoy it. Thanks for sharing.
GBF: What's a flick of the switch, in the scheme of things?
Ohhh I love this one, I really do, it has humour and pathos and the sex fits in well.
Thanks, unfortunately my current IM(male) said "fantasy" with a negative slant. I spent 9 months in the hospital and never had such a "wakeUp Call" But I wish
GBF: bummer, but thanks.
That said, WAKE UP CALL is a first rate piece. The wife's concerns are expressed very well. the hospital environment, well it was as if I were walking the corridors, hearing the speaker system paging doctors and nurses and of course the sexual description
That sex in the hospital story was good...as when i wasin for a few tests...***** did the samething to me...except the nurse caught us...and she got hot and squirted all over herself...and that did it for me...***** got a "womb"full...thanks for everythin
Funny, don't recall getting that kind of treatent when i was in the hospital last time. gonna have to have a talk with the wife!!
GBF: But were you in a coma?
How many of us have sat with our loved ones at a hospital? What a wonderful, embarrasing, quirky idea - a fantasy most of us would dismiss, but Gentle follows it to a wonderful ... ahhh ... climax ;->
GBF: Oh, that's high praise. Thanks.
I loved it......really good Gentle. What a wonderful way to wake up. A similar experience woke me one morning...
GBF: Thanks Chuck. Had to leave the rest of your story off. You should write though!
This was well written and fun. The character Laurie is very believable - organized and efficient, but not operating well in uncertainty. However, the idea of a man wearing boxers in hospital just seemed so strange to me that it threw me off. Is that re
GBF: Never thought of that... Hmm...
Yea I got the story :) I cant wait to reead it :)
GBF: You're sending feedback that you haven't read it, Danny? :-)
Nice pacing. You've got the touch.
Very nice melding of romance and 'forbidden fruit'.
A very nice and enjoyable story. Thanks for sharing it with us.
I have enjoyed a number of your stories. This one was exceptionally good - short and to the point (pun intended!) Perhaps you should publish this one in a medical journal - it just may work!
predictable but funny nonetheless. nice.