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Scent of a Girl:
Beginnings


* * * Starring * * *

Cally Oliver
portrayed by:
Caitlin Wachs

Maxie Bradlidge
portrayed by:
Avril Lavigne

Dakota Lane
portrayed by:
Mackenzie Rosman

Mindy Sullivan
portrayed by:
Hayden Panettiere

Cindy Sullivan
portrayed by:
Hayden Panettiere

Chloe Morgan
portrayed by:
Lena Katina


Scent of a Girl: Beginnings

"The Beginning of...Christmas Break"

Episode Twenty

Season Finale

Copyright © 2011

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Summary: In the ALL NEW 20th episode of 'Scent of a Girl: Beginnings' (Season Finale), the Christmas break for Mintzler's 8th grade class has finally arrived and with that comes major changes. Like one couple skidding off the runway before they even get started and another making plans for staying close over the two week winter holiday.

Original Airdate: Tuesday, December 13th, 2011 @ 9:00 p.m.

Story Codes: no sex

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/\ {* ~ *} /\ DAKOTA'S PERSPECTIVE /\ {* ~ *} /\

"So when are you gonna take those naughty pics for me?" I asked Mindy as she laid in my arms on her bed the morning that Christmas break was to begin.

"I'm not going too," She said as she held up her camera and snapped a picture of us. "Hey your head is missing."

"You're a horrible photographer," I said as she nodded her agreement and we laughed. "So no chance you can take pictures of yourself nakey if you can't even snap a simple shot of us."

"I could always use a tripod," She suggested as I smiled. "Or have someone take them for me."

"Like who?" I asked and not sure of whether I really wanted someone else to take pictures of her that way.

"Some random stranger maybe?" She asked as I laughed. "Maybe my Mom and Dad's maid or the butler."

"I know you don't have a butler," I said as she nodded her head yes. "OK, then what's his name?"

"Charles...Butler," She said before cracking up laughing at her own joke. Cindy coming into the room at that moment and seeing us still lounging on the bed.

"Melinda Erin get your tanned ass out of bed and pack," Cindy demanded of her sister. "I'm not doing it for you."

"You don't have to, Dakota did," Mindy said as I giggled and she pointed to her bags in the corner. Then snapping a picture of a frustrated Cindy. "I got her head this time."

"Yeah the top of it," I giggled as Mindy shrugged.

"Oh yeah, Dakota," Cindy said as she piled her and Mindy's bags on the bed. "You said you played softball back home in Pittsburgh?"

"Little league yeah, why?" I asked.

"Patty and Lisa got me invited to this really cool softball workshop thing," Cindy said. "It's over like 4 weekends in a row and I can bring a friend. You wanna go?"

"Me, are you serious? Yes," I said immediately. "When is it?"

"Begins in January and runs through the first of February," Cindy said. "We leave Friday afternoon and get back on Sunday night. 4 weekends in a row."

"That sounds really cool," I said.

"If you're both leaving I'll be alone," Mindy said. "Good."

"Ha ha ha," Cindy said as Mindy laughed at her own joke. "We both know you think the booger man will eat you."

"Leave her alone," I said to Cindy. "She hates being alone I don't blame her."

"Yeah," Mindy said as she kissed my cheek.

"Cally said you could bunk with her," Cindy said to her sister. "She doesn't like being alone either."

"Really?" Mindy asked with a smile. "She said I could?"

"On one condition," Cindy said as she piled the last bag on the bed and moved into the doorway.

"What condition?" Mindy asked.

"You have to give her some," Cindy said as she backed out of the door laughing and then ran off when she saw Mindy and I coming after her.

/\ {* ~ *} /\ CALLY'S PERSPECTIVE /\ {* ~ *} /\

It really sucks that it took me four months of my 8th grade year to actually hook up with Bre (that whole Maxie as my girlfriend thing slowed me down). But now, as I made my way across campus to Keller-Montgomery Hall, I couldn't wait to see her again. Even if it was the day she would probably be leaving for home (Billings, Montana) I thought I could at least help her pack or something. Maybe even sneak in a quick kiss or two.

"Did you hear that skank actually kissed a girl last night?" a girl asked a friend of hers as I came up the walk. That girl would soon be known as Courtney Melrose. Though at the moment I had no idea who the 'skank' being referred to was. I would soon find out.

"Hey you guys know where Bre Kelton's room is?" I asked Courtney.

"Yeah it's on the third floor," Courtney responded. "You gonna make her your girlfriend?"

"I think that's between me and her," I said.

"Is that her?" Courtney's friend asked as she pointed at me.

"Yep," Courtney said with a knowing grin.

"Oh so that was me you were talking about as I came up the walk?" I asked Courtney.

"Private conversation," She snorted. I glared at her before I punched her dead in the stomach and dropped her to her knees. "That's for calling Bre a skank you mouthy little bitch."

"Oh my god, Cally, what are you doing here?" Bre asked as she came charging out of the doors and saw Courtney on her knees holding her stomach.

"I came to see you..." I said as she covered my mouth and looked back at Courtney as she dragged me across the lawn to the side of the building. Privacy.

"Why did you hit her?" Bre asked.

"She was talking smack about you..."

"She picks on me all the time," Bre said. "She's just mouthy."

"Well now that you're with me you won't have to put up with her anymore..."

"I'm not with you," Bre said as she turned from slightly nervous to an all out panic.

"Well I know that but we had so much fun at the dance last night..."

"I can't do this," Bre interrupted. "I can't be your girlfriend."

"What? Why not?" I asked as my stomach fell out in shock.

"I can deal with Courtney pestering me about liking girls I'm used to it," Bre said. "I don't even cry that much over it anymore..."

"I'll kick her ass good and you won't have to," I said.

"I can't with the whole school thinking I'm gay," Bre said

"No one cares," I protested. "Besides my friends will help you anytime someone picks on you. Me and you could be good together..."

"I don't like you," Bre said as I froze in place and now listened quietly. My heart slowly being broken by each new word. "I just wish you would leave me alone."

"OK," I said simply as I turned and walked off down the lawn to the walk.

"Wait, Cally..." Bre said as she came after me but I had heard everything I wanted to from her so I took off running. Down the walk and onto the street that led back to my dorm. I think I made it in like 10 seconds because the next thing I really remember was laying on my bed crying my eyes out. My heart breaking into pieces.

/\ {* ~ *} /\ DAKOTA'S PERSPECTIVE /\ {* ~ *} /\

"Where is that smoke coming from?" Mindy asked as we sat outside the Carlson Center waiting on the buses.

"I have no idea," I said as we saw Patty and Lisa running down the road coming towards us. "What happened guys?"

"The second floor of Oliver-Stanton Hall caught on fire," Patty said as she stopped in front of us. Panting for breath. "They said the whole floor is damaged."

"Thankfully my room was on the first floor," Mindy said as she hugged me. "Did you see Cindy?"

"No but I did," I said as I pointed to the Carlson Center where she had gone in earlier.

"Oh yeah, I was worried for nothing," Mindy said as everyone laughed.

"Looks like the school is gonna have some major repairs to do," Lisa said from beside Patty. "Weren't they already doing some repairs?"

"Converting the second floor rooms into six person suites," Mindy said. "Miss Harris told me about it."

"Something about having a lot of new students at the first of the year," I said. "I bet lots of people will be moved around."

"I hope they move you into my room," Mindy said as she kissed me. "Talk about fun."

"Ewwww lesbians," Lisa giggled as everyone laughed and Maxie and Chloe came down the road now, holding hands. "When did they start dating?"

"They hooked up before the dance," Mindy said as she ran to meet Chloe with a hug. "So it's official you guys are a couple?"

"Kind of, we're not totally sure," Chloe confirmed as Maxie smiled.

"I'm happy for you," Mindy said as she hugged Maxie next. The bus pulling up at the front gates. The one meant to take us to the airport. "Oh no."

"I know," Chloe said as she hugged Mindy once more. "I'm gonna miss you guys so much."

"Me too," Mindy said. "Hey wait, where's Cally?"

"I saw her earlier coming down the hall and she seemed upset," Patty said.

"She was crying," Lisa said. "I hope she's OK."

"I'm gonna go check on her," I said as Cindy came out of the building with the tickets we needed for the flights home (me to Pittsburgh, her and Mindy to Los Angeles). "I think something is wrong with Cally. Come with me?"

"You'll miss the bus it's right there," Mindy said as she pointed to it.

"Cally is my girl she was my first friend here and she's always got my back...," I said.

"Me too," Cindy said. "I'm with you."

"OK, fine let's go," Mindy said as she came to join us.

"Watch our stuff?" Maxie asked Patty as she joined us and her and Chloe dropped their stuff with our pile and all of us took off for Cally's dorm. Maxie pounding on the door once we got there. "CALLY?"

"What?" Cally barked as she opened it and saw us. "Oh hey."

"You OK?"

"Yes, why?" Cally asked.

"Lisa said you were crying when you came through the lobby earlier," I said. Mindy pushing past me and hugging Cally around the neck.

"You got friends now Calista," Mindy said. "Tell me what's wrong?"

"Bre said she didn't wanna see me anymore," Cally admitted.

"But we saw you kissing her last night," Mindy said.

"What she told me," Chloe chimed in.

"I'm jealous," Maxie said as everyone laughed. "Stop laughing I'm not kidding."

"You better be," Chloe said to Maxie as they grinned at each other.

"Bre said she couldn't handle it," Cally explained. "She's a huge drama queen anyway so I probably got out at the right time."

"I like Bre," Mindy said as she laid her head against Cally's. "But if she don't wanna be with you then she's not my friend."

"You know Mindy and I are usually around the house most of the time so you can call us anytime over break," Cindy offered as she bumped her fist with Cally's.

"Me too," Chloe said as she hugged Cally. "OK?"

"Yeah," Cally said with a half-smile. "That's the bus horn you guys better get going."

"How do you know?" Mindy asked as Cally pointed to the window.

"I saw you guys coming up here," Cally said as everyone laughed. "Group hug?"

"Mintz forever," I declared as everyone of us gathered around Cally and hugged with her smushed in the middle.

/\ {* ~ *} /\ CALLY'S PERSPECTIVE /\ {* ~ *} /\

"You're already home?" I asked as Mindy giggled from the other end of the line. "That was quick."

"It was actually," Mindy said with a yawn. "And I am tired."

"Then you go to bed and call me tomorrow cause I'm off to bed in a few minutes too," I said before we said our goodbyes. "Girl is goofy."

I giggled as I went for a much needed hot shower. Coming back out an hour or so later with the message light on my phone blinking.

"I didn't hear the phone ring," I muttered as I hit the play button on the answering machine.

"Hey my favorite white girl," Tasha (Julia's girlfriend) said as I smiled. "I got something very special for you. But I ain't gonna give it to you unless you call me back. Later."

"What the hell would she have for me?" I asked as I picked up the phone and dialed her number. "Hey."

"Hey," Tasha said. "So you got my message?"

"Yes I did, now what did you get me?" I asked.

"Some dark chocolate," Tasha said. "Do you like that?"

"I guess," I said in confusion. "But why the sexy message for candy?"

"The dark chocolate I'm referring is dying to have your cock stuck in her tiny little asshole," Tasha said as my pussy started to tingle. "Does that sound like fun?"

"Yes it does," I said. "Lots of butt fucking fun."

"Yep," Tasha agreed. "But see the problem is we can't get back down your way till after the new semester starts, jobs and all. So you still want us to cum?"

"Bring her down anytime you can," I said. "I'll even phone bone with her right now."

"Now there's a great way to pass some time..." Tasha said in a moan as I settled in on the bed. All thoughts of sleeping gone from my mind for a while as her and Taina (Dark Chocolate) both got on the line. Let's just say I wasn't thinking about that whore Bre anymore.

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Written by
TVM

Directed by
CJ Ames


* * Guest Stars * *

Bre Kelton
"Cally's Friend"

Patty Peterson
"Cally's Friend"

Lisa Wilcox
"Cally's Friend"

Tasha
"Cally's Friend"