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Pinch Me

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Lindsey Church
"Emily Osment"

Allie Thayer
"Mandy Moore "

Jamie Church
" Mena Suvari"

Nick
"Jason Biggs"


Pinch Me

"The Tyranny of Evil Men"

Episode Five

Copyright © 2008

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Summary: In the ALL NEW 5th episode of 'Pinch Me', Allie is forced to spend her days in the hospital while the world passes her by. Of course this doesn't stop Lindsey from helping her "relieve some tension."Plus the shocking truth behind Allie's strained relationship with her father is revealed.

Original Airdate: November 17, 2008 @ 9:30 p.m.
(following an ALL NEW 'Hey Mickie, Hey Mickie')

Story Codes: no sex

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Allie looked down at the cast surrounding her left leg. She was lucky that she landed on her leg and not her head. The doctor told her that the area just under her knee was shattered and it would take months to heal. The worst part is that it itched constantly and she couldn't reach. She had also broken her index finger on her right hand when she tried to catch herself. Allie could only think of one positive aspect to this situation, and it was walking through the door.

“Good morning, Sleepyhead.” Lindsey said as she walked over to her girlfriend and kisses her tenderly. “What did the doctor say? When can you go home?” Lindsey sat down on the edge on Allie's bed.

“He said it would probably be about two more weeks before I could start trying a wheelchair.”

At that time, Allie's parents walked in. Lindsey moved from the bed to the chair by the window. Allie's mom walked over and hugged Lindsey, while her dad stood by the door with a stern look on his face. After the accident Allie's mother had run directly outside just as Lindsey came running from her house, both having looked out the window in time to see her fall. When the ambulance came, although Allie's mom had tried to protest, Lindsey hopped in as well. She hadn't begun to embrace her daughter's sexuality, but after seeing how much Lindsey cared for her, she accepted it.

Allie's father was another case entirely. When he was in the room with them he didn't speak unless he had to. He stood as far away from the group as possible, looking angrily at the wall. He hadn't even attempted to speak to Allie.

“Charlie, what time do you have?” Allie's mom asked after she finished her interesting story about their latest trip to Africa where her husband was “attacked” by a playful monkey in one of the villages.

“It's a quarter after three. We need to go soon if you want to catch the flight to Paris, Carol.” Charlie said, with little emotion in his voice. Carol hugged Lindsey and kissed her daughter's forehead before walking out the door. Charlie didn't say anything to Allie, and she didn't say anything to him. The only exchange in the room was the look that he gave Lindsey as he turned to walk out.

At seven o'clock Lindsey used the hospital phone to call Jamie and tell her that she was just going to spend the night at the hospital. Jamie said that she would be there about noon. They spent the next few hours talking about nothing in particular, just enjoying each others company. At ten o'clock a nurse came in to check Allie's I.V. And make sure her cast was sitting right. She told Lindsey that extra blankets where in the top of the closet and left.

“Allie, their's something I wanted to ask you about. Of course, you don't have to answer if you don't want to. I was wondering why you and your dad haven't spoken since you fell.” Lindsey asked as she settled onto the reclining chair beside of the bed.

Allie didn't say anything for a few moments and Lindsey started to change the subject before she spoke. “My dad and I don't really get along ever. It's hard to explain. I love him, but I hate him at the same time.” Allie's eyes started to tear up as she continued. “Let's just say he's done a lot of things that a father shouldn't do to his daughter.”

Allie couldn't say anything else. She pulled the blanket up to her face and cried. Lindsey stood and walked over to the bed. She slid under the covers with her lover and held her until she fell asleep.

--------------------L8r----------------Nick's Place-----------------------

“Good Morning, sleepyhead.” Nick said as Jamie poked her head out of the sheet she was tangled in. The smell of bacon had caused her to wake as Nick brought in two plates of bacon, eggs, and toast. Jamie crawled out of the bed, clothed only in the button-up shirt that Nick had been wearing the night before and kissed him softly on the lips before saying anything.

“You are the best guy ever. You are aware of that, right?”

“I haven't heard that one before, but I have heard that I do make the best eggs ever. Taste this and tell me otherwise.” Nick said as he fed her a bite from his plate.

“Very good. It's decided, you are coming home with me to live in my kitchen cabinets whenever I need you.” Jamie said causing Nick to almost choke on a piece of toast. The two of them exchanged witty banter for another hour or so until Jamie realized that it was time to go to the hospital. Jamie pulled on her clothes and pulled her hair back into a ponytail, hoping Lindsey wouldn't realize that she was wearing the same clothes from yesterday, and they went to her car.

“Do you think it's a good idea to leave them alone so much?” Nick asked when they were pulling into the hospital parking lot.

“I don't see a problem with it. They haven't done anything yet, to my knowledge. Not to mention the fact that they wouldn't be stupid enough to do something in the hospital, would they?” Jamie said, fully believing the innocence of her baby sister.

“You're probably right. Anyhow, it's not like Allie is some horny teenage guy, trying to pressure the unsuspecting young girl into giving up her virginity.” Nick said playfully as he bumped Jamie's shoulder. They both laughed as they walked toward the entrance.

-----------------Meanwhile----------------The Hospital----------------

“Oh, God! Yes! Right there, my angel. Don't stop.” Allie said, trying to control the volume of her voice. They had decided to have a little fun since they knew that Jamie wasn't going to be here for another thirty minutes, and the nurses wouldn't bring her lunch until after that. Lindsey's tongue danced around her lover in ways it hadn't before. Allie could feel the difference immediately and could only tense her body, now unable to speak. While Lindsey's head lied buried in Allie's thighs, they laced their fingers together and squeezed as every contraction of Allie's pussy caused her to squirt a little more. Once Lindsey was satisfied that every drop of her lovers cum had been drained, she slid her body up Allie's and bit her nipples playfully.

“Where did you learn to do that?” Allie asked as Lindsey lay herself across her bare chest.

“I was watching this show the other night on HBO. It told the best ways to eat out your girlfriend. They had men and women there learning different techniques.” Lindsey said, no longer embarrassed to talk with her love about her most intimate secrets. Lindsey raised up and helped Allie pull her hospital gown back on. She stood and walked to the bathroom door, where she had hung her shirt, when the door started to open up.

Lindsey did the only thing she could think to do. She dived under the bed and pulled her shirt on, just as Jamie and Nick came in to the room.

“Hey, sweetheart. Are you feeling okay today. How's your leg doing? Oh, and your finger?” Jamie said as she walked over and kissed Allie on the cheek while giving her a hug. Nick sat on one side of the bed and hugged her as well, while Jamie sat down on the other side.

 “I'm fine. It only hurts when I point.” She said sarcastically. Allie loved how motherly Jamie could be sometimes, but other times it was just annoying. She was also growing to love Nick like a big brother as well. He and Jamie had become inseparable in the past week. Allie knew that Lindsey shared her feelings for Nick. He was impossible not to like.

“Where's Lindsey?” Nick asked and Allie froze up. She didn't know what to say. Just then a knock came at the door and a nurse came in carrying Allie's lunch. Nick got up to help her move the tray to the bed and Lindsey took the opportunity to slide out from under the bed and sit in the chair in the corner. When everyone turned around, they were surprised to see her sitting in the chair nonchalantly.

“Where did you come from?” Jamie asked, dumbfounded.

“I was in the bathroom.” Lindsey said, sounding surprised that Jamie would ask such a silly question. They all seemed to dismiss it immediately and Lindsey let out a silent sigh of relief. Nick opened up Allie's tray of food and opened her silverware for her as she stared at the questionable meal in front of her. Jamie saw her look and leaned over to whisper in her ear. “If you try and eat some now, I'll bring you something good later.”

Allie picked at the chicken, covered in an unidentifiable breading, while they talked about their day. After about twenty minutes, Lindsey noticed her sisters ensemble.

“Jamie, aren't those the exact same clothes that you wore yesterday?” Jamie looked at her sister's knowing smile and could tell that she had been caught.

“Where did you sleep last night?” Allie asked her, poking her in the ribs. Both girls exchanged an evil grin and Lindsey snuck up behind Nick. Allie and Lindsey tickled a confession out of them.

“Okay, so maybe I didn't sleep at my place last night. We're adults, and we're allowed to do certain things together.” Jamie said as her and Nick kissed each other. Lindsey and Allie began to sing in unison. “Nick and Jamie sitting in a tree, F-U-C-.....” Before they could finish, Nick and Jamie returned the tickling from earlier. A few hours later Jamie and Nick left to go pick up some food for the group. Lindsey climbed up into the bed with Allie.

“You know what?” Allie asked as she pulled Lindsey closer.

“What?”

“I love you.” The two of them kissed passionately. Neither one said a word as they lay there, staring into each others eyes. An hour passed before they had realized it and Jamie and Nick walked back in carrying three very large bags from McDonalds. Jamie didn't say anything, but gave the two of them a warning glance.

“You'll never guess this. We didn't pay for a thing.” Nick said as he starting pulling food out of the bags. “They said is was on the house and for you to get well soon.”

Allie looked at the McChicken sandwich that Nick handed her. She looked on it and saw that they had fixed the way she liked it without her saying anything. That was her favorite part of working fast-food, they always knew what you eat. The group ate their meal and said their goodbye's. Lindsey promised that she and Jamie would be back after Jamie got off work tomorrow. As they walked out Lindsey turned to blow one more goodbye kiss to the girl she loved.

-------------------L8r----------------------Lindsey's house-----------------

Lindsey stepped out of the shower and dried off. She hated having to blow dry her hair, but knew what it would look like if she didn't. After she finished walked to her room with the towel around her. She looked in her closet until she found what she was looking for, the sweater that Allie had left at her house. She slipped on a pair of panties and pulled the sweater over her head. It smelled like the perfume that Allie had been wearing that day. Lindsey had worn her girlfriend's sweater to bed every night that she had been home. She had thought about telling Allie, but wasn't sure if she would think it was sweet or bizarre. Lindsey pulled the covers up to her neck and snuggled into her pillow. Then a knock came at the door.

“Baby, can I come in?” Jamie said as she slowly creaked open the door.

“Yeah, It's fine.” Lindsey said as her sister walked in, already in her pajamas as well. Jamie walked over to her bed and leaned over to kiss her goodnight. As Lindsey leaned up her blanket came down, revealing the sweater underneath.

“What are you wearing?”

“It's Allie's. It makes me feel like she's here with me.” Lindsey said, blushing. Jamie didn't say a word she just slid under the blanket with her baby sister and pulled her close. Lindsey quickly fell asleep in Jamie's arms and dreamed of pleasant things throughout the night.

 ----------------L8r---------------------The Hospital------------------

Allie saw him walk into her room. She knew why he was there and pretended to be asleep. It was always quicker that way. He walked toward her bed and pulled the covers away gently. Then she woke up.

Allie looked at the clock on the table beside of her bed. 3:45, the nurse would be here in fifteen minutes to make sure she hadn't shifted too much in her sleep. Allie stared at the ceiling. If Lindsey were here she wouldn't have to worry about the nightmares. If He wasn't around she wouldn't have the nightmares to begin with. The second she was healed she would have to go back home. Then the cycle would begin again.

Allie fought back the tears. How could someone she loved so much do such horrible things. How could her mom be oblivious for sixteen years. She knew that it might all end if her mom found out, but what if it didn't. What if he hurt them both. About that time the nurse walked in, surprised to see Allie awake already. The nurse checked the position of Allie's cast and gave her a dose of morphine to dull the pain and help her sleep. At least this time she slept peacefully.

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