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Pinch Me

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Lindsey Church
"Emily Osment"

Allie Thayer
"Mandy Moore "

Jamie Church
" Mena Suvari"

Nick
"Jason Biggs"


Pinch Me

"Do You Want Fries With That?"

Episode One

Copyright © 2008

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Summary: In the ALL NEW premiere episode of 'Pinch Me', 15 year old Lindsey Church finally gets away from her abusive mother when she is imprisoned by moving in with her 22 year old sister, Jamie. Lindsey thinks she's seen everything until she meets her new neighbor working at the local McDonald's. She is about to have a rude awakening.

Original Airdate: October 13, 2008 @ 9:30 p.m.
(following an ALL NEW 'Hey Mickie, Hey Mickie')

Story Codes: no sex

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"Oh Jamie, I love it!" Lindsey screamed as she leaped into her big sister's arms. "I can't believe how big it is.”

Lindsey plopped down on her new queen size bed that her sister had bought to surprise her with. "Well, I couldn't have you sleeping on the couch forever." Jamie said as she brushed her baby sisters dark blonde hair behind her ears and kissed her lightly on the forehead. They had only been living together for a few days, but had already begun to bond more than they had in their entire lives. Lindsey had been so scared when Jamie had first mentioned filing charges against her mother, but she had finally taken it too far. The bruises and scratches were one thing, but when she broke Lindsey's wrist Jamie decided to step in. Now the bitch was serving 10 to 25 years in prison, and Lindsey was free from her grasp.

"So what do you want for supper, sweetheart?" Jamie asked as she walked toward the fridge. She opened it up and saw that she desperately needed to go shopping. "On second thought, we'll grab something at McDonalds while we're at the grocery store."

 Lindsey plopped down in her sister's Cavalier and they pulled out of the driveway. As they drove downtown Lindsey looked around at the shops that dotted the streets, people walking in and out of them only occasionally. It was going to take some getting used to. Her sister had moved out of the city into a nice suburb just a few years before and Lindsey rarely got to visit. Now that she was going to be living here she desperately needed to get out and walk the streets.

"Are you listening?" Jamie said pulling Lindsey from her daydream. "I said what do you want."

"Oh, sorry. Get me some chicken nuggets." Lindsey said, not really paying attention to what was going on.

"Yeah, I need one Big Mac and one 10 piece nugget." Jamie said to the women waiting for their order. Lindsey watched one of the back doors to the restaurant open up and a girl with long blonde hair, wearing a McDonalds uniform, walk out and head to what must have been her car. She turned and noticed Lindsey staring at her and smiled as she hopped into the convertible. Lindsey smiled back and turned back to her sister. They finished shopping and headed back home. Jamie noticed that her sister seemed to be lost in thought.

"Lindsey, is something wrong?"

"No I'm just kind of thinking about something." Lindsey said, still staring out the window.

"Do you want to talk about it?"

"Not really." Lindsey said as she began to get annoyed. She didn't want to talk, she just wanted to think, why don't adults ever understand that. They soon arrived back at the house and carried the groceries into the house. Lindsey decided to take a walk outside and headed to the park she had seen just down the street as they were driving. That's when she saw her, the girl from before. She was walking out of the house right across the street. The girl spotted her and walked over.

"Hey, you're the girl I saw at work today, right? I'm Allie Thayer." The girl said with a warm smile.

"I'm Lindsey Church. I just moved here. I was thinking of walking down to the park, care to join me."

"Sure." Allie said as she brushed her blonde hair out of her eyes and grabbed Lindsey's hand. Lindsey was confused at first until Allie started running. Lindsey quickly caught up and they took off down the street, laughing until they reached the park. "Sorry about that, I get a little excited after work. All that energy building up through the day, you know?" Allie said giggling like a kid. "Hey, will you push me on the swings?"

"Umm...Okay." Lindsey said as she placed herself behind Allie and began to push her gently. "So what's this town like? It seems kinda boring."

"Only during the daytime, at night we can party just as hard as the kids in the city." Said Allie arrogantly.

"Oh, really. I guess you'll have to prove just how hard you can party." Lindsey said turning Allie around in the swing and facing her with a cocky smile.

"Meet me here tonight at this address at 1 o'clock tonight and you'll see what we have in store. We'll show the new girl in town the time of her life." Allie said as she pulled a pen from her pocket and scribbled an address onto Lindsey's hand.

"Looking forward to it." Lindsey said in a sultry voice, attempting to get a rise out of Allie. Allie just stared at her with intense interest and then they parted.

--------------------L8r---Outside the party-------------------------

 Lindsey walked up to the door where she could hear a soft thumping of a bass coming from the walls of the house. She wondered why nobody had called the cops and then she realized, she was in a suburb where all of the neighbors where at least twenty or thirty feet from each other. If she were back in the city the cops would be at the door in a second. Lindsey rang the doorbell and waited for a moment. She had told her sister she was going to meet up with a new friend she had met at the park to stay the night. She wasn't technically lying, but Lindsey still felt a little guilty. It wasn't like sneaking out of her bedroom window at her mom's apartment like she used to do, Jamie had been so nice to her and was happy when Lindsey said she had a new friend. Just as Lindsey began to change her mind and walk back home the door opened and there she stood. Allie was waiting just inside the door wearing a dark blue belly shirt, showing off the piercing that had been covered earlier, and her hair had one single strand of braided hair gently blowing in the night air.

"So, are you gonna stand out here in this wind all night or are you gonna get your ass in here?" Allie said as she beckoned Lindsey in the door. "This is my friend Kevin's place. I told him you wanted to party and he can't resist when the P-word is mentioned. We made a few calls and in no time we were set up."

Allie grabbed Lindsey by the hand and lead her through the throngs of people to a guy standing by himself in the kitchen. He was standing at the table with about eight bottles of liquor, mixing them in different proportions.

"Hey Kevin, this is the new girl in town, her names Lindsey and she doesn't think we can party." Allie screamed over the loud music.

 "Oh yeah, Sweetheart. Try this then." Kevin said with a sinister smile as he passed the newly concocted drink to Lindsey. She looked at it nervously. Lindsey had been to numerous parties in the city, but usually it was just loud music and people shooting heroine in the corners.

 "I don't know. I'm not much of a drinker. I'm usually just the one making sure my friends don't get too wasted." Lindsey said with a nervous chuckle. She was a little embarrassed by her confession.

 "That's cool. You don't have to drink if you don't want to." Allie said placing her hand over Lindsey's gently. She smiled sweetly, but that smile quickly turned to a smirk as she said. " That just means that I win."

"Oh, bullshit!" Lindsey said, quickly picking up the shot glass and downing it. She smiled before burping the loudest burp she could ever remember.

"Sorry, should have mentioned that little side effect." Laughed Kevin patting Lindsey on the back.

"You're cool in my book. Any party at my place is now open to you." Allie tapped Lindsey on the shoulder gently and ushered her aside away from the crowd.

"Can we talk?" She asked and Lindsey nodded. "Hey, I'm sorry about that. You don't have to drink for me to like you. I think you awesome anyway." Allie said getting obviously nervous for some reason.

"Do you really think I'm awesome?" asked Lindsey, unable to hide her huge grin. She couldn't figure out why she desperately wanted Allie to like her, but she was glad when Allie nodded nervously and smiled.

"So, do you have a boyfriend?" asked Allie, surprising Lindsey with the quick change of subject.

"Not really, I'm kind of a tomboy." Lindsey said looking down ashamed until Allie replied, "Really? I have the same problem. I'm just the cool guy with the tits." Allie said as they both broke into a fit of giggles. They stood their laughing for a few seconds and then just stared at each other, smiling.

"I hope you know that you're my new best friend." Allie said never losing eye contact.

"Ditto." said Lindsey as they both began to laugh again.

"Do you want to get outta here, you can crash at my place if you want. My parent are out of town until Monday, so I have the next two days to myself and I really just don't want to be alone." Allie said with a shy smile reaching out for Lindsey's hand. Lindsey took it and they walked to the door. -------------------L8r------At Allie's house-----------------------

"I can't believe you have this whole place to yourself. I would kill to have run of the entire house for the weekend." Lindsey said as they walked in the front door.

"It's not bad, but my parents usually go on business trips together every weekend. They work for a travel agency and every weekend they check out new hotels and attractions. They always offer to take me but I grew tired of it after a few years. Now I just sit at home on the weekends hoping for something interesting to happen." Allie said with a pained smile on her face.

"Well, now that I'm across the street you don't ever have to be bored again." Lindsey said sitting down beside of Allie on the couch. They sat there staring at each other for a while, just looking into each others eyes. Lindsey couldn't explain it, but she liked being the center of Allie's attention. She just wanted Allie to stare at her like this forever.

"Umm...If it will make you uncomfortable I'll understand but...I was kinda wondering...If you..wanted to ....take a bubble bath with me. I have a huge tub." Allie said, breaking eye contact with Lindsey and staring at the floor.

"Sure, I'd love to." Lindsey said, almost too quickly she thought afterwards. They walked up the stairs to the bathroom and Allie turned on the faucet and poured in the bubble bath. She then slipped off her sandles and turned her back to Lindsey. Lindsey watched as Allie slipped her belly shirt up and over her head, exposing her perfect breasts. She then began to slowly shed her jeans. Almost a little too slowly, Lindsey thought, like she wanted to be watched. Then the moment of truth, Allie slipped down her blue thong to reveal her pussy, with her pubic hair trimmed in the shape of a heart. Allie looked up and noticed Lindsey staring at it and blushed.

"I get bored sometimes and I like to experiment with my body. I even did this piercing myself." Allie said as she jingled the stud on her belly button ,smiling.

"That is so cute. I've never seen anyone with a heart there before." Lindsey said excitedly.

 "Oh really, and how many of these have you seen then, Lesbo." Allie said with an evil grin.

"I do have to shower after gym class, thank you very much. You were the one doing the strip tease a second ago." Lindsey said as Allie gasped and she knew that she had won that round. Lindsey smiled triumphantly until Allie jumped toward her and began tickling her mercilessly.

"Oh, then I guess it's time for you to strip then." Allie said giggling as she grabbed the belt loop to Lindsey's jean shorts and pulled them down in one swift motion. Lindsey blushed as Allie laughed at her craftiness. Her giggling stopped suddenly as she noticed Lindsey step out of the shorts completely and seductively began lifting her t-shirt. She pulled it over her head and then removed her matching bra and panties. Neither one said a thing as they both lowered themselves into the bathtub.

 "Lindsey, what would you say if I kissed you." Allie said, smiling nervously at the naked girl lying across from her.

"I don't know, why? Have you been thinking about it?" Lindsey said with a heartfelt smile.

 "Have you?" asked Allie.

"Maybe, why don't you do it and see what I'll say." Lindsey said, half sarcastically, but half wanting her to really do it. Allie smiled and leaned in as Lindsey did the same. They both tilted their heads slightly and brought their lips together. It was like no other kiss Lindsey had ever felt. She had had a lot of boyfriends in the past, but none of their kisses had ever felt like this. This felt like a dream. As they parted Allie smiled nervously at Lindsey, waiting for her to comment on what just happened. Lindsey looked back at Allie with the most sincere smile that Allie had ever seen and said the words that would change their new friendship into something completely different, "Pinch Me."

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Comments and Reviews
Lizbelle wrote this:
It was kinda short, but it had potential. I'll have to see next weeks episode to form my full opinion.

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