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"Horny Softball Girls"

Season Four: Episode Ten
(Lifetime No: episode 43)

Copyright © 2010

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Summary: In the ALL NEW 10th episode of Season Four of 'My First Time', A brand new tale from the prolific pen of Mr. TVM. This time featuring a pair of 10 year old friends and softball teammates who find they have more than one interest in common. An after game invite from one friend to another, and the intervention of an older sister, is all it takes for one to discover something new. A something that feels wonderful on the surface but when left to the hands of a caring friend...becomes, literally, mind blowing.

Original Airdate: Tuesday, May 11, 2010 @ 8:00 p.m.

Story Codes: ff, oral, mast, preteen, voy

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"Good game girls," Coach Romanowski said as we sat at our lockers after the first game of the Little League Softball season in Pittsfield, Massachusetts. "Now don't go getting the big head because you won your first game. Hit the showers and wash out your pits."

"Why Coach? None of us have hair their yet," Rose, my best friend, asked and got a laugh from the others.

"Because soon it'll be like a forest," Coach said as she showed us hers.

"EWWWWWWWW," Came the collective response as Coach laughed and then took off the fake fur patch and tossed it at Rose. She jumped up and ran to behind me as everyone continued laughing. Coach Romanowski is so much fun.

"She always picks on me," Rose griped after Coach had exited the locker room for her office.

"You're always the first one to make a smart remark," I pointed out.

"But she's always funny," Candy, mine and Rose's other best friend, said from her locker next to Rose's. "But that is a good point, Liz."

"I don't like you two very much," Rose said as Candy and I laughed.

We watched the rest of the girls clear out one by one before we stripped down to our birthday suits and headed for the showers. Each of us taking a stall and soaping up as we chatted back and forth about the game we'd just won. It was then that I, for the first time, can remember seeing someone rub themselves between their legs. It happened as I was rinsing off and stepped out of my stall and noticed that Rose's stall curtain was open a bit with her leaning back against the wall and rubbing herself slowly. Jumping when she saw me and pretending nothing had happened. I returned to my stall and relived the moment over and over again as it wasn't something I'd ever really considered. Being that I was only 10 that's not to surprising.

"Can we talk?" Rose asked after we had both emerged from the showers and stood dripping wet and naked in front of the mirrors across the room.

"Sure," I said without looking at her.

"You saw me, huh?" Rose asked. "Answer me, Liz."

"Yes I did," I said as I finally looked at her and noticed she now had a really dark tan (with tan lines). This was of course the first time I'd seen her naked since before school ended. For some reason I found my eyes wanting to look at her more and I had to force myself to look away. "Why were you doing that?"

"It feels good," She said. "Don't you do it?"

"I guess not," I said and wondered if it really felt that good. I had honestly heard that it did feel good but had never given much thought to doing it myself. "Not that I think it's wrong or anything."

"It's not really and it relieves the tension," Rose said as she bumped my shoulder playfully. Making me wonder what kinda tension she had been feeling.

"What kind of tension?" I asked.

"From being horny," She said as Candy came out of the shower and my eyes looked her up and down also. Landing on her rippling abs (she does Gymnastics) and again finding something that I did not want to look away from. "Don't tell me you never feel horny."

"I do all the time," Candy said. "Why are you talking about that?"

"Liz, caught me rubbing myself," Rose said.

"So?" Candy asked as she picked up a towel and made a small show out of rubbing it between her legs and moaning like a porn star for a moment. Even if I hadn't been horny before, that sure did the job. "Everyone does it."

"I don't for one," I said as I walked off and into the locker room to get my clean clothes. Candy and Rose emerging a few moments later and doing the same. 20 minutes later the three of us stood outside and waited on our rides. Rose was the first to be picked up as she climbed into her Mom's car and was soon gone. Leaving me and Candy sitting side by side on the bench. "Sorry if I was a mood spoiler inside."

"It's no big deal," Candy said. "Some people think it can hurt you."

"I don't think that," I said firmly. "I just don't really get horny enough to do that."

"Believe me once you did it you won't ever wanna stop," She said and that certainly peaked my interest.

"But don't you have to be horny to do it?" I asked as a car came by and I found myself hoping that it wasn't Candy's parents.

"You find something that turns you on," Candy advised. "It's not brain surgery."

"What turns you on?"

"Lots of stuff," Candy said. "My brother has a magazine that I look at with lots of girls in it..."

"You look at naked girls and do that?" I asked with interest.

"And guys too," She informed me.

"But you do look at girls?" I asked to verify.

"Yes, Liz I do," Candy said with an amused look. "You like that, huh?"

"Of course not," I snapped and looked away.

"You do," She said as she pushed me and giggled. "Admit it, lesbo."

"I am not gay," I said.

"You don't gotta be gay to like looking at girls," Candy said.

"You don't?"

"No way," Candy said. "My older sister Lolly said she likes doing it with girls and guys."

"OHMIGOD," I said in shock. "What is that like?"

"I don't really know because I've never done it but I do have a video of it," Candy said as my interest peaked again. I was now dying of curiosity. "Wanna come over sometime and see it?"

"I've never been to your house before," I said.

"I invite you but since you like Rose better you always go to her house" Candy said. I could tell now that she was hurt by that.

"I do not like her better," I said as Candy shrugged. "I'll come to your house tonight if my parents will let me."

"Only to see that video," Candy said as I laughed but knew she loved having me all to herself, for once.

"So you finally got something better than, Rose," I said as Candy looked at me in shock and poked me in the ribs. I jumped up away from her as she chased me and tackled me to the grass. A pair of giggling, squealing laughs could be heard as we battled on the grass by the front door. "Get off me you lesbian."

"I'm gonna..." Candy grunted as she finally pinned me down by the hands and moved across my thighs before she went on, "...make you watch that video and then make mad passionate lesbian love to you."

"No, you are not," I squealed as she laughed and stopped just as a mini-van pulled up in front of the building. Both of us looking to see Candy's sister, Lolly, getting out of the mini-van a moment later and watching us with an amused smile. Candy and I jumping back to our feet and trying to compose ourselves.

"You two lesbo's putting on a display for the neighbors?" Lolly asked as I blushed so bad I could have fainted.

"I'm not gay but I bet you are," Candy said to her sister as she got up and pulled me up to.

"You're not huh?" Lolly asked. "So you don't still wanna get with your girlfriend there?"

"I'll kill you," Candy practically screamed as she smacked her sisters arm in protest.

"She wanted to do what with who?" I asked.

"You," Lolly said as she ran off laughing. Leaving me and Candy with an uncomfortable silence now looming between us. I bumped her shoulder and finally got her to look at me as she smiled and followed after me as I climbed into the mini-van. Calling my Mom on the way to Candy's and asking for permission to spend the night and finding out that she had completely forgotten I had a game as she was dealing with my little brother. "Everything OK?"

"All set," I said as we pulled into the driveway of Candy's house and then into the expansive garage. Candy still not having spoken to me as all three of us got out of the mini-van.

"I swear sometimes I have a much bigger mouth than I could have ever dreamed," Lolly said as we walked into the kitchen. "I was kidding when I said Candy wanted to fuck you. So will you two start talking again?"

"Just go on your date and leave us alone," Candy said to her sister as she walked off up the steps to her bedroom.

"Hold on, I wanna ask you something," Lolly said to me after we heard Candy's bedroom door close.

"Yes?"

"Would do it with Candy if I paid you?" Lolly asked as I looked at her in shock.

"What?" I asked.

"I'll give you 50 bucks if you do it with Candy like she wants," Lolly said as she showed me the fifty dollars. "If you do it this is yours."

"I'd love to have the money..."

"So you'll do it?" She asked.

"I've never even done anything like that before" I admitted. "So I guess I wouldn't be the best person to ask."

"She likes you a lot," Lolly said as I smiled. "And you will love pussy if you try it. There's two reasons to try it."

"And that fifty is another reason to try it," I said as Lolly laughed. "But I have no idea what to do."

"Candy has a video she downloaded that shows you everything," Lolly said. "Ask her to watch it."

"That's how she got me to come over tonight," I said as Lolly grinned knowingly.

"I knew you were interested," Lolly said. "Now...there's my date. Just go and ask her about the video and don't worry about her liking you. Cause after you feel how good a girl can make you cum then you won't be worried anymore."

"That sounds sooo fun," I said as she pushed me towards the steps. I dropped my bag and ran on up the steps as Lolly left through the front door. "Candy?"

"Come on in," She said as I came in and found her already at the computer and surfing the internet. Now in her usual panties and bra. "Lolly finally done making fun of me?"

"She said you should show me the video we talked about," I blurted out as I closed Candy's bedroom door. Candy grinned widely at that announcement and motioned me over. I pulled a chair up next to her and sat down. My pussy becoming tingly with anticipation and prompting my mind to say, without cooperation of my brain, "I think I'm horny now."

"Seriously?" She asked as I squirmed a bit in the chair and blushed.

"I think so," I said. "I never felt like this before."

"Is it getting bad yet?" Candy asked as she grinned at me.

"I don't know," I said as I adjusted my shorts and jerked in delight when the seam rubbed at my pussy lips. That felt nice. "But I think it is."

"Rub it then," Candy said as I gave her a 'knock it off' look. "What? Rub it and it will stop."

"For real?" I asked and being completely clueless I figured she was telling me the truth. So I leaned back in the chair and was about to rub through my shorts when Candy stopped my hand and made me put it down my the front. I gave her a frustrated look but did it anyway. I tensed up a bit when I rubbed my bald pussy and found out she was right as after only a couple of seconds the itchy tingly feeling went away and turned into something much better. A really nice feeling that kept getting better each time I rubbed it. Candy smiled when she saw the effect it had and that made me wanna stop to show her. But her next suggestion made me even hornier.

"Pull your shorts down and do it," She suggested as I now rubbed furiously at my sex and fell completely in love with the pleasure I was feeling for the first time. Her moving to the floor and getting between my thighs should have alarmed me but I trusted her as she gently pulled at my shorts. My brain no longer functioning properly prompted me to lift my hips and let them and my panties go down. I felt this intense rush of confidence and hormones sweep over me as the binding effects of my shorts were gone and I was free to explore more freely. I really picked up the pace on my pussy as Candy watched intently and kissed one of my thighs and then the other. That added an extra bit of sensation to the pleasure that I loved. "This feels really....what are you doing?"

"Let me do it for you," Candy suggested with her hand now on mine and forcing to me stop.

"No, now stop it feels really good," I said.

"It'll feel even better if I do it for you," She said as I began to come around to her way of thinking. "Let me do it my way one time and if you don't like it I'll stop."

"Fine," I said as I my hand away and, having no idea what she was gonna do, I almost screamed for joy when she lowered her head and licked my pussy. A startling amount of pleasure flooded my body as she quickly did it over and over again. Like a hungry girl she licked me as I closed my eyes and abandoned all thoughts of making her stop and just wanted it to go on forever. My stomach bowed in and my pussy felt so good every time she did it. Especially right at the top of my slit, my clit, she licked that and it sent me to shaking. And then it stopped...OHMIGOD talk about frustration. "What happened? Did I do something?"

"Just wondering if you like it better with me doing it?" She asked.

"Yes, OHMIGOD, I loved it," I said and practically pleading with her to do it some more.

"Will you do it with me again if I make you cum?" She asked.

"Cumming? Does that feel better than this?" I asked in total confusion.

"You are seriously sheltered," She said as I gave her a dirty look.

"Cumming happens at the end and it's why you do it," Candy explained. "Now if I make you cum you have to do it to me."

"OK, OK, please just make me do that," I pleaded and at that moment would have agreed to letting Sarah Palin be in charge of the nuclear weapons to have that pleasure again.

Candy grinned and returned to my pussy and I laid my head back and moaned in satisfaction as she licked me again and again right on my clit. I thought I was cumming already as it kept feeling better and better. But then it happened, and OH WOW FUCK WOW! it felt like heaven on earth as my pussy erupted. Bowing my stomach in, my thighs quivered, my toes curled inside my shoes and my pussy felt like...well, heaven. She licked me the whole time until it faded into after glow and I got my cum licked up too. WOW!

We never did make it to that video. We spent the rest of the night licking each others pussy and cumming...in every way we could think of. After that I was a lot better friend to Candy when she invited me over for a night. Of course Rose didn't much care for our lesbian stuff when she found out...but I don't care. All I cared about after my first time with Candy was...well tasting her Candy. Her cum is really sweet? And oh yeah, I told Lolly to keep that 50 bucks. LOL.

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