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My First Time

"Merry Christmas, My Baby *part two*"

Season Two: Episode Seven

Copyright © 2008

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Summary: In the ALL NEW 7th episode of Season Two of 'My First Time', in the second of a two parter, we find out Mackenzie's reaction to the news of how her best friend Crystal feels about her. But just as the two friends are figuring things out, Marley, the little sister, interrupts them. Later, as Uncle Pete and Marley head off to bed, Crystal and Mackenzie retire for the night as well, exchanging presents. Remarkably, both girls have very similar gifts in mind for the other.

Original Airdate: Wednesday, July 30, 2008 @ 8:00 p.m.
(followed by an ALL NEW 'Megan in Charge!')

Story Codes: ff, oral

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"What is wrong with you?" Mackenzie asked.

"You are" I said as my anger boiled over.

"Me? What did I do?"

"Oh let me see" I said, "Acted like what I said on the phone earlier didn't matter. Do you know how hard that was for me to say, not to mention important, and you act like it wasn't even said."

"Processing?" She asked in a shy tone of voice that began melting away the layers of anger slowly. "I'm not avoiding, I just didn't wanna have a scene in front of Marley."

"It..." I started before she covered my mouth with her hand.

"Anytime someone declares their love for you, it's important" She said as I smiled, "It just came as a shock is all. I mean who knew you felt the same?"

"The same?" I asked as she grinned and nodded. My mind reeled at this revelation as I stood there smiling at the girl I had fallen so in love with and she was saying she felt the same. "God I been flirting with you for months as a hint."

"You were?" I asked as she laughed out loud.

"Yessss duh" She said as I blushed, "I even kissed you at the softball game and you like did nothing about it. How dense do you have to be?"

"I thought about that all day" I said in my defense as she bit her lip and asked, "You did?"

"But you know me, I'm a big chicken" I said as I tensed up when I saw her move a step closer to me. "Well I may be dense but I know what I wanna do right now."

"Go inside and find Marley?" She asked with a teasing grin.

"Nope" I said as I brought my hand up and gently brushed her cheek, I swear I had goose bumps on my goose bumps at that moment. My hand was trembling as I tucked a stray hair behind her ear and our eyes never left each others.

"License plate bingo?" She asked with a grin as I rolled my eyes and started to giggle. "UGH Mack, trying to have a romantic moment with you is impossible."

"I know" She said in frustration as she sat down on the front end of a car behind her, "I suck at romance, it's always easier to make someone laugh that say something heartfelt."

"It's OK I know you mean well" I said as I sat down beside her and bumped my shoulder into hers. She smiled and raised her eye brows suggestively and we both started to giggle. Then I felt her hand on mine and she laced her fingers through mine as our eyes met again and this time it wasn't a goofy Mackenzie joke that broke the spell.

"I'm scared" She whispered as a smile came over my face, "I mean if this is real I'm gonna be in trouble."

"Trouble can be good" I said softly as she bit her lip and leaned in a bit and I closed my eyes and tilted my head. Praying like mad she was gonna kiss me. I could faintly hear in my head, even in the cloudy state of mind I was in, the click clacking of a pair of shoes getting louder as they got closer and suddenly I felt Mackenzie pull away and let go of my hand as I look to see Marley running toward us.

"I found him...oops" She said as she stopped short of the car we were still sitting on and looked at me and then Mackenzie. "Shit....could I have worse timing?"

"NO" I said as she laughed nervously. "I was about to kiss her."

"So I was right?"

"Yeh...as always" I said as Marley did a 'Homer Simpson' style fist pump followed by a "WOO HOO!"

"So you're not shocked or anything?" Mackenzie asked with a smirk.

"Yeh Mack, she predicted the outcome" I said as Marley gave a smug look.

"No way" Mackenzie said.

"Yes way, I knew you were into her" Marley said as she stepped in front of Mackenzie, "Just never thought she liked you."

"Me either" Mackenzie said as she glanced at me with a sweet smile, turning back to Marley she said, "Seems you're more excited than we are, maybe Marley wants some girl girl action too."

"Hell yeah babe" Marley said as I laughed and watched her flash Mackenzie two thumbs up and step closer in a daringly bold move. I thought to myself that there was no way you could get an inch on my little sister. She'd go along with anything you said practically and dare you to go farther than she already had. Mackenzie looked to me for a moment and Marley stepped even closer and said, "Was that an invitation?"

"No it's not mini dyke" Mackenzie said pushing her away as Marley nearly fell down laughing. "How do you put up with her?"

"Trust me, she's a trip...24/7" I said as I stepped behind Marley and put my arms around her neck and hugged her.

"I'd love to see you two really kiss" Marley said as I looked down at her and saw no teasing smile and realized she was serious. "I'm not kidding, come on swap some spit for me."

"Now there that's better" I said putting my hand over Marley's mouth as she started murmuring and trying to talk as me and Mackenzie laughed.

"Hey girls" Uncle Peter said as he came up on the scene and smiled. Handsome devil.

"Help me Uncle Pete she won't let me talk" Marley said after moving my hand away for an instant and then moving it back and again starting to murmur.  

"From where I'm standing that seems like a good thing" Uncle Peter said as we laughed.

"You ready to roll Pete?" I asked as he nodded and seemed dead tired, "Piling his luggage in the trunk, Marley dragged him into the back seat by her as they seemingly got lost in conversation."

"Hey, wait" Mackenzie said as she stopped me from closing the trunk.

"What?" I asked as she stepped into my space and our bodies lightly touching as she kissed me. God what a wonderful surprise, it only lasted for an instant but damn it almost made me wanna scream for joy as I saw the look of love in her eyes as we both smiled at the other. "Oh that."

"Good?" She asked as I wrapped my arms around her and pulled her into me and kissed her again. She offered no resistance as our lips fell in time with each others in life's most perfect rhythm.  A blowing horn kept it from progressing any further as we parted and blushed. "Yeh, I know."

"Is this my Christmas present?" I asked as I stroked my hand playfully up and down her arm. "Cause I like, I like."

"Not this" She said with a smirk and then shocking me when she raised her shirt and showed me those six pack abs and gorgeous flat toned stomach as she pointed at it and then motioning up and down her whole body with her hand. "But this...everything under these clothes?"

"Yeh?" I said and hoping and praying she was gonna go where I thought she was.

"This is your Christmas present" She said as she held her shirt up and for the first time, nervously, I let her place my hand on the bare skin of her stomach and knew I was now free to enjoy it. My hand came to rest on the silky smooth skin over her abs as she purposely let them ripple as my whole body reacted. She gave me the naughtiest look as she saw my smile and flexed her abs again, knowing I was loving it now.

"Damn, that is so sexy" I said as my other hand joined my first and I made a slow trip across her abs as she leaned in and kissed me softly. Oh lord I wanted her right there. I moved my lips in time with hers slowly as she offered her tongue to me gently and I met it with mine. My fingers gently squeezing into the skin of her stomach as our tongues began massaging against the other, that was mind numbing, god it felt good. Her hands moved to my neck and cupped my face as she kissed me like I'd dreamed of for the longest time. One hand slipping into my hair as she quickened the pace and moved her other hand to my jeans and pulling my shirt out of it's tuck. I pulled away suddenly as I panted and moved my hands.

"What? I do something wrong?" She asked.

"No, no, we should get going and we can sooo continue this at home" I said as I kissed her softly on the lips. "Cause you're spending the night with me."

"I am?" She asked with a teasing grin.

"I'll give you your present early" I said as she grinned devilishly.

"Please tell me it's a lot like the one I got for you?" She asked.

"Nope mine has a bow" I said as she gave me a weird look. "I think you'll like it, seriously, Mac. It don't come with a user's manual though so you'll have to play around with it for a few hours and see if you can get it's motor running."

"Motor running?" She asked in confusion and I knew I had thrown her just enough to hopefully keep her off the scent, so to speak.

"Motor running" I said as she shrugged and closed the trunk. We pulled out and headed towards the house a few minutes later. Marley chatting up Uncle Pete and Mackenzie seemingly being deep in thought at my mysterious "gift". Mackenzie made sure to call her mom and OK her night at my house just as we pulled into the driveway. Marley pulled Uncle Pete inside as me and Mac struggled with his luggage.

"Girls I am so dead tired I'm going straight to bed" He announced to my relief as he kissed mine and Marley's cheeks.

"AHEM" Mackenzie said as she turned her face to the side and waited for Uncle Pete to kiss her cheek. Laughing when he did and watching him and Marley head off to bed after another couple of minutes of chatter. "So, Crys...where's this present you promised me?"

"My room" I said as I took her hands and pulled her along as I walked backwards down the hall and to my room. She pushed the door shut behind us with her foot as we entered. "Got it figured out yet?"

"Not unless you got me a crotch rocket" She said as I laughed and said, "You are soooo far off. Close your eyes."

"Oh OK" She said with a smile as she closed her eyes and I flipped her off to test if she was peaking. She began to giggle as I pushed her.

"Cover your eyes for real" I said, "Please?"

"OK, OK" She said as she covered her eyes and turned her back. I quickly turned around and opened the top drawer of my dresser and pulled out the huge red bow and disappeared into my bathroom.

"What's up Crys?" I heard Mackenzie asked.

"Chill, Mac, I'll be out in a minute" I said as I discarded my clothes as quickly as possible. Partly to avoid the on-set of nerves which usually prevents me from doing something like this. But something suddenly did occur to me, this would be my first time, I mean I am a virgin, never been touched. There's a moment of clarity, realizing you're about to give away the most precious gift a woman has. But think about, Mackenzie was one too, I know this for certain or at least I hoped I did. So it's not like I'm screwing some chick just for fun, it's someone I love with all my heart. I definitely think I'm in love with her. I slipped the bow on and watched in the mirror as it covered my tits and then adjusted the streamers on the bottom to cover my more "sensitive area". Let's say it did it well enough to keep that bald patch of skin out of view, temporarily. "Mac?"

"Yeh?" She asked.

"Cover your eyes" I said.

"Again?"

"Do it or no present and trust me I think you'll like this" I said and not knowing at that very moment, that Mackenzie had a little surprise of her own planned for me.

"OK, covered, seriously" She said as I peaked out and stuck one arm out and flipped her off. Getting no response I walked out nervously and stood in front of her. Noticing then that she was wearing my big white plush robe.  

"You can look" I said as she opened her eyes and I held my hands up as if to present myself.

"For me?" She asked with a huge smile.

"For you" I said as she bit her lip.

"Ohmigod Crys, you are so gorgeous" She said as she stepped a big closer and touched my cheek with her fingers as she kissed me softly. "Can I take the bow off?"

"It's your present you can do whatever you'd like" I said with a flirty smile. "Let me recommend a gentle tug downward."

"Yeh OK" She said and following it with another kiss as she did just that and I felt the ribbon just fall away, landing by my ankles as we parted again and I could see by the look on her face that she liked what she saw. She wanted to touch me, I saw that, I also saw she was incredibly nervous as I put her hand on my stomach.

"It's OK baby, I wanna feel it" I said as I took a hold of the knot in her robe and untied it and got a surprise myself. She was only wearing a tan underneath, a dark rich one too. Now I had imagined this very thing a few times but no amount of imagination in this world could replicate the real thing. Damn, girl had a body I wanna spend a few days and nights giving pleasure too. "You are so gorgeous."

"MMMMMMMM wow Crys, you too" She said as she took my hand and backed up the few feet to the bed and sat down as I followed. Feeling her hand on my stomach as I watched her smile with an adoring smile as she stroked it up slowly and met my breast softly as I moaned and bit my lip. Soon her other hand met my other and she cupped them as I leaned down and kissed her softly. "You know this is my first time right?"

"I thought it might be" I said as I lowered myself to the mattress beside her and kissed her again. Feeling her tongue slip against mine for a long moment and massage my tongue with hers. "Me too."

"So you won't get mad if I'm bad at it?" She asked as we both broke up laughing.

"Damn it, Mack, knock off the jokes" I said as I pushed her playfully and crawled up on the bed and just as I turned to lay down she crashed into me and pinned me down by the arms, on to my back. Of course sending both of us back into a fit of giggles which threatened to ruin the entire night. She smiled at me as I got my giggles under control and leaned up before she could say anything else and kissed her on the lips. Willing her to kiss me back and giving her my tongue for hers as she still held my hands at bay. I felt her melt into me as we kissed and finally the moment went from giggles to passion as she released my hands and got over my stomach and kissed me like I'd always wanted. Oh damn, my body was coming online now in that most sensual of ways as my hands moved to her silky smooth skin and the desire began to over both of us. She pulled away and looked down at me with a dreamy smile and I prayed she wouldn't say something stupid. "You sure you want me to have it?"

"Completely" I said with a soft kiss. "Make love to me Mackenzie."

"Beautiful words" She said with a sweet smile and kissed me one last time as she began to kiss her way down my body, which by now was burning with desire. Every kiss from her lips to my skin made it grow and I was losing control as she worked her way to my breasts. Looking up at me and softly sucking on one of my nipples as she watched for a reaction. She got one too, as the gentle sensations swept over me and made my body shiver in delight. "That right?"

"MMMMMMMMMM damn yesss" I moaned in a light whimper as she switched to the other and did much the same thing. I begged her to go lower and do what I had asked as soon as possible. I wanted it so bad at that moment I was about to beg when she slipped down the bed and, now on her stomach, got between my thighs. Now in perfect alignment with my 'sex' as she smiled up at me and circled both of her arms under my thighs and around to the outside. She held her hands up and I was kinda confused as to what she wanted. "What Mac?"

"Put your hands in mine" She said softly as she kissed my stomach and I smiled as I did what she asked, pressing our palms together and lacing our fingers. Suddenly I felt like we were one, and I smiled down at her and she asked me one more time with her eyes if it was OK and I nodded yes and begged that she would just go for it. She did. The first movements of her tongue against me made me shiver in delight and immediately I squeezed my fingers into hers and let out a soft moan. My eyes opening wide when I felt her tongue slide across the little center of my pleasure. Ohmigod, that felt like heaven on this earth and I wanted so bad to beg for more of that treatment. But somehow she knew what I needed, better then me, as she continued her path up and down and made my body slowly build towards my eventual reward, small beads of sweat beginning to drip down my forehead as I arched my back and softly dug the heel of my foot into Mackenzie's back as I whimpered in pure pleasure. She figured out quickly I believe what my favorite part was and every time she licked across it I squeezed my fingers into hers and moaned a bit louder into the night. I swear I saw her smile as she began to focus her attack now and licked across it repeatedly as my breaths began coming in pants, arching my back and my eyes rolling back in my head as the sensations became all I ever wanted to feel. I squirmed now every time her tongue crossed it and squeezed my thighs around her head and gave into the most wonderful sensations I had ever felt. She licked harder and more roughly a few last times as I squeezed her fingers tighter and moaned loudly as the pleasure became too much for my body and I experienced a few wonderfully amazing seconds in life's most perfect place, pure heaven. My body trembled in the arms of my best friend as she made me a woman. I could not have imagined a more perfect moment if I had tried as I felt the sensations fade and then suddenly I felt another set come almost as strong for an instant as she milked out my honey for me. Finally relaxing, my fingers still laced with hers as she laid her head on my stomach and grinned up at me. "You're not a virgin anymore Crys."

"God you made that so perfect" I said as she smiled lovingly and let me pull her up by the hands. Letting her playfully pin my hands above my head as our fingers remained laced and she moved across my stomach as she leaned down and kissed me softly. "Thank you."

"Thank you for letting me have something I know you cherish" She said with a kiss. "I love you Crys."

"Oh god, now those are beautiful words too" I said as she grinned. "I am so in love with you too."

"I guess I did pretty good?" She asked as I smiled.

"Girl you are either a natural or you just know me so well you knew what I needed" I said.

"Neither" She said softly as she squeezed my fingers with hers. "I could tell by the way you squeezed my fingers and your thighs and the way you moaned. I knew after a few seconds what felt best for you and just focused on that."

"MMMMMMMMMM oh wow it did feel best" I said as Mackenzie smiled. "Soooo good, I never felt anything close to that before."

"Merry Christmas, my baby" She said as she kissed me softly.

"I'm your baby now huh?" I asked with a knowing smile.

"Wanna be?"

"Yes, more than anything else in this world" I said as she smiled and we soon kissed again.

We got so lost in each other for the next few minutes and the rest of the night for that matter. But sometime later, I know it was before sunset, she gave me her most precious gift too. What a night, what an amazing, endlessly pleasure filled night of love making that was. I fell so in love her with that night. I woke after just a few hours of sleep, still wrapped in the arms of 'my baby', god that sounds soooo good. It was easy to see that things had changed for us as we walked into the living room to join my Mom, Dad, Marley, Uncle Pete, 'Papa' and 'Ganny'.

"Well heavens to Betsy, Richard look at your daughter she is glowing from head to toe" Ganny said as I boldly wrapped myself in Mackenzie's arms and smiled at her. "Lord child you look to be floating on thin air."

"I am" I said, "I'm in love. Mom, Dad, I'm in love with Mackenzie."

"And I'm in love with her too" Mackenzie said as goose bumps appeared on my skin and Marley jumped up and came running and crashed into us as she hugged us happily.

"So happy for you" She said as she kissed my cheek and said, "I love you Crys."

"I love you too Mar Bear" I said as I hugged her. Marley grinned as she looked at Mackenzie and said with a knowing smirk, "Welcome to the family."

"Our little girl isn't so little anymore" Mom said as she hugged Dad and both smiled proudly.

"No, I'm not" Marley said as she walked across the room and confronted Mom and Dad, "Now how about we talk about my allowance?"

What a Christmas that was. Everyone was so happy to be together, me and Mackenzie especially. Marley screamed so loud she almost deafened me when she opened her Xbox 360 and wouldn't leave my lap for the next hour. My favorite present (aside from Mackenzie's "gift" from earlier) was the one from my parents and Mackenzie's. They trusted me and Mackenzie to "not do anything we'd regret" and let us continue to sleep over at each others house. MMMMMMM, damn if they only knew how many nights of endless love making that produced they might have not been so generous.

It's been two years now, and me and Mackenzie are still dating and so in love. Marley, the little lesbo, is dating a sweet girl named Zoe Manning from down the street, to my parents full approval. While, Ganny and Papa made the move from up north and came to live with us full time. I love having them here and they've basically adopted Mackenzie as their own (she adores them too). I still look back on that Christmas, which is why I wanted to write this down, to try and preserve the memory of that night forever. It's snowing outside, as I sat on the window seat of my room wrapped in Mackenzie's arms, recording all of this on my laptop. So in the words of my love, Mackenzie, "Merry Christmas, my baby."

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