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Dear Diary
(Girlfriends)


* * * Starring * * *

Jenny
"Narrator"

Lynn
"The New Friend"


Dear Diary (Girlfriends)

"I Made Love with This Girl"

Episode Five

Copyright © 2011

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Summary: In the ALL NEW 6th episode of 'Dear Diary (Girlfriends)', the girls continue their time together and explore even more ways to pleasure each other. Later, after the girls take care of the hunger pains by ordering a pizza, Jenny finally decides it's time for her lady love to try something for the very first time.

Original Airdate: Tuesday, November 1, 2011 @ 9:30 p.m.

Story Codes: ff, oral, preteen

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Sunday, January 11 (continued)

Dad finally left, and I was alone with Lynn. She seemed very tense, and I wasn’t sure what to do. I took her hand and led her up to my room. We sat down next to each other on the bed. I couldn’t possibly do anything with her in this state.

”Nervous?” I asked her.

She nodded.

”You don’t have to do anything, you know. It’s all up to you. Don’t think about me. The only way you can disappoint me is if you do something you don’t want to do, ok?”

She nodded again.

I pulled off my t-shirt and helped her take off her nightgown. We kissed for about a minute or so.

I got an idea for something that might help her relax. I got up and went over to the stereo. I put on Two Become One, which is one of Lynn’s favorite songs. It’s perfect for slow dancing. Plus, its lyrics are also sexually suggestive. I went over to Lynn and stretched out my hands.

”May I have this dance?”

She took my hands and I pulled her into my arms. She took hold around my waist, and I had my arms around her neck, as we moved slowly to the soft music.

I felt her soft skin on mine as my boobs pressed against her tight body. Her tension lessened gradually, and by the time the song started over for a fourth time, she was relaxed. I let my hands drop slowly along her back and land on her butt. I squeezed a little, and in return she pressed me even tighter to her. I could feel our pussies rubbing together. I whispered softly in her ear.

”You feel so good. I wanna make you come. I love you, baby girl. You are so beautiful. I wanna make love to you, baby.”

”I want you,” she whispered back.

I looked into her eyes. There wasn’t any nervousness in her face anymore, there was only anticipation.

”Are you sure,” I asked, just to make sure.

She nodded.

I turned the music off and led her back to the bed.

”You don’t have to do much,” I told her. ”Just relax, ok?”

She lay down flat in the middle of the bed and closed her eyes.

For a minute I just stood by her side, admiring the slim, hairless body of my sexy eleven-year-old girlfriend.

She looked up at me, her eyes pleading with me to come and join her on the bed. I climbed onto the bed and sat with one knee on either side of her waist. She closed her eyes again and I bent down and kissed her softly.

”I can’t believe how beautiful you are,” I whispered in her ear, ”and how lucky I am to have you.”

All the anticipation in the air made the kiss almost magic. I didn’t ever want to stop.

”Are you ok with me touching you?” I asked one last time. I was still a little bit worried she wasn’t ready.

”I’m ok, I promise,” she told me with a definiteness in her voice, that left no doubt in me. She wanted this.

”Then prepare yourself for pleasure like you’ve never experienced it before.”

She giggled at me.

”You sound like a commercial. Just get it on already.”

”Relax,” I told her. ”I’m just getting started. This will take a while.” I wasn’t about to rush this.

I kissed her neck tenderly and moved slowly down her body, kissing her all the way. She giggled as I licked and sucked her petite nipples.

”Like that?” I asked.

”Yes. Don’t stop,” she begged.

I continued caressing her soft skin, and I tickled her belly button. She screamed out loud in surprise and tried to turn, but I held her down firmly. I couldn’t help but laugh at her.

She relaxed pretty quickly, though, and I continued further down, to that area just above her pussy. I was now sitting on her knees. I felt her tense up a bit by my touch. I stopped and moved up along side of her. She opened her eyes and looked at me.

”Why did you stop?” she asked.

”I want a kiss,” I told her and rolled onto her, kissing her passionately. ”I love you,” I said between the kisses, over and over again.

”Give it to me,” she demanded, and I got off her and crept down to the end of the bed.

I grabbed her ankles and pulled her legs apart. I sat down on my knees between her legs, leaning forward.

Never before had I seen a pussy up close like this. It was absolutely exhilarating. The sweet smell of her hot little cunny was intoxicating. I wanted to push my finger right in there, but I decided a more careful approach would be better. I stretched out my right hand and carefully felt the outside of her smooth, hairless slit.

Lynn didn’t react much at all. With my left hand I spread her soft lips apart.

When I dragged my finger along the inside, I heard Lynn moaning. She liked that. I reached her clit, which was a bit different from my own, a little bigger, and I began massaging it. Lynn jerked in surprise.

”Wow. What was that?” she asked me.

”A girl’s best friend,” I told her. ”Now relax.”

I continued rubbing her clit, gradually increasing the tempo. She was breathing more heavily. I couldn’t let her come just yet, so I stopped rubbing altogether and got a disappointed grunt from Lynn.

I played a while with her lips and other parts of her pussy, before moving down to her cunt hole. I spread her open as much as I could, to see what it looked like down there. It’s very pink, that’s for sure, and glistening from her wetness.

”I want you to see this,” I said.

”What?” She opened her eyes and leaned on her elbows.

Very slowly I pushed my forefinger inside of her. Surprisingly, she wasn’t as tight as I expected. I slid my finger all the way to her cherry. She watched in amazement as my finger descended into her. Lynn had probably never had anything inside her there ever.

”Feels nice?” I asked her.

”I can feel your finger. It’s inside me!” she said in amazement.

”Lie down,” I told her. ”I’m not done yet.”

She readily complied. She wanted more.

I pulled out my finger and looked at it. Something compelled me to to taste her, and I put the finger in my mouth. It was delicious.

She wasn’t very wet, so I helped out by rubbing my fingers in my own pussy a few times. I was so horny by now that I almost came. Good thing I had masturbated once already.

I switched position and sat down on her right, where I could reach her face.

I bent over and kissed her. As I did that, I put my wet middle finger into her pussy. Her arms were now around my neck, pressing me closely to her. My finger slid in and out of her slowly. When I increased the tempo, she was moaning while kissing me.

I rubbed my little girlfriend’s clit faster and faster with my thumb, while my other fingers worked in and around her cunt hole.

She suddenly released her grip around me and pressed herself on the bed. In surprise, I stopped what I was doing and just looked at her, worried I might have done too much.

”What are you doing?” she snapped at me. ”Don’t stop now!”

I began rubbing and fingering her again. It was an incredible sight, watching my beautiful young girlfriend moan and squirm on the verge of her first orgasm. She was about to come for her first time ever!

I kept on working her pussy frantically with my hand, while I sucked and licked one of her nipples. My other hand was stroking her hair and forehead.

She was moaning louder and more intense now, mere seconds from coming.

Suddenly, her body jerked and she grabbed my wrist and pulled my hand away from her. She sat up and pushed herself up against the headboard, squeezing her thighs tightly together, both hands covering her pussy. Her face displayed an expression of shock and surprise.

It took a few moments for her to catch her breath.

”Are you alright?” I asked her.

She smiled at me. Then she just started laughing out loud. I gave her the biggest hug I could.

”You had your first orgasm. What did you think?” I asked her.

”I’ve never experienced anything like it. Thank you,” she said. ”It was amazing. You were amazing.”

”Anything for my little girl,” I told her.

The post-orgasm-Lynn was a sight. She was sweaty, her hair was a mess, and she absolutely glowed. The look of pure bliss in her eyes, as well as a smile that expressed utter joy, made her more beautiful than words can describe. I felt for her whatever it is that is beyond love, that cannot be explained to those who have not experienced it themselves, and that need not be explained to those who have.

We lay down on the bed and I pulled the cover over us both. With our bodies squeezed tightly together we hugged and kissed for what seemed like an eternity.

”Are you hungry?” I asked Lynn. It was about an hour later.

”Starving, but it feels so good to hold you. I don’t want to let you go.”

”Come on,” I said and climbed out of bed, dragging her with me.

We went down to the kitchen. Lynn wore slacks and a t-shirt, and I wore just a t-shirt. There were two portions of lasagna in the fridge which we heated and ate rather quickly.

After lunch we went back up to my room.

”What now?” Lynn wondered.

”Now you do me. Up for it?”

”I think so.”

We quickly undressed and got onto the bed. I rubbed my clit, but she grabbed my hand.

”Don’t do anything. It’s my turn,” she said with determination.

I lay down flat on the bed the way she had, and I kept my hands to my sides. The suspense was killing me.

I closed my eyes and was completely relaxed, and for the longest time nothing happened.

”What’ya doing?” I finally asked her, still with my eyes closed.

”I’m just admiring you. You are so beautiful when you’re lying like this.” She crawled up beside me and gave me a kiss. ”I’m not sure what to do.”

”Experiment,” was all the advice I offered.

She sat up on her knees and then bent down and went to work on my tits. She massaged, kissed, licked and sucked, and once she bit one of my nipples, sending shivers down my spine. I had fantasized about Lynn doing this to me, but never in my imagination did it feel this good.

I spread my legs as wide as I could and she got the hint. Turning around, still on her knees, she began playing with my pubic hair. It wasn’t long enough to pull her fingers through, so she stroked it instead.

Feeling someone else’s fingers on my pussy was completely different from doing it myself. I was getting very wet, I could feel it. Her fingers caressed my pussy softly.

”I need a better view,” she said, as she moved around and sat down between my spread legs.

It was weird knowing someone was closely examining my most private body part. Of course, knowing it was my sexy girlfriend made it feel very good at the same time.

She spread my pussy open and found my inner lips very interesting, judging by the care she took of them. She rubbed first one, then the other, between her thumb and forefinger. It made my whole body shiver.

Lynn’s exploration inside my pussy continued. She touched my clit carefully, and a surge of pleasure shot right through my entire body. I never felt like that when touching myself. Then she began rubbing it in circles and the intense pleasure made my body twist and turn uncontrollably. Still with my eyes closed, I took in all the smells and all the sounds, including my own moaning. I couldn’t take much more of it.

That’s when she found my hole. Instantly, she began feeling around its edges with her forefinger.

”Make me come,” I half pleaded, half demanded.

She stopped cold. I felt like I was going to shatter into a million pieces. I let my hands slide over to my aching pussy, but she pushed them right down on the bed again. She leaned over me.

”This is what it feels like when you stop in the middle of it,” she said. Was she punishing me for stopping before? ”Besides, you told me to experiment, and that’s what I’m doing.”

”Give it to me,” I begged her. ”Make me come.”

She sat back down on her knees, and continued her work. One hand was now playing with my wet cunt hole, while her other hand played with my clit and labia.

Then she stopped again. Almost screaming out loud, I opened my eyes and stared at her. She looked very pleased with herself, smiling at me.

”Fuck me,” I demanded.

She was rubbing again, the same way she had before the second stop, only faster. I felt my entire body building up for the orgasm.

I felt every muscle in my body tense up, almost to the point of breaking, before my body exploded in the hardest orgasm I have ever experienced. I don’t remember what I did, only that my back arched and Lynn lost the grip on my pussy. The orgasm seemed to go on and on in a pulsing rhythm, hitting me in waves, until I finally relaxed. My body was so weak I could barely move at all.

I just lay there, content with everything. Lynn tucked me in under the cover, and then she lay down on my shoulder and played with my tit. I was so worn out that I fell asleep.

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