The Writings of Lynnah Myst

So I’ve been thinking about writing some stories for a while, and I finally got the guts to actually sit there and type one out. And it does no good just sitting there on my computer, right? Thanks to modern technology and a minimal knowledge of html, I’ve whipped up this website to gather a bit of a consensus. Should I continue to write?

Here’s my first story. What do you think?