For more Reviews Read the Backlog
For May 5th thru Nov 13th 1999
or For Jan 1st thru May 4th 1999
or For All of 1998
Hello! I first want to give credit where
it is overwhelmingly due. I immensely enjoy the stories you post, especially
the Slaveworld series. Absolutely fascinating! I was reading a story you
link to in your "hall of fame" section, namely 'The Book', by "Blackie",
and was enjoying it very much, when I came to the end of the 12th section
and realized it was unfinished.I dont have anywhere to contact the author
of the story so I'm turning to you for help in finding the rest of it if
there is any. If you have any way of helping me with any info I'd be gratefull.
Thanks again for your selfless sharing of your talents and keep up the
good work! Sincerely, Joseph, 31 May 2000
"Greetings, Master Parz. I have
written a story your Master PC universe,
and I wanted to submit it to the resident deity of said universe for approval.
It is entitled 'Apartment 218--A Master PC Story' and is attached as two
SimpleText documents to this e-mail. If you have no objections, I'll
submit it to the EMCSA next week." AMOWAT,
writer, 30 May 2000
was a nice piece of totally ridiculous wish fullfillment that JR Parz does
Boris Ludmenkov, 28 May 2000
Review of "Friends":
Hmm. JR Parz is a smiling sociopath. The byplay between the MCer
and the user (separate roles here) is funny (in its execution) and ugly
(in its implications). While I don’t track with the body-mod thing, he
does the rest of it very skillfully, and this is more a story about enslavement
than BE. Whitney’s collapse is very erotic, and I like the evil tinge of
the serial recruitment at the end. It recalls some of what JR did in “Unholy
Desires”, and in a sense it may have a moral
point of its own: even someone who’s been knowingly enslaved isn’t above
doing the same thing to a good friend, in part just in order not to be
at the bottom of the food chain she’s been forced into for, as she herself
notes, the rest of her life." Trilby-else,
Writer, 28 May 2000
"How's it hanging JR? Just finished
Ace story, very erotic! I especially liked the new and improved Whitney
transforming her best friend Kristina into her personal lust slave.
Whitney's happy admission that "love" had nothing to do with her new relationship
was the best part." Fret Pearson, Writer,
27 May 2000
"Hey, what's up? I used to
go to your message board, but hadn't been in a long time. I don't
know why, I guess I just forgot about it. Perhaps it was because
you hadn't updated in a long time, and I was upset. Well, I visited
for the first time in a while, and I like the new stuff. Keep up
the good work, and I will be at the message board today."
Aphex, 24 May 00
Early Years is an excellent story. I'm
going to read the Agency "after" story now."
Robert, 23 May 00
Hello..... I have read the MCStories
for 5 yrs...and after reading this story (Alien's
Gift) again...I am wondering if you plan to
continue this thru killing off rick and bringing Laura back to the OSO....
Also...I was hoping for more anal with holly...and the others....and hope
this wont be the end of the series....also...can you have more cummmmmming
action in the story line...?? thanks...and will look for your answer
sooon...Jason, 20 May 00
"I've read a lot of your work, and Tempest
& The Twins is by far your best work.
I do have a couple of questions.. First of all, where do you get your inspiration
for your stories, and also, have you ever contacted one of the
fabulous artists out there to illustrate
one of your stories?" Tyrion, 17 Apr 00
"i really like your 'sabrina
and tabitha' story i would be really honored
if you could do 2 things . 1 i agree the ending sets up for more chapters
please do them and soon it is the best story i have ever read. 2. could
you please email me an autographed copy with a cool title page if you could."
14 Apr 00
"Just a technical note regarding 'Tempest
& The Twins': One does not go directly
from college to the FBI. You have to be 23 to get into the Academy at Quantico
and don't usually become an agent until you are 27 or 28.
Otherwise, good story." Jenna,
14 Apr 00
Regarding Master PC:
I am not usually a fan of breast enlargements or mind control but found
the way the author told this story.. his use of details and sticking with
the theme throughout the story to be delightful. I enjoyed this one
very much!", suckslut, 9 Apr 2000
Regarding Master PC:
"In one word great!!!", lord vega, 9 Apr 2000
& The Twins": "I feel that
Mr. Tempest is a BIT too conventional (I'm getting a bit sick of the angry
reject), and the Breast Expansion could me more of a focus, but a great
story." Anonymous, 9 Apr 2000
"I've read a lot of MC stories and really
enjoy your website immensely. I have almost completed chapter 1 of
Master PC story. with several others outlined
I would appreciate any advice or comments to help me in my writing." The
Story Man, 6 Apr 2000
"Cudos regarding your story (The
Agency's Early Years) where 6 micro chips
& fems. Great job. Hope to see more chapters/et al." "R",
6 Apr 2000
& The Twins": "Normally, I'm not
into the mind control stuff, but I like JRParz's stories quite a bit!
I'd like to see some more description of the sex, though." Glaive,
4 Apr 2000
"JR Parz...You don’t know me from Adam.
I Just wanted to take a few minuets to thank you for the work you’ve done
on your site. In a world where no one takes the time to say anything positive,
I want to. I don’t often e-mail strangers on the Internet. However, in
your case I wanted to make an exception. I am a lurker, a leach if you
will. I don’t contribute to the body of knowledge. On the other hand I
truly enjoy your web site. If I could write I’d love to contribute. Alas
writing isn’t one of my gifts. You know the old story lots of ideas but
a lack of ability to put them to paper. So I live vicariously through people
who can put their ideas to paper. I did want to ask you one question?
What you think I’d e-mail you out of the blue without a reason? ;^) Some
time ago you were planing to write a story about a sweet conservative housewife
accidentally getting turned in to a cheating nymphomaniac. What ever happened
to that story line? Thank you for you site." A
Fan, 3 Apr 2000
"Great story (Alien's
Gift). How can I get on your mailing
list for the follow up adventures of this storyline? Please advise.", RJW,
31 Mar 2000
JR, Man that was a great chapter (The
Charmed Ones Trilogy, Chapter Two) and worth
the wait. In your words a 'hot' read. I got hard reading it.
Especially Phoebe and Amber's scenes (he he). Very well done and realistic.
My favorite part of your writing is the dialogue and the little details
you put in the stories. Piper's seduction by Jonathan was nicely
done as well. He's a great villain! I could picture it vividly in my mind.
That's the great thing I like about this story is you can picture the characters/actresses
perfectly. Man, I can't wait until Prue get's hers. How is this going to
end?! :)" Trent Wolf, Writer, 31 Mar
"Great to see that Part two (The
Charmed Ones Trilogy, Piper's Passion) is
finally up. Subtle, complex and very erotic. I'm really looking
forward to how it's going to end. As and aside the Halliwell sisters
will also be appearing as part of an upcoming saga of mine..." Arcane,
Writer, 31 Mar 2000
"Great story (Tempest
& the Twins) man, you are the best!
mentioning Colt Winters was a great way yo tie everything together with
the roiginal Alien's Gift
stories.", Eric, 29 Mar 2000
"Would you know where I could find more
stories like "Spells "R" Us"? Not have to be the same kind, but MC.
breasts, etc. like you have. I'm a big fan, and would write some
stuff but im nervous about doing it. If I do, your my first reciever.
Thanks...**Obey Master PC** Did I type that? Oh well, gotta hate MC when
your a part of it. I know this is gonna sound major weird but could
you do a small story with me in it? Do you want measurments? ( i'd prefer
one of spells r us or Master PC ) Thanks, Signed XO's." Kira,
28 Mar 2000
"Hi, I wanted to pass on my thanks for
your efforts I really enjoyed "Alien Gift
" it left me wanting more. Thanks again." colin,
27 March 2000
"Hey man, I love your site so I decided
that I'd write my own story (Master PC: Greg's Adventure)." I've
always loved reading MC Stories. I've been reading them for quite
a few years. So when I saw one of my favorite stories Master
PC become the subject of many people's writings,
I decided to contribute some." Mike
Rules, 25 Mar 2000
"Dear Mr Parz: You concluded the
first part of "A Witch Casts Her Spell"
with... Part Two is due out in February 1999... Which sister becomes Jennifer's
and which sister becomes Jeff's...read the exciting conclusion!!!
I live in North Queensland Australia and thoroughly enjoy reading
your MC stories however... Did you ever write Part 2 and if so, where may
I obtain a copy please? I am left disturbedly in mid space wonderingwhat
will be the final outcome. Thank you." Joe,
25 Mar 2000
"Dear JR, My recollection is that we have
corresponded before, since you have been so kind as to include my story
"Roadside" on your wonderful site. Your own writings are very entertaining,
and I must say that I check your site frequently for updates. (I'm
particularly anticipating your Theresa Fawn vampiress story (Vampiress
Witch located on the Back Burner Page - A sequel to Cassandra - Vampiress),
being a vampire afficiando myself.) The main reason why I'm writing
is to ask a favor. I've been putting together a website of my own,
and I'm looking for some feedback, both on the technical merits and on
my stories. Most of what I am publishing has never been read by anyone
but me before, and I would appreciate any input you can offer."
TelePhoto, Writer, 22 Mar 2000
"That is a great beginning of the story
& the Twins). There are many other areas
where you could go off into. I would have broken up the conquest of each
woman into separate chapters. I like to play more mind games also. Mark,
21 Mar 2000
"The other day, I found your story "A
Witch Casts Her Spell" on the BE Archive (through
your link), and it promise a part two to it in I think january 1999. Where
is it? mcstories has only part one also, and your site doesn't have
any parts. Where can I find it? Thanks."
cliffrock, 21 Mar 2000
"Your stories are great! I
really enjoy your stories... especially The
Agency. Keep up the good work!
I was also wondering if you could to some other good mc authors- am having
a hard time finding them. thanx!"
Josh, 21 Mar 2000
"Great story (Tempest
& the Twins) to the world of Alien's
Gift. I enjoyed all of Tempest twist
and the way he got his revenge on each girl. One thing however, and
for me it was the part that drew me deeper into the story was the short
sidebar in the first half of the story where Tempest finds two young high
school students, Cindy Johnson and Wendy Silvers. The part where
he 'pushed' them, remaking Cindy and turning her into Wendy's lover was
great and I was dying to see if you told more of them later on in the story,
but since this was mainly Tempest and the Twins, the girls vanished.
I don't know if others have said so, but I for one would love to see how
things went for the girls and what Cindy feels now. Also luck might
hit and Tempest might run into the girls later and add a few more commands
to the lesbian lovers and bring them into his world, or maybe another alien
gift memeber might find them and 'play' with them too. All in all
yet another great story." Scramber, 20 March
Regarding "Tempest & the Twins:
"Very enjoyable though I do wish you'd used more of the 'action at a distance'
schtick that is the most enjoyable part of Aliens Gift stories for me.
And what is it with you and FBI agents? Lusting after Scully are we?" Boris
Ludmenkov, Writer, 19 Mar 2000
Regarding "Tempest & the Twins":
A more traditional instant-MC treatment from JRParz. It reminds me
a lot of 'Unholy Desires', which I managed to miss weeks ago when it came
out. JR, if he doesn't mind the appellation, is a true sociopath: his MCer
ruthlessly pursues his vendetta essentially just because he can, and it's
a turn-on. The victims are differentiated, even admirable, while the MCer
is still hard to figure out (not sure whether one is supposed to sympathize).
He's still got the knack for describing the victims' struggles and confusion,
but their battles are a one-way chivalry: their enemy does not respect
them, and like a barbarian overrunning a civilzed border fort he gives
no quarter. - This is hot, by the way. Depersonalization in
competent hands usually is, at least for this reader. JR continues
a frequent theme: the enforced lesbians who grow to enjoy their relationship.
(Problem for me, though: the MCer's reflection that even if he released
them they'd want it anyway. Not sure how that follows; sounds like the
MCer's losing a bit of the reality-check, or at least it's more limited
MC-story analogue. But it's a small problem in a well-built piece of erotica.)
His opening scene with the two targets-of-opportunity confused me a bit:
the MCer seemed to sympathize with one victim's desires, and it seemed
clear that he did so just because they reflected what he wanted to do,
but then he seemed to go beyond that. Hmm.
Trilby, Writer, 19 March 2000
Gift" stories are some of the best in the
field. Good luck to you, and keep on writing."
Kharn, 17 Mar 2000
The Agency...& The Agency's Early Years
Outstanding! Great! How soon will Chapter 3 be ready?
Also, when will Chapter 3 of "The Agency" story be available?
Great work!" Morris, 15 Mar 2000
Early Years is a great story....are you going
to continue it?..." Meticulus, 15 Mar
JR-- I liked the original Pleasure
Chips story, and like it even more in its
reworked format (The Agency's Early Years).
Excellent job--so is this what the agency does?" -- ven,
writer, 14 Mar 2000
"just wanted to drop a line telling you
how much I enjoy your site and your writing
...I have visited your site since you first opened it and put the link
to it on a.s.s.m ..." Chris, 3 Mar 2000
"Jeez-oh-Pete~~can you ever write an erotic
story!! I am so full of lust, I can only sit here amazed, confounded and
wishing I were in Cassandra's (Cassandra -
Vampiress) place...thank you for your marvelous
and lustful stories...can't wait to begin reading the "rest of the story"!"
2 Mar 2000
"Hey JR, Your site is getting better all
the time! The Master PC illustrations
by Celebrity MC are really fun -- can you
ask him to animate Lisa a bit, so her eyes close as she falls asleep?
It would be great to see the command executed... Talk to ya," Ossicle,
29 Feb 2000
"Hello. Read your story (The
Agency) some time back, and stopped by the
MC Stories page earlier today to check out a few things, including whether
you had yet posted chapter 3 of your story. When can we expect it?
Rough draft available? Just curious. Thanks."
adam b, 27 Feb 2000
"Dear JR Parz, I love your work and
especially your Master PC series
and idea. I admire your willingness to release your work to the public.
I began to write my own series in the Master PC Universe back when you
first posted part 1 of your series. I had no intentions of ever releasing
this story but now that you have opened up the idea for others I am think
of releasing my story. I am going to review and fix it up and in the near
future would like to ask you to be my editor in the matter or if you are
busy pass me a long to someone you kow that would be willing. I just hope
I will do the original series justice. I am thinking of also starting a
whole new series beside my already written one. The new series deals with
someone who puts in a command wrong and develops this sense of justice
and decency and goes around finding abusers of the programs and deals with
them accordingly. It is like attacking someone's story but it is just an
idea I think would be fun. I am may write this series and keep it separte
of other branch off writers. I have often wondered as well, if the user
is the Master's representative. Then who is the master? Could we explore
that aspect, having the Master come to a person. I am just bursting with
ideas. I am basically brainstorming aloud and taking to much of your time
away. I would like to hear from you and to tell you to keep up the good
work. Your Fan." SirFury, 26 Feb 2000
"Hi: I really enjoyed (The
Charmed Ones Trilogy) "phoebe's awakening"
When do you plan to publish the sequel?" Patrick,
24 Feb 2000
"What is this story i heard you did called
"superbimbo" (Suzi Spice aka Super Bimbo)
and where can i find it? love your work. thanks." Mister
S. 20 Feb 2000
"JR--I did my sequel to the LoveDoll story
line on mcstories . . .now it's your turn to continue your Agency
series. I think that was one of the
best bits of mc narrative I've read." Ven,
Writer, 16 Feb 2000
The author of Lydia's "My Good Friend JR!
"Flushed with the pleasure of knowing that you were about to post my humble
offering, Lydia's Tale on your All Time Favorite Mind Control Stories at
your web site, for the first time I TOOK the time to explore your web site
in detail. As we used to say back when I was on active duty in the
USN, "I must commend you for a job well done!" I've REALLY enjoyed
your web site
and will continue to do so for a long time to cum ... er, come! HEH HEH
HEH *G* Again, thank you in profusion for the honor of being included
in your personal favorites! Live Long and Prosper!" SIR
MAX II, Writer, 8 Feb 2000
Regarding Unholy Desire:
"Whoao uh huh huh uuuu cool. Only read 3 or 4 I liked better than this
series...Swell Gal, Growing Like a Weed, etc." Anonymous,
7 Feb 2000
Regarding A Witch Casts Her Spell:
"It sucks big time." Bill, 7 Feb 2000
Regarding Master PC
"i love the story. if you can, try to add even more parts to it." Anonymous,
5 Feb 2000
Regarding Unholy Desire: "Well,
I enjoyed it quite a bit. I really love when girls' minds are tampered
with, ESPECIALLY when they know it's happening and are powerless to resist
it. J.R. never disappoints in that regard. And I love the old magical-alterations-to-all-the-cute-
high-school-girls storylines no matter how many times I read them.
Someday soon there are going to be computerized movie generators and I
am going to be the one copying and pasting J.R. Parz stories into the things,
twenty-four seven." Fret Pearson, Writer,
3 Feb 2000
Regarding Unholy Desire: "This
sucked!!!!!!" Richard Alan Beemer Jr.,
30 Jan 2000
Regarding Serena - Teen Witch: Meets
A Vampire: "Would have been better if
the Vampire had bitten her and she became a Vampiress Witch." Anonymous,
29 Jan 2000
Regarding Unholy Desire, Part One:
"Just a few of the grammar errors that had me wondering if we needed jdw
back. Al is going to have a field day with this, JR... On the up
side, this is turning out to be an interesting story. It's developing rather
slowing, but my expectations for the next few chapters are now quite high.
If there is even the slightest plot twist within the next part (some kind
of confrontation for Jason), then the score would go up. Overall, it's
a good story with some definate potential in the characters. Just
once, I wish when somebody cast a 'love' spell, the woman would really
fall in love with that person, instead of lust. There is a difference,
you know. It might actually be humorous for the girl to start following
Jason around and doing stuff like cleaning his room and washing his clothes.
Now that would be a true 'love' spell...oh well..." Regarding
Unholy Desire, Part Two: Where's the
BE?! It's still moving slowly. Maybe next chapter will pick things up a
bit, but I'm not holding my breath anymore... Regarding
Unholy Desire, Part Three: Sigh...I
didn't finish it."
Leviathan, Writer/Respected Critic,
29 Jan 2000
"Greetings, I recently encountered part
of a Mind Control story entitled "The Agency."
All I found was Chapter 1 - Recruitment Practices
written back in 1998. It looked like it had the makings of an enjoyable
tale and I was just wondering if you ever got around to writing any more
of it as I would like to follow it if possible. I'm fairly (actually,
extremely) new to the Internet so perhaps I have headed off looking in
exactly the wrong places for the damned thing. I would be delighted
if you would take the time to tell me of the fate of your scribing.
Thanks, kind regards and all the best for 2000." Karl,
29 Jan 2000
I really enjoyed this story (Master
PC) and I hope to read more! Maddog,
28 Jan 2000
"mr parz... i got a chance to read
your story (Master PC)
about a year ago, and i loved it...all the way up until the hero got put
down (in Master PC, Part 2).
but, thats ok. not that big of a deal, its just a story right?
he wasnt really a bad guy, just a little manipulative. but i digress...i
just recently read it again, and much to my surprise, found ANOTHER two
chapters!!! man...you ended it perfectly... thanks for a wonderful
read... zak, 28 Jan 2000
Regarding The Womanizer - Another Tale:
"This is an excellent story. JRParz is one of the best writers around
right now. I hope he will either continue this story, or write a sequel
in the exact same genre soon."
Val, 26 Jan 2000
Regarding Unholy Desire:
"Standard Parzian quality! Although, I can tell it was not a JDW proof
Jaws, 26 Jan 2000
Desire really surprised me. It didn't
go in the direction that I thought it would, but it WAS a super story!!!
I thought that he might build a harem of lovelies. You on the otherhand
masterfully worked a differenct angle - great job!"
jdw, 20 Jan 2000
"Can't wait for more Agency
stories, they are among my fav's from you.
I see more and more people writing Master
PC stories and have to ask if its okay if
I try a few? I think I have a couple of ideas and would love the
chance to get them out of my skull and on paper so to speak. Can't
wait to see what stories you come up with in 2000 for your fans." J,
19 Jan 2000
"Just a little feedback from a fan.
I especially like the Aliens Gift
and Master PC
series'. Keep up the good work!" MastrBear,
14 Jan 2000
"When are you going to finish the charmed
trilogy story? i got really interested in
it and then there was no more...... please post more...... thanks." WesCyde,
14 Jan 2000
"Dear Sir, I found your story "Alien's
Gift" on the Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive
this evening, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Unlike most erotic authors
I've found, you actually seem to write with a modicum of intelligence and
spelling/grammer. Your characters have depth (at least the ones you
develop, such as Colt and Brandy) and their actions are pretty realistic
for their given circumstances. (oo that came out harsh.. sorry, this
is meant to be complimentary)
I do have a few comments specifically on
the Brandy plot. First, I was rather disappointed at first that the
confrontation wasn't longer. Later, when it turned out she had actually
plotted cleverly, my disappointment eased somewhat. I did feel, however,
that Colt seemed to start using (for lack of a better word) advanced powers
with no practice or training. Giving commands is one thing, mind
probing and damage assessment/repair are another, and not something that
it would seem would be easy without long practice.
I would also say that towards the end, I
found myself comparing it more and more to a Marvel comic, particularly
X-Men. I don't know if you've ever read the series, but Alien's Gift
has started to read like that start of another one (albiet aimed at a different
audience). Which brings me to my next point. At the end of
Chapter 5, you offered to allow other authors to continue the story.
I would like to do just that. I don't write very often, but what I do write
tends to be very good." Spacewarp, Writer,
14 Jan 2000
"Do you know when you'll be posting the
second part of the Charmed Ones triogy
as part 1 was brilliant. Please write more, and soon." Jimbob,
13 Jan 2000
"Love the story (Master
PC), original and the new authors." Mark,
12 Jan 2000
"I've been a fan of mind control/hypnoses
for about 2 years and that (???)
was the best story I've read in years. If u have any more please
send or post...thanx." Azodan, 11 Jan 2000
"I have only just finished reading Chapter
4 of Master PC and I must say that I enjoyed
it quite a bit. Personally, I think that breasts the size you described
Lisa having are a bit on the grotesque side, but that was the only part
of the story that did not really work for me. Please, keep up the
good work. I look forward to reading more of your work. Sincerely,
Randy, 11 Jan 2000
"Hey there, Great site, I visit it a couple
times a week. Cruising around I noticed two things on your Master
PC page. First off your link to 'In
A Public Place' doesn't work for me. Second, I am the weasel that
started the thread in the Addventure! Just thought I would drop you
a note and let you know you have a fan."
8, 11 Jan 2000
"Hi there - I've just read Master
PC, chapters 1/2/3 and enjoyed them greatly.
I was just wondering if any more chapters were posted, and if so, where?
Thanks." Grant, 11 Jan 2000
"i want to congratulate you on your stories...please
finish the charmed series...thx"
razor, 5 Jan 2000
Reviewed of "The
Sex Genie". "Astounding! Not the best
or most erotic tale I've ever seen at FictionMania, but excellent nevertheless.
The whole bit about Cheryl knowing what's REALLY going on was a nice touch.
A worthy addition to the Spells R Us series." Roy
Del Frink, 12/04/1999 found 1 Jan 2000
Reviewed of "Rings
of Transformation" "This is a fine story -
well crafted and I throughly enjoyed it. Thanks for writing it, hope to
see more bodyswap stories like this." The
Rebel on 06/10/1999 found 1 Jan 2000
"I just read your story (Aliens
Gift ) and I wanted you to know how much I
loved it and also wanted to know when I could expect a sequel to it and
was hoping that you could e-mail it to me. I also wanted to wish
you a merry Christmas and a happy new year and hope to hear from you soon."
26 Dec 99
"Love ur stuff. Can't wait for
the next Charmed Ones
installment." flubble, 26 Dec 99
The main room of the mansion is full to
capacity. Everyone has gathered around to here the announcement of the
Conclave's first choices for Site of the Year. Rather than the piano, Luther
is sitting in the control room for this occasion. He motions to one the
guards and the lights dim. Familar music begins to play and Master McLaren
is greated with a round of applause as he steps up to the podium.
"Sons and Daughters, we are gathered here
today to honor those who have made the biggest contributions to the community
over the past year. These men are the pillars of our community and the
foundations of our family. They have given large amounts of their personal
time and effort and tonight they shall be rewarded. If Master Brave New
World and JR Parz would please step forward."
Sites of the Year:
The Brave New World
Master Brave New World may be on indefinite
hiatus at this time, but the mark that he has made on the MC community
can definitely still be seen. Master BNW's work is innovative, stylish,
and contains some of the best induction scenes around. Master BNW
has also given author's such as Arcane, A Nony Mouse, Anynom, and many
others, a place to showcase their work. As far as manipulations go, he
has consistently maintained one of the largest galleries on the web. I'd
also like to personally thank him for presenting my idea of natural images
to the rest of the community.
JR Parz's Erotic Stories
JR Parz's has influenced the community with
his writings, his website, and most certainly his providing of the most
popular forum in the community. With stories such as "Master
PC", "Sabrina and Tabitha", and "Alien's Gift",
JR has established himself as a creative force and excellent author. His
website contains his work as well as that of other authors including Trent
Wolf in The Wolfden. His Mind Control Forum has become the main meeting
place and part time debating platform of community. This is the place to
be for mind-control fetishists seeking intellectual companionship.
"Give these men a round of applause!" Master
McLaren loudly proclaims. The crowd surrounding the Center Stage then rises
giving JR Parz and Master Brave New World a standing ovation. Both men
stand tall and proud, each holding a pocket watch encased in solid gold
bearing their name and achievement.
Morpheus Rising Conclave Online, 22
"Hello, Mr. Parz. I am an admirer
of your work, as well as an aspiring erotic author. You note in the
footnote to Chapter IV of "Master PC"
that your intent was to create a shared universe in which others could
write. I would appreciate it if you could detail the rules under
which you will permit others to make use of your concept. Thanks
in advance!" Master Riveda, 23 Dec 99
"JR, I just wanted to let you know I enjoyed
"The Agency's Early Years."
It was great how you converted it from "Pleasure Chips." I think Damien
Thorn is one of your better characters. I like the way he sort of played
Heather and Carla against each other. My favorite situations are where
you have the female knowing what's being done, and defiant about it, but
still have uncontollable feelings of arousal. Especially when Carla begs
to be fucked. Nice scene. You're writing is very smooth." Trent
Wolf, Writer, 8 Dec 99
"Looking forward to more of 'The
Agency'...wish it was already done.
I can hardly wait! I am a woman, even, and I enjoy your writing ability
very much. You're good. Wonder if the women in your story will
be able to overcome? Peace and Love" Fragile
Thunder, 7 Dec 99
"dear sir: i loved you master
PC story, the possabliltes are endless! i
hope you don't mind. but, i used the computer program storyline for a new
story i'm writing. i'm enclosing a copy, a very rough copy that i'm
working on. please tell me what you think and let me know if i can
use the prepsisiton in my story. i've sent a copy to ataraxia at
the IAR for reveiw. thank you and i look forward to hearing from
you." j. sessums, writer, 6 Dec 99
"Great site, great stories! Keep
up the good work!" Mr. C., 30 Nov 99
"JR-- As a writer you're about much more
than the variable-geometry torso, so I'm not complaining at all. You do
MC very well (and you're a good-natured member of the predatory branch
of the family, so it's the kind I can like.)" --trilby,
29 Nov 99
"Just wanted to e-mail you and say I've
enjoyed the first part of the Agency-story
line. I've read the other Agency stories
and now seeing the flashback stories will be great. I've enjoyed
every story to date posted on MC Archive/Be Archive and your own site.
When MC vanished for a time I lost your site aswell and sometimes now and
then I can't get into your page, but try again later. Can't wait for more
on the Agency both past and present story lines. Of all the story
of mind-control Alien's Gift
is among my fav's and I wait for more chapters of those stories.
Well again I'm enjoying each one of your stories and hope you keep up the
great work." J, 29 Nov 99
'The Agency's Early Years'
had elements I like (the injecting of devices that allow a secondary party
to control their body) but I cannot enjoy the 'Bimbo-ization' of ladies,
much unlike the average MC fan. That is very unusual, but for me, it's
not just a moral thing - it turns me frigid. When I think of women becoming
sex toys, I only think of what women could have been if they weren't sex
toys, and I start to feel some kind of sympathy for them, which I am sure
would not be appreciated by them since they really want to have sex and...
God, I'm rambling and it doesn't even make sense. Hope you can catch my
drift. The long and short of it is, a 'woman as whore' is more comical
than erotic to me. It lacks the submission aspect. They're not doing it
out of deference, they're doing it 'cuz they like to fuck and be fucked.....
with someone they hate, even......and I don't like 'fucking'. I like feelings
between the people, positive feelings (and now I sound like Tony Robbins).
I guess I could explain this more if I thought about it, but it would involve
a bunch of rambling that doesn't make sense. Oh yeah, breast inflation
only adds to the 'woman as a whore' thing that is, to me, played more for
laughs than for a turn-on. Large breasts aren't important to me, and if
they're grotesquely disproprotionate, they're a big turn off (damn Pamela
Anderson... well, I wouldn't like her even if she didn't have those enormous
monsters)...So that's it. End of mindless rant. Hope you can make sense
out of it. :-)" Blankpage, Writer, 28 Nov
"JR, Just wanted to drop you a line and
let you know how much I liked "The Agency:
The Early Years". You've mentioned on
the board that you thrive on the "Career Woman broken into Total Slave"
premise, and your tale is a shining example. By the way, what's up
with the Barbie: Teen Agent" re-write? I don't believe it's on your
"Back Burner" page." Why Now, Writer,
26 Nov 99
"JR, Just got finished with Master
PC 4, and of the whole series, I think this
is my favorite. Why? Because of all the non-stop action. Starting with
the moist opening scene with Wendy and Heather. When I read stories, sometimes
I like to see a great opening sex scene, and this fit the bill nicely.
You didn't waste time getting to the good stuff. Next, I really enjoyed
the dialogue exchange between Adam and Julia, culminating in one of my
favorite scenarios, a nice blowjob in a car. (Maybe next time more detail
on the oral). Later, I liked Samantha's reaction to Adam when she came
out of her bimbo mode. Something about the charater being outraged by what's
been done to her makes it more erotic for me. Don't ask me why. Finally,
the ending was brilliant. It leaves a universe wide open doesn't it? It
will be interesting to see if other writers pick up the ball and run.
Overall, very entertaining. What more can I say? Now I'm itching
to read more about my favorite series, "The
Agency." Hurry!", Trent
Wolf, Writer, 22 Nov 99
"I was visiting the Erotic MC Story Archive
and read your story Daughter of Desire
which is a part of the DOMINOE series. My curiosity was peaked, and so
I visited your website, and read the entire series. I must say, I enjoyed
the original plot developed in parts 1 and 2, but it seems that the saga
just drifted after that. Who else does Dominoe need to "save" from the
deviant spray? Also, could you possibly do some more focussing on Stephanie?
She strikes me as sorry for her actions, but still not quite ... ready
to put away the toys. Maybe she succumbs to her lust again?
Also, I have read your Sabrina and Tabatha
stories. I don't know what else to say but
WOW. Awesome stories. Very well written, paced, and just erotic.
Please tell me that you have a fourth one on the way. Thank you for
your time." Kooper, 17 Nov 99
"JR, Just wanted to drop you a quick note
to let you know your stories are *excellent.* Thank you so very much
for sharing them with the world." Sincerely,
Christopher, 17 Nov 99
After Complimenting Qabalkar on his story;"The
Princess Slave", he wrote: "Thank you
very much for taking the time to compliment "The Princess Slave." I'm especially
grateful since I've read and enjoyed your material for some time now.
As for your archive, I really can't refuse any request made by the writer
(You've no idea how well that one hit the spot for me by several coincidences.)
In any event, I'd be pleased for you to archive it there; I should tell
that it is also found in the Fantasy section of The Grey Archive.
Thanks again!" Qabalkar, Writer, 16 Nov 99