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1/1/99 thru 5/4/99 or
"Hey JR, Zeroboy yet again :) -
The end of Master PC
as it is written has left some people (including me) chommping at the bit
for more. But it ended better than any story could. If I may I'd like to
write some spinnoffs on the Master PC
based on it's great open ending, and if it's kewl with you; then all you
other fans reading this in the review secion should do the same! Istead
of just reading someone elses fantasy, you can take it in your own direction!
WOOHOO! Again JR love your work, thanks for your time and generosity!"Zeroboy,
13 Nov 99
love your site, and have just persued your
revised favorites list. I found many of my favorites were also yours,
but some that looked very interesting I was unable to connect with. There
are three stories linked to fictionmania.com that I'd hoped to read, but
my browser says there is no fictionmania?! Can you help me? The stories
are 'Strip Poker', 'Changing Minds', and 'Spellbound in the Seventies'.
I eagerly await your reply." Michael,
13 Nov 99
"I really enjoy your stories in the BEArchive!
Especially your Master PC-stories!
But I have a couple of questions: 1. Will there be MORE
Master PC-stories? (I REALLY hope so!!) 2. Will you create/write
new BE-series?" Frank, 13 Nov 99
"JR, You're great...Just a note to
let you know that your website is exceptional.
I go to it on a regular basis and the stories are just what I'm looking
for. Keep up the good work." A fan, 13 Nov 99
"Really neat story (Master
PC 4) -- fun and lighthearted.
Now I'm more on the dark side, but had a thought or two and wanted to share
them. I'm currently writing another story (yeah, it takes me forever
to, but English is my second language) 1) The email account gets
hacked into, and the program modified. Maybe throw in some Evil Overlord
plan a la Mr. Big, such as enlarging every woman's bosom beyond mobility
unless they pay a huge ransom. 2) Magic Police (tm) sets in, sort
of like the Men in Black. This is what I'm writing about at the moment.
3) Some serious magician wants either to stop or to capture the program.
Maybe throw Adam in the past? 4) Uchronia (I'll do this one if nobody
stops me <G>). There are at least two factions interested in having
the program and two others in destroying it. 5) A virus messes up
the program's operation and it starts going at random. Just my 2c."
11 Nov 99
Referring to Master PC 4 :
"I have to tell you, I LOVE the revisions - and the author's comments along
the way as well. I agree that some good movies have the main characters
do dumb things, and I personally feel that this particular plot could go
on and on ad infinitum. Example: How come he never rewards
a guy friend by giving him a(n) hypnotic penis? (another "mistake"
in the making) I just enjoyed the whole thing - just the right mixture
of control and eros. thanks for a classic." greg,
9 Nov 99
"hey hey! I love "master
Pc" its been a real great story so far. Yeah
leaving his computer on again is a stretch. But what cried out in my head
is " he needs a laptop" then some real fun could ensue while hes "on location".
:) Zeroboy, 9 Nov 99
"JR, I loved the conclusion to the Master
PC story, but are you really sure you're done?
The ending does seem to leave it open for more. I hope everyone starts
writing again now that the time change and gets dark so early, not enough
new stuff out there." Judd, 5 Nov 99
"JR, I am anxious to read the next installments
of "The Agency".
Do tell when I might expect them. Thanks for your time and please
keep pleasuring!!" Anna, 3 Nov 99
"Hi, I liked your Barbie
- Teen Agent (trilogy, for the time being)
very much. Please continue the story a.s.a.p.. I would appreciate
it very, very much." Regards, Jose,
3 Nov 99
"JR, I great chapter (Master
PC 4), but I would have liked to see a bit
more sex. I thought that you were a bit harsh on Lisa, and too easy
on Samantha. At the end of the story, I don't understand why Adam
left the PC on and why the girls were in his bedroom. Still, all
in all, a GREAT STORY!!!" jdw, proof reader, 2 Nov 99
& "The Agency"
are both excellent stories. Have you added a Chapter 3 to The
Agency or a Part 4 to Master PC. If so please send me the URL. Keep Writing!"
2 Nov 99
"What a terrific story (The
Agency)...well written with attention to detail
that leaves the reader enthralled and wanting more. And yes I want
more!!!! I have always been intrigued by mind controlling stories
and the more erotic the better. Yours has kept me very, very stimulated...thanks!"
2 Nov 99
"JR, I finally had enough of a break to
read your story, "Subjugation of Tammy."
I have to say this is one of the best short stories I've read from you.
A nice, smooth read all the way through. You pushed all the right buttons
with me, and you even surprised me with a few other things. The scenes
with Tammy were especially good. I liked the small scene where she had
to go to the restroom, and Chris made her wait. That was a nice and amusing
touch. Excellent writing and narration. Your phrasing and descriptions
are very well done. You never fail to entertain me and keep a smile
on my face while I'm reading." Trent
Wolf, Writer, 29 Oct 99
"jr, i just moved my bookmark to the asstr
address...the site loads four times faster than the old site and it is
so nice not to have all the riders. i know from the forum that you've
been down hope your felling better so that you'll feel like writing again
soon, i need my story fix, not enough new stuff out there right now."
judd, 27 Oct 99
"Just finished reading Master
PC #3 (read pt 1&2 some time ago). Have
you continued this tale? If more is available, where is it archived?" Dan,
27 Oct 99
"JR Parz, I've been trying to get all your
works recently since I found that my list wasn't quite complete.
Quite a few authors try to remove all copies of their work when they leave
the writing business. A big nono in my book so I've gone to collect
all my favourite author's stories just in case. I definitely hope
that you dont quit anytime soon and pull a houdini on all your work, though
I dont think that will happen for you but.... better safe then sorry.
You'd deprive us of some very fine stories. And personally, i share
quite a number of your preferences and definitely dig your stories.
Among my most favourites are Cassandra - Vampiress
and the Sabrina & Tabitha - Teenage Witches
trilogy. The later sizzling and funny, the former a most fantastic,
hot vampire story."
SRoy, 25 Oct 99
"Yo man, these stories of yours are so
the shit, anyways, your link for the Agency
stories work fine for the first one but the second one doesn't, for the
page at web1000.com, anyways, just wanted to let u know and keep writin
the best shit.". Warren, 21 Oct 99
"Dear JR, Yes, your stories are very sensual
and erotic. My boyfriend and I really enjoy reading them. My favorites
do include Pleasure Dome and Barbie Teen Agent.
Your wife or girlfriend is very lucky to live with a guy who is able to
express his creative self in writing. You are probably a fantastic
lover since you are a very creative and passionate man. Again thanks
for writing such great material. And, Yes I really do enjoy and fantisizing
about your story material. It does get me all hot N juicy."
love, Julia, 18 Oct 99
From the Mind Control Erotica Discussion
Board responding to a post and story (Private Screening) written by -=BNW=-:"This
was a very enjoyable story where I could picture myself as the person watching
the story. I just love mc stories where girls like myself become the victim.
Please keep up the good work that people like yourself and JR Parz keep
writing. Your stories are fantastic and cause me to have many hours
of dreaming about them. I especially love JR's stories. I feel like
they were written for me. Believe it as a well hidden secret.
Belieive it or not it gets me all excited and warm. Especially Age Regression
AND SHRINKING stories. Hugs and Kisses to you all." Love, Julia,
17 Oct 99
"Hello JR Parz, I am just dropping you
a line to let you know that I really liked your story "The
Subjugation of Tammy". I was wondering is
if you had any plans to continue this story? Weather it was done on purpose,
you left the story open for it to be continued. If you did have a thought
of continuing this story, I would like to put in my vote for it. As with
your other stories you did a good job on this one. Thank you for taking
the time to write it. If you do add on to this story, I was wondering
if you would go ahead with the breast enlargement? I am partial to women
with small to medium breasts, and dislike implants. Thank you for
your time." Ryan, 13 Oct 99
From the Mind Control Erotica Discussion
Board: "What a brilliant spot - all
of my heroes in one spot. What a well hidden secret. Many of
the alltime greats of MC writing in one spot. Keep up the great work
everyone. And JR Parz - I'm really enjoying Master
PC at MCStories and I can't hardly wait for
the next action packed episode :) Keep up the great work."
cNf , 12 Oct 99
"I have to say you have a great idea, but
you have exasperated the characters in Chapter
5 of Alien's Gift. Swaping to a different
male with the same Alien's gift was a great idea, so I think if you went
on to how the group chases after other's who abuse their power, and explain
more guys mentaly controling women, but not to the exstent of the "man
in the hotel room." Nice job with the subtle irony about the cop
who is the aunt of one of the girls. Next chapter, you may want to
vanquish him and set up another adolescent boy who recieves the "gift".
With that I think if he takes it to a different exstent and faze out Colt
and that group, you can move on and further the plot." Idol,
11 Oct 99
"I've been greatly enjoying your excellent
story site for many months, but I'm afraid there've been some persistent
problems with it. It's often been difficult to access different sections
of the site, or to connect with links. It's been exceptionally bad
today (Oct. 9). I had no trouble getting onto your home page, but
was only able to get to your stories page after about a dozen tries, and
I still haven't been able to get through to the Wolfden page. Usually,
I get a "Sorry, there is no web page matching your request" message, with
a link to some sleazy pay site. Maybe the trouble lies with your
web site host."
"I just finished reading the "Subjugation
of Tammy" . . .GREAT story. Gonna write
smore more? Please? More on Kara and Tammy, and the twins?"
another proof by Scott McClain, 8 Oct 99
"I really liked the new story (The
Subjugation of Tammy) as a reader...it was
well written and held my attention. I've been reading all the stuff in
the forum and I think all of you are worrying to much about the details,
although a know writers need input and feedback, because alot of the readers
are just looking for a good story. To all the writers, lurkers in
the background and the readers you love the stories, keep writing we love
judd, 30 Sep 99
"I do like "The
Subjugation of Tammy" -- as a series
of scenes - But as a story, I think it could use more plot. Everything
is too easy. Even the substance works too fast. The victim
does not get a chance to struggle and we don't get to see enough of the
before personality to appreciate the after. "Master?" Give me a break!
And don't you think Chris is a "little" strange to prefer a "docile and
submissive" girlfriend to an "obsessed animal?" Perhaps he is the victim
of an evil MC genius. <g> And he never eats any of his women!
Has he lead such a sheltered life? <g> However, quibbles aside,
thanks for a good story...Cheers."
Homer Vargas, The Story Writer, 28
Charmed Ones Trilogy'. I do hope that
you plan to continue this story, I really enjoyed it. I thought it
started out well and there was lots of potential for elaboration. Thanks
for the entertainment. Regards." Regis,
27 Sep 99
"Hi. I just wanted to say that the
gift series I have read so far is the best
erotic strory i have read in all 4 years of my surfing of the web and I
await any new chapters eagerly. Yours truly." The
Glowspider, 23 Sep 99
"I just wanted to thank you for the excellent
story (Aliens Gift).
Even though I think that the ending of chapter
5 was a little bit too soft it opens up a
whole new spectrum of possibilities. I am a writer myself but I make too
many spelling and grammar mistakes to take you up on the offer to write
a story in that universe. I have loads of ideas though and some day
you might get a story from me." Tom,
Writer, 21 Sep 99
"Hi J.R., I just was surfing your
site to see if you had came out with any new TG stories and was running
through your favorite's section. You and I had corresponded a couple of
times about a year or so back. I have a very large collection of stories
I have gleaned from all over the web and I recognized the story "Mind Power"
which is one of your favorite stories. Did you know that their was
a 2nd part to the story out? I don't remember where I happened upon it
now but I have it in text format if you would like to have it I will send
it to you. Just drop me an e-mail back if you would like. Thanks
for keeping all of us non-writer's entertained. I
really love your tg stories! Take care and
have a great week." Sincerely, Nora,
20 Sep 99
I just stayed up WAY too late reading all
chapters of Aliens Gift. Great story!
And since you seem to write so many of these MC stories (which, by the
way, I'm gonna have reading material for the next MONTH!)...I was wondering
if you ever thought about doing any stories involving stopping time.
There are one or two of these kind on Simon Bar Sinisters MC archive...and
the newest one I read was pretty good...but didn't seem to use it to it's
fullest potential I think. But with the creative way that you wrote
this one, I thought I'd see if I could suggest that to you!:) Keep
up the good work." Craig, 8 Sep 99
"Hey, You've been hinting about Colt &
Sherry since Alien Gift, Part One
(Yep, I have read all 4), and I thought it's in Alien's
Gift 5 that they'd get to be "together."
I agree, No.4 was really a disappointment (to me, being your #1 Fan), the
Brandy sub-plot I didn't like period. Please make Sherry's character more
interesting (enough with the lez crap, ok?). It's rare that a writer
explores the unusual and forbidden and I hope you keep on with your "exploration."
I'm Looking forward to Alien 6, 7, 8... heres hoping you come up
with them a lot faster, the long wait is too much for your fans."
Mark, 7 Sep 99
"Your writing gets better and better I
must say. I am looking forward to the 4th part of
Master PC. Have you written anything
else? With regards." Tom, 7 Sep
"You certainly have a flair for writing
...would like to read more of your work." J,
7 Sep 99
"The ending (Cassandra
- Vampiress, Chapter 5) certainly does do
the story justice. It wrapped up everything nicely, while leaving
the door open for more in the future, and that's all one can ask for."
Web Master of The Grey Archive, 6 Sep 99
"great story (Master
PC)...any plans for a part 4?" Tracey,
5 Sep 99
"I've been reading your story "Alien's
Gift" and I would like to read more of your
work." William, 1 Sep 99
"i really enjoyed the whole story (Cassandra
- Vampiress) until the end (Chapter
5).....i dunno why but i like the happy endings.....these
stories with the villain type character..ie Damien.....winning seem to
be the majority of these stories.....i dunno why but i think it woulda
been cool to see cassandra and theresa beating damien....i guess im jus
a sucker for happy endings and i like how u left the opening for a sequel
where theresa goes and gets cassandra....to have the opening for a happier
ending......i jus want to compliment u on a story well done...altho the
last chapter seemed somewhat rushed (much shorter than the rest).......i
enjoyed the story greatly, and my only complaint is that i personally....would
have enjoyed an ending where damien lost and cassandra and theresa won.....well
once again thanks for spending the time to create enjoyable fiction and
once again a job well done." Anonymous,
1 Sep 99
"Just like to say: BRAVO on the
third chapter of Master PC. I honestly
thought that you had left the story @ chap 2 but i'm glad i was wrong.
Thanks!" Mach, 28 Aug 99
"I'm glad to see your writing this again
(or should that be still?), it's a good story (Master
PC). Okay, it's nothing but an adult
story, but I loved the way you got around the ending of chapter 2." David,
25 Aug 99
R&D's Review of Master PC, Part 3:
Adam's Back! "JR Parz is one of my favorite
authors. I admit it. He has a real talent for writing erotica, and he's
one of the few writers that can combine that talent with good characterization
and a story plot. I measure most stories by how easy they are to read,
and Parz' stories always read at a fast and enjoyable pace. With Master
PC, Part 3 I found the same level of quality and enjoyment that I usually
find while reading his stories, with a few exceptions. Part 3: Adam's
Back! picks up a few months after the events in the last story. We find
Adam Lowell in a depressed state, still unable to have sex with his gorgeous,
nymphomaniac girlfriend, Heather, and still unable to use his Master PC
program to change himself back. It's a sad state of affairs until Adam's
sister Lisa and her lesbian lover Samantha decide to take a trip to the
beach. Story hero that he is, Adam seizes the moment and figures out a
way to once again gain control of the reality-changing program. And just
in time to fix his broken libido and satisfy that girlfriend of his.
One thing you will notice right away is that this is a new Adam that you're
reading about. In the earlier stories, JR Parz set Adam's character as
the clear villain — his actions were completely lust driven, and he cared
very little for the people he was 'playing' with. Now that Adam has had
a bit of 'down-time' he's a changed man. The new Adam actually has a touch
of compassion and rationale to him; he seems to have developed feelings
towards Heather that go beyond the lust stage. In addition, Adam makes
some changes his body, which he's never done before. I was a little disappointed
to see this kind of role-reversal in Master PC. As the hero of the story,
Adam has lost that bit of edge that made the first two stories stand out
so much. Overall, I see this chapter as more of a filler than a complete
story. It sets up the events for Part 4 quite beautifully, but the ending
leaves us hanging a little too much.
It's an enjoyable story, but it's not JR
Parz' best. I look forward to the next part. ! ! ! Rally
Kat, 25 Aug 99
"I love the story (Master
PC, Part Three) . . . . just wanted you to
know that, and keep it going . .. endless possibilities with this method,
and I am eagerly awaiting the pleasurably torturous revenge that is possible
. . . . keep em coming. Scott, 23 Aug
"'jr:' I really liked the first one
PC, Part One): a real set up for not only
continuing chapters, but also about the folks who wrote it, and why they
did it, etc., etc. The second part (Master
PC, Part Two) was really good turnaround,
and as a feminist i kinda like it when hogs get fat, but pigs get slaughtered,
if you catch my drift. The third part (Master
PC, Part Three) was, sadly and honestly, a
disappointment. The writing was on par, and there were some well-blocked
scenes, but it was too... too easy, I think. (Also not as much coitus as
I'd have expected, but that's a different matter.) I'm writing this
hoping that you add a little more complexity to future chapters or same-universe
stories, not to whine about what you've written, which is above par for
the genre... <g> I hope you have more, and I'd like to know if
you mind "loaning" out the universe you created for me to write stuff.
Look for my first MC story, "Consecration," to debut on Simon's site in
the next few weeks. Yours in written heat.
"Ploni". Writer, 23 Aug 99
"Great continuation on Master
PC(Part Three). You do need to go and reproof
it again." Xanthos, 23 Aug 99
is a top class story. would u be able to tell me where to get the
rest of the parts? And how often do u rite these stories?" Ben,
22 Aug 99
"Umm...I like vampires a little...lol.
Actually there is no bigger turn on...or at least I haven't found one yet.
And yes,I have read your Cassandra series,in
a single sitting no less,and loved it!! I'm real excited about chapter
5. I really liked "A Vampires Seduction
Of Laura Jean" too. The ending was perfect.
I've said it once and I'll say it again....you are such a talented writer.I
look forward to each of your stories:o) Take care ~Kelley,
21 Aug 99
pc...great story." TRL,
21 Aug 99
"Dear JRParz, I have enjoyed
reading your stories on the EMCSA and your own webpage for a while now.
When ASSTR and mcstories.com went dark for a couple of months, I became
distraught. However, your Message Board and webpage became the Rock
that I clung to. You combine two of my greatest interests in erotic
literature: mind control and magic(tg). Thank you for providing
us with a safe harbor for our Internet community. Yours,"
L.O., 20 Aug 99
"JrParz, Now that ASSTR and MCStories are
back on line are you going to make "The Agency"
available beyond Chapter 2? I'd really like to find out how you're
going to develop further." Anthony,
20 Aug 99
Master PC III was awesome! I'll bet
this one was fun to write. Your characterization seems to get better
with every story. I especially like your subject matter. We
seem to have alot in common in that area in regards to female female stuff!
Very arousing. Damn, I need to get me one of those programs. If only
it was that easy."
Trent Wolf, Writer, 19 Aug 99
"Hey Man, Listen, I just finished reading
Gift 4. Man, it kicks ass. You're an exellent
writer but where is the 5th part. You said it would be out in April/May?
Oh well, listen, one more question though. What is the address to your
webpage?" Shadow, 17 Aug 99
"Hi ! I have just finished reading
the first two installments of The Agency
and had to write to let you know how much I enjoyed them.And how much I
am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. I am truely curious what
Dave's job with the agency really is(patience is not my best attribute
but I am trying...lol). Best Wishes-Kelley, 16 Aug 99
"Hi. I really love your site, not to mention
your message board, but have found an error in one of your links. When
I click on the Barbarella link on your favorite stories page all I get
is a Xoom page with the message "page not found". It sounds like a great
story, and if you liked it so much I'm sure I'll like it as well, especially
if it's as good as 'Slaves to the Octothropes'. Could you please let me
know when you have it available? Thanks a lot. P.S.
Bless you for continuing with Master PC, a truly great story."
Michael, 15 Aug 99
"Could you please send me the full texts
for Barbie - Teen Agent as
i only have parts 1,2 and 3. The story is excellent." ThE-LyNX,
12 Aug 99
"As always, I can depend on the name
to bring a smile to my face and a surge to my libido. Thanks for
all the work you do on the webpage and on your stories and all that good
stuff. I've even got the local library doing searches on several
of the books on your Recommended Reading List, so you can be proud that
you're encouraging the literacy of humanity, one perv at a time.
:)) Have fun with further stories, and thanks again." Karnage
Randoms, Ltd., 8 Aug 99
A Writer by the name of Dingus Guy posted
this on the Mind Control Erotica Discussion Board in response to a post
titled; "We should
be able to handle criticism".
"'Why Now' you are so right. If I write a story, I want to know exactly
what I did wrong, or what people would have preferred to see. MC Writer
gave constructive criticism on one of my stories once and I really appreciated
it. How is one going to improve as a writer if no one says anything. Compliments
are a natural high, but if they are lies or half-truths then they get us
nowhere! Also the compliments on a good story is something not to
be ignored either. If you like something say so. With that said I like
to compliment JRPARZ on his "The Charmed Ones
Trilogy" story. I never really got into the
aspect of celebrity stories, but I really enjoyed that one so much that
I must look into others now. It must be that TV guide cover that enhanced
the image for me. :-) Dingus Guy, Writer,
8 Aug 99
The author of the story '4 Days in Daynor' wrote me this: "Mr.
Parz, I hope that with this- my opus- a subgenre of its own has been
firmly established between the twin fetishes of transformation and mind
control. If I had to coin a term, I'd call it Nymph fiction, for the two
aspects of transformation of body and transformation of mind.
Pioneered by Downing Street, Joker, and yourself, it's a valid addition,
I feel, to the ranks of Internet fetishes. I do hope you get over
that writer's block. In the area of mind control, I would place you in
my top 3 authors. (The other two being Boris Ludemkov and Downing
Street.) 'The Agency,'
even unfinished, ranks in my top 10."
SD, 3 Aug 99
"I've just read the first part of the The
Charmed Ones Trilogy and I really enjoyed
it. I'm really looking forward to reading the next part." Karl,
21 Jul 99
"I have read your story Cassandra:
The Vampiress and I have one thing to ask....if
you could please continue the story because I want to know what happens.
I would like to say you write great stories. Thank you."
ariana, 20 Jul 99
"Hey JR., I just visited your site, "Monique"
looks great as a background. Chap 3 of Suzy(Spice
aka Super Bimbo) is wild - you seem to be
writing the storyline around the artwork, nice approach. I'm getting ready
to post a new image -"Encounter1" - check it out if you have time. Thanks
for the links." SCarter, Poser Renderer,
12 July 99
"Hi, First of all, I love your site.
Secondly, I believe the link to "Additive" (in the Favorite Stories page)
by Trance is broken on your site, as it says it cannot be displayed.
I tried multiple browsers. thanks."
Sean, 30 Jun 99
"Hello JR, I enjoyed your Sex
Genie story and want to read everything you
have written! Please email me the URL to your personal web site where
I can read your other stories. Thanks!", Casper,
Writer, 29 Jun 99
"Hello! First, you have a
great story site- please continue the wonderful
work! I'm wondering 2 things about the Russ Martin novels:
1. Where can I find them? 2. How do the stories use mind-control
(possession, drugs, devices?) and what categories of erotica are found
in the books such as the Education of Jessica Parrish etc (incest, male-dom,
fem-dom etc). Thanks!", krenn, 28 Jun
"I just thought I'd drop you a line and
let you know that I really like some of your stories.I have to say "some"
because I haven't read them all yet. I just wanted to give my two
cents worth on your next addition(s) to Alien's
Gift, actually it's quite simple I just hope
that Brandy gets what's coming to her! Colt may be somewhat selfish
and unthoughtful(except of his own pleasure) in the excerise of his Gift
but Brandy is just downright evil. Anyway just my two cents worth."
20 Jun 99(Received 26 Jun 99)
"Your latest Suzy
Spice (aka Super Bimbo) was great. I
love this series because of the way you portray Suzy with the cute giggling
and constant horniess. I laughed out loud myself at some of her silly
lines. The little scene where she walks down the hall with her best friend
Shelley (both giggling) really made me smile. Your style was real quick
and smooth with this one and was over much too quickly. And what is up
with that RJ (JR?) on that computer? And blast that lucky Michael Clear!"
Wolf, Writer, 25 Jun 99
"I enjoyed your story "Voodoo
at the Fair." The only part that was
whack was the ending being a dream. Keep up the great writing, dude!"
11 Jun 99(Received 23 Jun 99)
- Vampiress'. "Loved what I read!
Cannot wait to read the conculsion. Any idea when it might be finished?"
Peter, 22 Jun 99
"Hello there, I have just finished
2 of the Agency. A most entertaining
story and one with ideas I feel I can agree with. The constant pushing
of female points of view, on television and in the papers and magazines,
is becoming a bore. I am somewhat elderly and remember a life very different
from today, where standards and manners were acceptable I suppose
it is the lack of discipline that has engendered this behaviour amongst
our younger generation. They grow up with odd ideas of how to treat
their parents and friends. The easy option never produced a satisfactory
result. I trust that further chapters will be forthcoming for my
enjoyment. Regards." Sandy, 21
"In your "Favorite
Mind Control Stories" Page, the story "My
Big Mistake" by Jim has a link to the old URL at the BEARCHIVE Site.
The correct link for the story - http://bearchive.com/~stories/stories/mybigmistake.html
Love your site (and, of course, your stories). Cheers." Mona,
16 Jun 99
Regarding 'Sabrina & Tabitha - Teenage
Witches'. "Dear Writer, Ok, You
are GOOD! I read all sort of fanfic but yours is one of the best,
even if it does get a bit crazy in the end. If you have any other
tales, I would really appreciate it if you would send me some, (or at least
their titles). Most people get totally vulgar but you manage to keep
it hot yet clean. Keep up the good work!" Carammon,
'A Devoted Reader', 8 Jun 99
Regarding 'Master PC'.
"I just read your story on MC website. The ending was vicious and
cruel. I loved it."
Jim, 8 Jun 99
Regarding 'The Agency'.
"Really enjoyed your first chapter and would like to know where I can read
any more." John, 7 Jun 99
Regarding 'Master PC'.
"Hey, I love this story. I just have one question. What was the final message?
Or is this another story?" Paul, 6 June
Regarding 'Master PC'.
"I can't say that I liked it. You took a kid who was down and out...then
you started to raise him to the heights of greatness and then delivered
him not just back to his own private hell but a few levels lower.
Now if you wanted to add a few chapters you have a beutiful chance to have
a power outage and a reboot or something and give him a second chance to
get things right. But as it stands you left his sister and her friends
who treated him like shit to start with still on top of the food chain.
Well thats my feedback...take it the way you'd like to - no reply is needed."
6 June 99
Regarding 'The Agency'.
"I liked very much the saga "The Agency". I'd like to know when are we
going to have the pleasure of read the Chapter 3. Are you writing
it, JR Parz? Is it ready? Could you give us some details in advance? Please,
don't let us wait to long...Keep doing this great job." Bonanza,
5 June 99
Regarding 'Alien's Gift'.
"Just finished reading the Alien's Gift, chapters 1-4. In chapter
4 you indicated that you would post chapter 5 in April or May 99.
Since Mind Control Stories lost its web site, are you still planning on
publishing any more chapters?? If you have finished Chapter 5, would
you please e-mail it to me or tell me where I can get a copy of it??
Thanks." Bob, 3 June 99
Regarding 'Alien's Gift'.
"Great story! Was wondering if you could add Me to your update list
for future chapters?" Will, 2 June 99
"Let me know if you ever did do anything
after part IV on the Cassandra story,
or continuations to "Pleasure Chips" or "Jennifer's
Transformation." I enjoyed all of them,
and would be interested in anything else of that genre (MC/FF) that you
may have done or that you would particularly recommend." Thanks,
MDF, 31 May 99
Charmed Ones Trilogy. I've read a few
of your other stories about breast expansion but I liked this one the most
particularly. I'm not one for big breasts and i liked how you developed
the story in this one. Also, the thing about spells was great and
how Phoebe became so desperate. I'm also waiting to see these sisters
fall for each other and eventually sleep w/ one another. I hope there
is more about Amber and Phoebe, however, because Alyssa Milano is easily
the hottest of all of them. So, i'm just writing to say keep up the
good work and where is your web site? I found this story at The Grey
Archive. I'm interested in reading some more non-BE stuff of yours.
One question, however, what is going to happen once Jonathan acquires all
three sisters? It'd be great if he'd use their powers for his own
will....but on whom? Well, great idea anyways :)" DrWu,
29 May 99
the Vampiress. This is truly a wonderfull
story, I was much intrigued. I am anxiously awaiting next chapter
in this saga. Please treat this as a request for more in this series. if
you have not put up new chapters please do so immediately. You have
great stories in your archive, continue polishing them. Best Regards."
Mahoon, 29 May 99
"Applause. Grand of you to pick up
the torch and carry on, after Simon's site's demise. As an avid reader
of these stories, thanks!" Vendatrix,
25 May 99
"JR, Well, after the long wait, I have
to say it was worth it (The Charmed Ones,
Phoebe's Awakening). As usual, you've
spun a nice tale with the usual Parz touches of pure eroticsm. Although
I have to admit, I'm not a regular viewer of 'Charmed' I don't think that
hurt in that I really got into the story. I would love to see this
actually made into an episode with Doherty, Milano and Combs in their roles
as the Halliwell sisters. You outdid yourself in your physical descriptions,
and the auto erotic scenes with Phoebe were well done. Can't wait until
Part Two. Hurry up!!! Five Stars! Two thumbs up! Three Wolf Howls!
Excellent!" Trent Wolf, writer, 24 May 99
(Daughter of Desire). Like the little continuing
twist of the little lesbian suggestion cruising in Dominoes head.
Could lead to a squel, yes? Glad to hear you are past the writers
block. I am a die hard fan of Charmed. Can't wait to see your version.
Live large." Micheal, 12 May 99
"JR., I enjoy your stories, but I wish
you'd hurry up with "The Agency"
chapter 3. Chapters 1 and 2 were awesome. I know, I know, it's on
the "Back Burner". Thanks, and keep up the good writing."
bls, 12 May 99
"Hello JR! I have been a fan
of your site for some time. Keep up the good work." Dave,
9 May 99
This was posted on the Mind Control Erotica
Discussion Board by Eros: "Types of
Mind Control Stories I enjoy. Time Stop, in which a character has
the ability to stop subordinate characters in space and/or time and act
at will--beautifully done in The Fermata; Opposite world/universe, in which
the realm the character enters is totally different from the one in which
he/she is used to--an erotic Through the Looking Glass; Possession, in
which some other worldly entity invades the character--and I am especially
fond of mythological possession (e.g., Pan, Aphrodite, Venus...etc.) ;
Complex hypnosis, in which the character becomes slowly hypnotized over
a period of time, behaving uncharacteristically (i.e., the choirgirl gone
bad); Substance arousal--in which some UNIQUE substance is used to create
a story of eroticism. I am tired of the hackneyed simple hypnosis
stories. I love originality and wit. Parz consistently displays this. Eros,
7 May 99
"I was finally able to bypass the search
engine and just finished reading The Agency.
You know something funny? I found this story VERY erotic, and yet
there was not a lot of sex in it. I think it must be the control
aspect of it that I'm drawn to. I must have some nasty submissive
tendencies that need eliminated. Anyway, I really like the way you
think. I do feel compelled to say that as a woman, I should find
this horribly sexist and degrading. But as a reader, I find myself
extremely aroused. This is very confusing. But I think I need
to read more." patti, 6 May 99