| blu |
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interesting story love to read more |
| teoa |
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really eerotic story, would love to know what she wares and gets up to
over the park? please continue this story. |
| naughtybill |
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Similar issues with my daughters where they climb on you and wiggle
their cute little bottoms and discover your penis - I never did anything
but let myself get hard and they liked that from an alarmingly young
age. Email me for more explicit discussion. |
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Thanks for the comment, naughtybill. I would love to send you an email, but you forgot to leave your email address! :) Go ahead and send it in another comment if you get the chance.
--LadyOfSin |
| capitalXD |
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hi Ladyofsin,
short and sweet. pretty good use of descriptions over adjectives.
your dialogue pulls double duty, like all good dialogue, and drives the
story forward while simultaneously revealing more about the
characters. bravo!
my favorite part is where the male character looks down to watch
the young girls virgin blood leaking around his erection. I do wish
you would have stayed with that visual longer. its powerful physical
proof of the direction the story is headed.
I wished you would have described the female character more. I
would want to see her eye color, hair color, hair length, ect...the
buildup to the rape is well established but the climax is short. maybe
the intensity of the climax should equal the intensity of the desire to
reach said climax. this is just my humble, unwanted opinion. also, I
think the word 'rape' is overused in general in erotica. like expletives
lose their power if overused, 'rape' is shown in what your characters
do. no need to have a case of 'rape touretts.' Again, just my
humble, unwanted opinion.
ill be looking you up and reading more of your work. thanks for
posting. |
| Daddy must do it |
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Wow!!! Another great read Chris. My daddy cock was hard from the start!! And whilst reading my own little girl was only feet from my cock. |
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Hey Daddy must do it, thanks for the feedback. Just to point it out, this story was written by a guest author, LadyOfSin. So your kudos belong to her!
--Chris |
| jeff |
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needs to be a little longer- great story... |
| Tory |
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Great story would love to discuss with you more on it. |
| Stix |
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In Afghanistan last month, there was a man that married an 8 year old (legal there). Then he raped her, killing her in the process. This is just too young for me. |
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I do not condone this kind of behavior in any way. I am not attracted to little children, of any age. In my fantasies, I am the child. Also, I never once mentioned any age. Never have, never would. People who actually ease or coax children into having sex and harming them should be ashamed of themselves, arrested and and tortured. People have all sorts of fantasies, it doesn't mean they will act on them. For instance, my fantasies can never come true for me because I am 30, (obviously not a child). Obviously I would never want a child to suffer through the physical and emotional trauma that you have suggested.
--LadyOfSin |
| Ladybug |
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Great story, I know exactly what a little girl feels like sitting on my lap, with
a leg on either side. It sure feels good. Haven't gone past that point. but I
sure have dream't about it. Can't wait for mom to walk in, with outrage,
then passion. Please continue. |
| Papa's Girl |
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Lady of Sin....I'm always the child in my fantasies, too. Glad to know
I'm not the only one. Great story |
| celebum |
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Fantastic! Every dirty man's ultimate power fantasy. Would love to talk
via email with you if interested. This scenario is my deepest desire.
Thank you for this. |
| Tony Bobby |
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Great story! Love the fact he couldn't stand it anymore and drilled that little pussy! I was hard from start to finish! |
| Here you go |
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Great story again the story line works you have a way to make the
reader feel they are there. Great job |
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Thanks, "Here you go!" The email you provided didn't work--post another response with the correct email and I can thank you directly
--LadyOfSin |
| Anonymous |
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I, too, am always the little girl in my fantasies. Thanks for putting that out there! |
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I'm glad we are not alone!
--LadyOfSin |
| Blu |
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reminds me of a time not so long ago |
| horny daddy |
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r8 loved the story was hard from beginning to end even though i came
sloppily. i'm still wanking like mad and i know i will cum again...love yr stories chris i'm 76 and u keep me hard and cumming. if u r willing to chat about these ideas send an answer and i will let u have my email addy |
| CTY |
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Loved it. Only difference is that I would not have penetrated her. I would
simply have sucked on that little pussy till it exploded. |
| BadBill |
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Really good story, though short. He should have had the little girl lick
him and suck him after he raped her hairless little pussy. Your story got
me hard, but needs more depravity. |
| Anonymous |
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Rape is sick,
the physical
& mental
damage it
causes is
undescribeable.
If you're
going to
write a sex
story with
children it
should be
only be a
loving shag,
not RAPE.
but I must
say it was
good. =-O |
| PurvyPurvyDaddy |
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Holy hell, this was a good stroke fest, LadyOfSin. Love your mind. |
| dachief |
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LoS...
Such a Naughty little girl you are... with such a wicked mind... ;-)
you do know there's also bath time, bedtime stories, the playground...
and, then there's those very special times when Daddy comes in quietly
at night and plays Big Girl games with His little precious... |
| Wishful Thinker |
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This has been an interesting story, although a little short, I agree
with some of the other commentators that some more detail about the
girl should have been included. however, a very good read for those
who are interested in "getting to the point" (which is always a good
thing). Congrats, very good writing. I would like to learn more or
even meet or talk to anyone about this - email me if u like. anyway
keep up the good work (and great comments by all the commenter s too,
very informative and entertaining ! |
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Wishful wrote:
"I would like to learn more or even meet or talk to anyone about this - email me if u like."
But you didn't leave your email! Drop the email in a comment and I'll forward it to Lady of Sin.
--Chris |
| pantyman56 |
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I love your stories and the ages of the little girls. Kept my cock hard and dripping. |
| Teetee |
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I will tell you true stories of when I was a little princess and how it all went from innocent to desire.... |
| Anonymous |
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This brings back a lot of memories of my little girl on my lap. |
| Anonymous |
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very nice 1st part , got to keep going though |
| Anonymous |
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Is there gong to be a part two? |
| paul modibe |
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hot story, needs chapter 2 and/or more. Those little lips need to suck
daddy off and her little butt needs a going over. Love to have her rim
daddy's nasty ass. |
| del |
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Great story got me hard in no time love to read more. |
| Don |
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Great story. One night my niece told me what happened to her when she
was eleven. Very hot. Please write so we can talk. |
| pedox |
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I would have spent hours just sucking her bald pussy then letting her
suck me. Great story |
| Anonymous |
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I loved the story... agreed with all needs to be longer.... I am female;
reminds me of when I was little |
| PuffyLips |
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I am also a child in my fantasy but I am in a relationship where I have a
mommy and daddy. Wish you would write more of these stories. They
so tickle all three of us and give us some ideas on new fantasies :) |
| Kitty |
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I'm also the little girl in these scenarios. Loved this! |
| Anonymous |
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Interesting thoughts |
| Daddy Depraved |
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Oh my God this was amazing. I can so relate to this man's pent up frustration. I would never act on it, but I think about it often. |
| easyone |
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Great story. |
| jakeraker |
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I loved the story as it had me really hard and SO much wanting to be
the man. I agree with several of the comments that I prefer more gentle loving
penetration, but nevertheless, awesome. Thank you |
| ytrbt |
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I cum so hard to these stories. I'm a mommy who wants to walk in and catch daddy at
these acts .. and surprise him by joining in. Like if he decided her little pussy was just
too tiny, but her ass would stretch better.. and he had her with her back against his chest
and his cock deep inside her tight little ass... mommy could get on her knees and lick
their little girl's pussy at the same time. |
| Anonymous |
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love the story. she needs to have her anus developed like my dad did to me .shell love it if he,s gentle. |
| Quiet Kerry |
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Liked this story.
Also liked that I'm not the only adult female who'd like to be a little girl
again ;-) |
| Mghtyme209 |
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This is an amazing story. I think it is a thought that has gone through dads' minds often. It just takes fantasy to reality. Very sexy and erotic. I love how you really draw me in and make me feel like in the daddy!!! I love it!!! |
| Cm90691 |
4/26/2016 |
LadyOfSin, great story. I too have daddy/little girl fantasies where I am the little girl. I
enjoy rape fantasy stories a lot. |
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We are kindred spirits. I hope that I allowed for you to disappear into a sensual and sexy fantasy for a little while. I also hope that you had an amazing, soaking wet orgasm! --Kisses, LOS |
| Squiggy |
4/26/2016 |
Great story really hot. |
| Anonymous |
4/27/2016 |
I grew up with my step dad, when I was 10 he started with the kissing and touching,
don't know why but I enjoyed it. One day sitting on his lap with my legs over his, he
started to tickle the inside of my legs, it felt nice,, he got so close, I started shaking, as
he rubbed me to my first orgasm. We continued for years after, I am married now with
two young girls, and a husband who understands me. |
| Anonymous |
4/28/2016 |
I was. 14 my sister was 10 she was tight best fuck I ever had. Again and again and
again. Still do love her sweet cunt. |
| Missy |
4/29/2016 |
mmmm the memories of being a little girl people don't realize what we were capable
of what we could take inside us as little girls mmmm and the feeling of the cum I was
soaked getting wet again talking about it ....thanks for the type set size too
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| superbadxxx |
4/29/2016 |
Wow loved it all apart from the blood thing,,,speaking to the ladies
on here who are little girls, nearly everyone of my ex gfs and a lot
of one night stands I've had have loved, and I really mean it when I
say this, they love daddy dick and love a bit of age play, some like
been good girls and some like to be bad girls, some like been raped
some like to rape daddy lol all little girls love it hard tho, and
love getting stretched out |
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And I've been a very, very, bad little girl ;) --LadyOfSin |
| lilgirl@heart |
4/30/2016 |
I am so happy to find out that I'm not alone in my fantasies of being a
little girl again and letting daddy have his way with me. Is this
the 'new normal?' haha, maybe we're just now cumming out of the
closet. Loved your story LadyOfSin, haven't orgasmed yet, but I
intend to. Would love a story about a sweet little girl who likes to help
lecherous old men fulfill their darkest fantasies with her....I would
love to be that little girl. I'm thinking of writing this story myself. Keep
up the good work! |
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Chris Hailey here... If you do write such a story, lilgirl@heart, you know where you can publish it! :) |
| Stu |
5/3/2016 |
Male. I was sexualized early and have been a horny bugger ever
since. I wish there were more stories with young boys and older
women, sisters, aunts, moms. I was trained in the gentle and loving
school of sex. I really got off on this story though. I would be horny
too, if in that kind of situation. I have never had that experience.
Wish I had. I am amazed at the number of women who responded.
I wish I could email them. That would be fun roleplay! |
| manrolle |
5/3/2016 |
Fantastic little story, I have never fantasized about my two daughters
myself but many, many time about their friends. Personally I really
was turned on when the story changed direction from gentleness to
penetration and rape, when the father could think and do nothing but
penetrate his daughter, despite he was hurting her, even though she
seemed to enjoy it in the end. I think she is willing to let her
father continue her education after all, and I would love to read the
follow-up story! |
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Thanks for commenting. I love hearing from my fans (and critics)! I only wish I had been Daddy's princess --Lady Of Sin |
| def |
5/6/2016 |
Great story next time I would like her raped in the missionary
position,there is nothing as dominant as a male mounting a little girl and
her feeling his weight and his grunting in the thores of orgasm. |
| Jake |
5/11/2016 |
Wonderful story. I never thought of doing that with my daughter but had many orgasms thinking about her friends and other little girls I knew. I was very sexual very young and am sure many young girls are the same. Thank you. |
| A fan of fantasy |
4/23/2017 |
Every one of my fantasies, I am the little girl. But my dreams always
revolve around me being taken, humiliated or compelled to entertain
black families. Often starting out with getting bullied by a black girl
and forced to do things that are embarrassing, then she uses the
pics to blackmail me to serve her, her older brother, then her
parents, and if they have a dog, that too. An early education on sex
may have corrupted me. |
| Anonymous |
4/23/2017 |
oh! Man that story was hot. Reminds me of my cute little niece. She doesn't wear
panties and when she sits her hot little ass in my lap and I get a ragging boner. I hoping
for a day when she starts wears skirts and dresses and me in my boxers. And my dick
pushing out the hole and sneaking its way into her sweet young cunny. |
| Kev |
4/24/2017 |
Loved the story. Little girls teasing always gets me hard especially when the moms
are involved and encourage their daughters to show off their sexy little bodies then
mom rubs herself while.watching her little girl take care of those men ;)
I think all.mommies should train their little girls how to properly please many men
You can publish email address (a href="mailto:Kevinswilliams608@gmail.com">Kevinswilliams608@gmail.com |
| dancr |
4/25/2017 |
Great Story..... |