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Chapter 1 – Baby shower

My reverie was rudely interrupted.

“Do you think she’s a slag?” said a voice next to me.

I looked to my left and saw Emma, the little sister of Amy whose baby shower I was inexplicably attending. I shifted uncomfortably, hoping that the bulge in my jeans was not noticeable.

“Who?” I asked.

“Her.” She replied nodding towards Amy.

“Really?” I asked. Amy was the reason I was nursing a hard on. From the back she looked hot. Nice figure, cute ass, sexy dress highlighting her curves. But when she turned you could see that she was pregnant, very pregnant. A huge stomach that looked like it could hold twins. Tits that weren’t huge but looked heavy with milk and promise.

I had been wondering what she looked like naked, imagining how tight her pussy would still be before she dropped the baby. How she would deal with me and a couple of the lads using all of her holes. Had she started producing enough milk to allow me to suckle? But most of all I dreamt about unloading over her stomach. Emptying my heavy balls over her baby bump then watching her massage it into her skin whilst scooping some of my hot cum into her mouth.

“Why do you say that?” I asked looking at Emma who looked a little like a younger smaller version of her sister, long blonde hair but only just beginning to move into puberty.

“Well she didn’t have to get knocked up. There’s loads of other things she could have done that would have stopped this but no, she had to fuck and get her life fucked up. I’ve looked on the web and can see lots of great ways to make boys cum without them cumming inside your pussy.”

“Really?” I say again but this time looking directly at Emma. “How old are you? Too young to be worrying about sex and pregnancy. As far as I know Amy is 19 and is with the father.”

“Still too young to fuck her life up. She’s 8½ months gone and is booked in for a caesarean in two weeks. So a nice scar as well as everything.”

“But still a nice tight cunt” I muttered. “What?” said Emma suddenly staring at me.

“Err nothing, I shouldn’t be talking like this with her little sister, ignore me.”

“Err No, you fancy my sister? How old are you”

“Just because I’m 54 it doesn’t mean I can’t recognise beauty when I see it. But no I don’t fancy her She is younger than all of my kids.”

“Ha-ha,” Emma was sitting staring at me now, “You are over 40 years older than me! How many kids have you got? 4 I think.”

“Correct, but I shouldn’t be talking like this with a 13 year old.”

“12, but I am a woman not a girl, if you understand me.”

“I’m not sure I do, you are saying you’ve had sex?”

She slapped me on the arm. “Course not, I meant that I’ve started coming on.”

We were interrupted. “Emma, you are not bothering Uncle Matt are you?”

“No dad, I’m not bothering ‘Uncle’ Matt, am I Matt?”

“Not at all. Just having a little chat Andy”

“Can we go home soon dad? I’m bored shitless!”

“Emma, wash your mouth out. We plan to spend a couple more hours here then all go out for a meal, family what’s the hurry, its half term.”

“Daaaad please can you take me home first. It’ll be sooo boring.” I looked at Emma and smiled she was reverting to a child in front of my eyes.

Andy looked down at her, “I’ve had a drink I can’t drive you home.”

“Get me an Uber then”

“I’ll drive her home.” They both looked at me. I didn’t mean to but wanted to continue our conversation.

“Brilliant, Matt’ll take me. That’s Ok isn’t it dad?”

“No I don’t want to put him to any trouble and I’m not sure you should be left alone for so long.”

“It won’t be any trouble.” I’d done it again, I could feel myself blushing but at least me hard on had completely subsided.

“And I’m nearly 13 dad, I’m not going to burn the house down and I haven’t got enough time to organise a party” Emma looked pleadingly at her dad. Fuck, she looks cute I thought. “Joking dad, go check with mum.”

“Well if Matt doesn’t mind, I guess you are old enough to spend a few hours home alone, you sure Matt?”

“Mmm I’m sure she will a complete pain in the …. But it’s only a 10 minute drive so I’m sure I’ll cope.”

“Thanks Matt, can you give me a minute to get my coat and say bye to Mum and Amy?”

“You want to go now? Oh ok no problem.”

“Go on then Emma.” Said Andy “And please just this once can you be nice to your sister, she gets upset when you are so rude about her baby bump. We’ll be home about 8 or 9 tonight”

“Ok dad. Be right back Matt.”

I looked at my watch, 12:30.

We got in the car, I had a nervous feeling in my stomach that I hadn’t had for years and I told myself not to be so stupid. Both seat belted up I pulled out of the carpark. Emma had her coat on but undone. She looked relaxed but it seemed that her legs were slightly more apart than I would have expected. You’re being stupid again I admonished myself.

But every time I changed gear I found my hand brushing against her knee. The traffic was busy so I changed gear a lot until I just left my hand almost permanently on the gear stick. She left her knee there and in fact seemed to be gently rubbing it against me.

She broke the silence. “Matt, can I ask you a question?”

“Of course, anything you want”

“And you promise you’ll tell me the truth?”

“Well that depends on the question.” I replied.

“Oh I won’t bother asking then.” She shrugged her shoulders and moved her knee away.

“I’m joking.” I quickly responded. “Of course I will tell you the truth.”

Her knee came back and I rubbed it gently before having to change gear.

“Well when I came over to you first you were looking at my sister”.

“Was I?”

“Yes, don’t deny it. Tell me, truthfully now, did you have a boner when you were staring at her?”

Silence whilst I thought how to answer. I glanced over at her, she was looking straight at me with a very serious expression on her face. My mind and heart were racing and the feeling in my stomach was growing stronger. I replied,

“Please don’t tell her or your parents, or anyone for that matter but yes I had a slight hard on.”

“Ha I knew it.” She almost shouted. “You fancy Amy!”

“Of course I don’t” I stammered “It’s just, err It’s just that she looks hot with her bump. I’ve always had a thing for pregnant women.”

“Why’s that” asked Emma. “Hold that thought we are here. Don’t park on the drive, go round the corner so we, I mean I can go in the back.”

‘We’ my heart skipped a beat but I turned round the corner and parked in a secluded spot next to her back gate but out of sight of prying eyes. I pulled up the handbrake.

“What are your plans for the rest of the day then Emma?” I asked.

“Haven’t really got any. I just wanted to get away from all the baby shit. Watch telly and relax I guess. I don’t suppose you want to come in for a coffee or something?”

Calm down I thought to myself. “I could pop in for a little while if you don’t mind hanging around with an old fart like me.”

“Good that’s settled then, I need to question you more about fancying Amy.”

She got out the car with me following. “I don’t fancy Amy I said, just her bump.”

She opened the back door into the kitchen. “Can you put the kettle on I’m dying for a wee.” Said Emma running through the house.

I filled the kettle from the cold tap and put it on. Then looked at a glass on the drainer.

“You really are a sad fucker” I whispered to myself as I filled the glass. From my pocket I pulled out a little tin, opened it and took out a blue diamond shaped pill. I popped the Viagra into my mouth and swallowed it down. Then, just for good luck I swallowed a second one.

“Good” said Emma, “You’ve put the kettle on. I’ll have a coffee too if you are making them.

I looked up at Emma she had changed out of her party dress and into crop top and shorts. I almost dropped the glass.

Chapter 2 – A step closer

I made two coffees, white two sugars each. Emma stood close watching me. I realised that she must have been wearing big heels as she suddenly looked a lot smaller standing there 4”6, maybe less. Her long blonde hair was in a ponytail, ‘Pig tails’ popped into my mind but I pushed that thought aside. With her skinny flat body and slim hips she looked much more like a girl than 10 minutes ago.

We moved to the living room, large with a big TV and two huge couches. I sat on the one facing the TV and my heart beat a little faster when she sat next to me.

“So is it Amy you fancy or pregnant women in general?” She asked.

“Well your sister is very pretty, almost as pretty as you ha-ha. But there is something about a big bump that makes me very horny.”

She laughed, “Horneee! You want to fuck her?”

“Emma!” I admonished, “I can’t discuss things like this with you!”

“Ha-ha, you want to fuck my sister! Don’t worry, I won’t tell her.”

“No I don’t … well maybe a little.” I said, “Tell you what, you really won’t say anything to anyone?”

“Cross my heart and hope to die.”

Emma was sitting sideways on the couch looking at me, one foot on the floor, the other bent under her causing her legs to be spread quite wide, Her shorts were tight and stretched.

”Well ok then, you’ve promised so no going back.”

“Tell me!” she begged moving closer leaning towards me.

“Well I was fantasising about err well, you know, cumming on her baby bump.”

Silence, Emma staring at me. “Shit” I thought, “I’ll finish my coffee and get the fuck out of there”.

“How?” started Emma.

“What do you mean how?” I asked.

“Were you thinking of jerking off over her, or her jerking you off or what?”

“I hadn’t thought that far when you interrupted.”

“Mmm, looking at the bulge in your trousers says that you had been thinking about it for a while.”

“You are far too observant young lady.” I said. “I think that I would have wanked over her, but she would have helped me get ready to cum.” I knew I should be steering the conversation away from this subject but wanted to see where it was going.

“I wish I could help you.” Said Emma. I looked at her. She didn’t seem to be joking but more in deep thought. “Does it feel nice when you cum?”

“It’s the best feeling there is.”

“I like making myself cum.” she continued, “It feels good but not like I see women on the internet. I guess it’s better when someone else makes you cum instead of doing it yourself.”

“Well I’d have to agree with you there.” I answered. “A lot of the women are just acting, you know but somebody else helping you finish is much better.”     

“So why do you want to jerk off over her? Why not get her to do you, or someone else?”

“I really don’t know Emma, it’s just a fantasy, never going to happen. Of course if someone else’s hand finished me off…”

“I’ve made a boy cum given him a hand job.” Said Emma looking down. “I should have made him make me cum too.”

“You are much too young to be doing things like that Emma, but yeah big mistake. Always get everything you want before you make him cum. Once us men cum we often lose interest.” I laughed.

“I’ll make sure next time.” Emma giggled and winked at me. “If he makes me cum I’ll really show him a good time.”

“I’m sure you will Emma but really you should wait a few years and be careful you don’t want to end up like your sister do you?

“Mmm,” considered Emma, “Bet you wish I was like Amy right now. But no who wants to be lumbered with a baby and her age, or any age come to that.”

I finished my coffee, “probably time to go” I thought, and shifted in my seat. Emma stood up as if ready to show me out.

But she stood in front of me and lifted up her top showing her flat taut stomach. ”So you only like pregnant stomachs? Not flat little tummies like mine?”

I looked at her stomach, and at her tight shorts, slim legs and dainty feet. Then looked up at her beautiful face and her piercing eyes staring at me. Reaching forward I gently stroked her stomach. “Emma your stomach is beautiful, in fact you are a beautiful girl, I mean young woman.”

She shuffled forward and looked down at me “Bet you want to cum on my tummy.”

“Ha ha, maybe if you were a bit older.”

“You think I’m a baby don’t you Matt?” asked Emma looking into my eyes, she looked younger and more vulnerable by the second.

“It’s not that Emma.” I replied, “But you are so young, I could get into a lot of trouble you know, lose my job and end up in prison.”

“Well, I’m wouldn’t say anything I promise.” She lifted her top up slightly and moved it closer to my face.

“But Emma…”

“Matt, I’d love to make you cum.”

I looked at her, my resolve failing, “But Emma, it would be so naughty.”

“I like being naughty, sometimes I don’t think I’m naughty enough. I make you cum and then clean myself up before anyone gets home. Our little secret.”

“Oh fuck.” I whispered.

“So ‘Uncle’ Matt, I’ll ask once more, do you want to cum over my stomach?”

I looked up at her and nodded, sliding my arm around her.

She continued, not moving away, “Even though it’s flat. And my boobs are tiny.”

I nodded again, “Yes.”

As I pulled her towards me she whispered “Will you make me cum first?”

“Oh yes I promise.” I replied as she fell into my lap. “But just one thing. Please don’t call me Uncle as we do this."

Chapter 3 – Dreams come true

I pulled her onto my lap and moved so I could kiss her full on the lips. She responded, kissing me back. Her breath smelled of toothpaste, fuck knows what mine was like I’d eaten god knows what at the party. I pushed my tongue against her lips and felt them open slightly. As our tongues touched I slid an arm around her back and held her close.

She started kissing me harder, our tongues colliding and lips squashed tightly, teeth colliding. One arm round her back the other slowly moved up her stomach until I felt her top, and a bullet little nipple under it. As we kissed I gently stroked one nipple through her top and felt it stiffen and grow slightly under my touch. I shifted, trying to keep my hardening cock from pressing against me. “Plenty of time for that.” I thought as the Viagra began to kick in.

I pulled my mouth away to look at her, looking so young with her eyes closed and a pert little nose. “Don’t stop.” she moaned and pulled my mouth back to hers, sliding her tongue into my mouth. I moved my hand and started stroking her other nipple, feeling just a hint of a mound that will soon develop into the cutest little tits I imagined.

Emma’s hand reached down searching out my cock but I was worried that the lightest touch may have set me over the edge so I moved it away. I slowly started lifting her top up, back over her flat tummy, it wasn’t really a stomach, it really looked like a tummy. But I didn’t stop there as she now held my head between both her hands to kiss me harder, I continued lifting it higher and higher until I broke away from her mouth and lifted it over her head.

“Can we go up to my room please Matt?” she croaked.

“Of course we can.” I replied and Emma grabbed her top and ran off giggling up the stairs.

Chapter 4 – Taking control

Going into her room I was once again reminded how young she was. There were posters of dunno, was that Taylor Swift and next to that I’m pretty sure it was 1 Direction. But you could see she hadn’t fully got rid of her childhood with a bed covered in stuffed toys, teddies and the like. In the corner there was even a dolls house. She saw me looking at it, her hands shyly covering her nascent boobs. “That’s really old, I haven’t played with it for years.”

“That’s fine.” I said, “Very cute, but I do wonder whether this is a good idea.”

“No No, Yes Yes, don’t go please I want to do this. But please if I’ve got my top off you’ve got to do the same.”

For a second I thought about turning round and fleeing. Well maybe half a second. My brain said get the fuck out of there, my heart said well let’s see where this go, my cock was yelling at me to get my top off. I lifted my top over my head and moved onto the bed.

“You’ve got grey hairs” Emma rubbed the hairs on my chest her nails rubbing my chest.

“You too!” I joked admiring her tiny boobs but bullet nipples properly for the first time. “You really want me to make you cum Emma?”

“I’m a little scared but yes. Please.” She reached down to remove her shorts.

“Stop.” I commanded, “I want to undress you.” I unzipped and stepped out of my Jeans. Emma stared at my boxers bulging as my cock was straining, at its full length of 6”

“Can I touch it?” Emma moved towards it.

“Only when you’ve cum, now lie down Emma.”

Throwing a pile of stuffed toys off the bed Emma lay down arms by her side legs stretched and feet together. “You look very nervous babe. Stiffer than I am if you know what you mean. Let me get you a little more relaxed.”

I moved to the foot of her bed and gently started massaging her right foot kneeding the underside and rubbing the top. She jerked as I tickled her but I lifted it of the sheet and bent her leg slightly. I then moved in kissing her foot, sucking on her toes one at a time. Then slowly moving up kissing her ankle, her calf, up to her knee. Always concentrating on the inner calf, inside of the knee, her leg slowly opening as I moved higher. Her lower thigh, higher so close to her shorts.

My fingers gently rested on the outside of her shorts and I felt her shiver. “If you want me to stop just tell me.”

“Don’t stop, carry on, this is so good.”

I lightly kissed her pubis through the light fabric of her shorts then carries on upwards. Kissing her flat tummy I continues to run her gently through the fabric of her shorts. Moving higher I reached right nipple, slowly licking it and around it, gently nibbling on it.

Emma reacted like she’d received a gentle electric shock, twitching and writhing her hands keeping my head in place. I was able to suck her entire pubescent breast in my mouth, concentrating on her hard nipple hearing Emma moan in pleasure. I could feel the shorts getting moist. I carried on moving up kissing her gently on the neck before kissing her hard on the lips her tongue pushing into, my mouth instantly. My cock throbbing so hard that I wondered if the second Viagra was a mistake.

As we kissed I felt her young pussy lips under her shorts rubbing them more firmly and feeling them part slowly. Pulling away from the kiss I look down at Emma her breathing was hard, her little chest rising and falling fast. Leaning over further I sucked and kissed the other nipple, making it as hard is its twin. I felt Emma’s hand slide down over her stomach and into her shorts. I felt her fingers under mine and let her rub herself for a minute before pulling them away. I moved her hand to her left nipple and whilst she played with that I tweaked and rubbed the other. I carried on back over her tummy, licking and kissing her belly button before moving back down over her shorts and kissing her inner thigh.

Again I pulled away, Emma had a faraway look in her eyes, I hadn’t really started yet but she looked well on the way to her first orgasm other than those self-administered. Her legs now far apart I admired the sexy camel toe and could see the wetness seeping out of her preteen body. I pulled them close and slowly pulled down her shorts revealing a virtually bald slightly puffy pussy, glistening with juices. Finally I moved my head towards her perfect mound, breathing in her scent thereby increasing my lust for her. She smelt so much sweeter than my usual women and as I kissed her pussy I discovered for the first time the fantastic taste of a young girl.

I gently kissed and licked her tight slit pushing my tongue in slightly. She was wet, fucking wet and ready. I then searched out her clit, surprisingly bigger than I expected and started kissing licking and biting it. Emma lifted her knees up and clamped my head in place. “Oh my god” she moaned, “This is amazing, never felt anything like this.”

Slowly sucking her clit, I felt it swell and could feel Emma pushing her hips up driving to make me envelop more of her cunt. Her breathing got heavier as I slid a finger against her vulva and then into her virgin pussy.

Licking and nibbling on her was getting her wetter and her juices were all over my face and in my mouth. I started licking her pussy and using my finger to rub her clit. Her moaning increased and she started writhing. “Oooohhh.” She moaned, “I think I’m going to ….”

I felt her back arch as see pushed her hips up trying to get my tongues deeper into her pussy. Suddenly she grabbed my head pulling it into her groin and she almost sat up as her first proper orgasm racked her body. “Aaaah, stop now, no don’t, I feel faint, oh god.” She lay back and I moved up her body.

Kissing her hard, her juices over both of our tongues I grabbed at one of her nipples still hard as a bullet. She was still coming down from her experience when I slid a finger down and started rubbing her clit hard again. Still kissing her I felt her hand move down to move mine away but she stopped as a second orgasm hit her. She broke away from our kiss and moaned quietly at first and then rising in volume.

Emma then moved my hand away from her soaking pussy lifted it behind her head and kissed me deeply.

“Oh Matt that was amazing, I’ve never felt like that. Can we do that again? She whispered.

“Of course, any time.” I replied.

“But first I think I need to make you cum.”

Chapter 5 – Losing control

I lay on my back, my cock hard against my boxers, almost throbbing through lust. “This won’t take long at all” I thought.

“I feel a bit wobbly still.” Said Emma, “I’ve never felt like that before but I know I want to do this again and again. But I must say, I’m not ready to suck cock, I’m afraid I won’t like the taste. And I don’t think it’s safe for you to stick it in me, if my dates are right.”

“That’s ok,” I replied, “just use your hand, that would be fantastic.”

Emma moved lower and started pulling down my boxers. “Oh wow.” she said, boosting my ego and making me fall in love with her a little bit more. “I’m sure I can do a little bit better than a hand job but promise me one thing, tell me just before you cum. I want to see you cum. I want to know that it was me who made you cum.”

I moaned, “Ok Emma but be warned, it’s not going to take too much to set me over the edge.”

Emma smiled and climbed up and straddled my chest. Leaning down and kissing me as I reached for her tiny growing breasts. I felt her moving her hips backwards and forwards slowly against my chest and stomach. “I saw this in a porn film.” she whispered. She winked, “Ask me which one some time.”

She slid down my body until my hard cock was peeking out from under her, glistening with pre-cum. Then carefully she slid the length between her open wet pussy lips and slowly started to move up and down sliding my cock between them. Sliding all the way down to my heavy balls then slowly up to the tip.

When she got to the tip she carried on a fraction further before stopping and starting her way back. As she did this the tip of my cock got stuck in between her labia and for a split second the tip entered her tiny body. “Oops.” she giggled “I’m not ready for a baby!” before continuing her journey back to my aching balls. She did this a few more times, each time the tip almost penetrated her but she adjusted herself.

I could hear her breathing getting heavier again as she rode me but I was so close that she wouldn’t cum again just yet.

“Emma, I’m very close” I moaned.

“Really, very close or VERY close?”

“Any second, I’m so close.”

“Ok” Emma moved back and stroked the tip gently, pre-cum glistening on her fingers.

“Oh fuck, here I…” As I spoke Emma lifted herself up and slid the full length of my cock into her tight 12 year old cunt. As she lowered herself I felt the first rope of cum explode inside her. I gripped her arse and pumped another rope. I could feel my tip pushing against her cervix as a third fourth and fifth pulse of semen flooded her young but very fertile womb. I don’t know how many spurts there were but I don’t think I’ve ever cum so much.

My orgasm faded but my cock, with a double dose of Viagra stayed rock hard. I hoped that Emma would start riding my but instead she rolled off onto her back and started massaging her own clit. Breathing heavily she said “I think cumming sucks the cum in deeper.”

“Let me help” I rolled over and slid my cock back into her cunt. “I can help you cum and push it deeper.”

On top of her now reminded me how small she was, I could barely see her face as I loomed over her. Slowly fucking her, as she played with her clit I realised how tight she was, an almost perfect seal developed and it almost felt as she was sucking my cock into her and taking it out would sound like uncorking a bottle of wine. I maintained a gentle rhythm, not wanting to be too rough with her, if I played my cards right there would be plenty more opportunities.

I really wanted her on her knees so I could fuck her doggy, but her legs tried to wrap themselves round my waist as she finally made herself orgasm. Despite having cum just a little while earlier, the contractions of her orgasm send me over the edge again but before I unleashed a second, load deep inside her, I withdrew and shot a not quite as impressive load over her stomach.

Rolling on my back we both lay there panting. A 12 year old girl filled and covered with the cum of a 54 man, a family friend.

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Fishman 11/13/2021 Wow what a great story. I also have fantasy of pregnant bellies and leaking nipples but to get her little sister and hopefully knock her up to do it is better. I hope there are other chapters
Father4Star 11/06/2021 A very nice 12-year-old girl getting a nice cock education while learning her cunt can take a nice cock and make her feel great inside and out. Like most young girls given the chance will fuck an older man given the opportunity. And in spite of the laws, they make the choice. My experience with a girl's desire was a nine-year-old who made sure my cock slid into her cunt about the same as this story depicted. She turned her cunt up to catch my cock as it slid up her pussy folds and once it caught she pulled me in all the way, taking her own hymen out at the same time. She loved being fucked and filled with cum all summer long. That was over 40 years ago and felt as good as the first time I had sex at 6 years old. I am curious as to why we never hear back from our responses?
Anonymous 10/28/2021 It's so awesome when Matt was flooding Emma's 12 year old very fertile womb, breeding this sweetie.
Anonymous 10/21/2021 The most horny story I ever read. Fucking flat bellies to sweet round pregnant bellies of sisters or mommies are so awesome. Wonderful comments by Ap, Mike and Ra. Please more.
tropical angels 08/10/2021 Great story. made me cum (don't you just LOVE those aggressive, creative, tricky 12 yr olds ?) ... Part 2 is begging for creation....

P.S. I notice quite a few writers use "passed" in referring to what has PAST...
Tim 08/09/2021 Love her tricking him. Sure hope she's pregnant.
AP 08/02/2021 That's quite a fun little story and you paste it well. Like the others I think there is room for at least one sequel. However unlike the others I don't think that Emma needs to get knocked up. I think that the follow-up story or stories should stick to one of the main elements of your first part, Matt showing Emma how many different ways he can make her cum. Expand your writing skill by giving increasing detail on how he teaches Emma the pleasures of different positions, different levels of penetration, taking it in the ass, deepthroating, being consensually bound and tongue-lashed, and on and on... Let Matt turn Emma into a cum addict, not only addicted to her own orgasms but begging for Matt's cum which he teases her by depriving her of. In the end have Matt do a marathon breeding session with her across a weekend where she makes it clear that she's fertile, her screaming with each orgasm that he's breeding her. Then end with the give away that Matt had been playing her the whole time because he knew that he was infertile.
Bob 08/02/2021 Are you going to write more of your two characters? Does she get pregnant, and if so; how do they handle it? I loved the story, but you ended it too quickly.
Mike 07/23/2021 I'm in agreement with another writer concerning the desire of a sequel: does this go on & how long? Does she actually become pregnant & her parents - along with the uncle's - reactions. In an extreme, the parent's allow Emma to carry on, & in fact, eventually live with Steve. Would be interesting if the parents themselves were a little loose sexually, with Emma's sister & husband joining in. Oh, where the mind can go!

But seriously - deadly seriously: PUNCTUATION!!! While I understand what type of story this is, punctuation allows the reader to understand what you want to say. I've had to re-read too many things a second time, with a few lines just totally skipped over. I'm also sure I'm not the only one, just one that'll tell you. And as a PS: when it was Steve's time to cum, Emma 1st stated that she could get pregnant so he couldn't cum in her, just (a few lines later!), when riding him, she put his erection in him to cum. All of which leads to my beginning comments of: do they fuck many more times? Does she become pregnant, and... etc., etc., etc. (as Yul Brenner said, lol.)
Anoymous 06/22/2021 There seriously needs to be a sequel documenting the aftermath of that tryst. That was hot at the end with how she tricked him.
Rab 07/18/2021 Please please please continue with this one. Loved how she tricked him at the point of no return. She had obviously had something between her legs before to not have any trouble taking his cock deep in one stroke mmmmm

Love to know much more about this pairing and see where it goes too. Maybe he can suggest to her mum and dad that he fancies a good holiday and suggest that Emma comes with him so she's not feeling left out (her sister having so much attention for being pregnant). Then they could spend plenty of uninterrupted time while abroad xx Maybe she could say she met with a boy and got pregnant keeping her lover's name clear Mum and dad throw a wobbler and she spends some time thinking things through at her uncle Matt's . So many ways this could go

But just please add more to this one

Thoroughly enjoyed reading. Thanks