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Chapter 1

1999-Bosnia

Tracer rounds were buzzing and flashing through the darkness just outside the small Bosnian village. Counter fire was being returned by Lt. Dave Davidson's Marine heavy weapons platoon. He was joining up with a fellow Marine platoon from another company led by Lt. Bill Orr. That platoon had run into a bunch of Serb militia just outside the village. The Serbs were well entrenched and so close to the houses; it was difficult to call for artillery support. Davidson and 32 guys were sent out to help.

On join up, Davidson conferred quickly with Orr and they got their men spread for an attack. Over the next hour, there was a strong firefight. Lt. Davidson was credited with taking out two machine gun emplacement and killing eight Serbs on his own. He was later awarded the Bronze Star for that night's action.

Davidson's CO radioed and advised him to dig in and remain with Orr however Davidson was to take overall command of the combined platoons as he was senior. The Serb bodies were disposed of the next day while two Marine wounded were choppered out at first light. A search was conducted to see if any Serbs were hiding in the village and if any weapons were to be found. It was Orr that struck pay dirt and not one of military significance. He took a chance and shared his info with Davidson.

Lt. Davidson joined Orr in a small house right on the edge of the village. What happened that day was to change the course of his life a few years later. Inside the house was a woman of about 35 years of age with 3 girls aged 13, 11 and 9. Considering the poor state of the house, it contained quite a bit of expensive video and camera equipment. Orr placed an album in Davidson's hands. It contained very explicit shots of the three girls, naked, playing with each other and sucking cocks! Dave was amazed that he immediately got an erection looking at the photos of these little girls!

"Thought that you might be interested in these and I notice your approval," grinned Orr as he pointed to the bulge in Dave's crotch. "This woman works for the local mafia. She uses her daughters to do pictures and porn videos which are sold to the Mafia for the internet. She has a number of other village girls who work for her. It's decent money and there isn't much of that here in the village plus they are afraid of the mafia. She fears we will take her equipment and destroy the stuff. The Mafia will probably kill her if the stuff is taken".

Lt. Davidson looked very thoughtfully at the mother while glancing at the girls. "I would like to see them all naked," he said to the mother. The mother spoke in her own language to the girls who quickly took off all their clothes. They didn't seem bashful at all and it was easy to see that they were use to being naked in front of grown men.

Davidson faced the mother. "You understand English but the daughters don't, is that correct?" he asked. The mother nodded that he was correct.

Davidson looked at the other platoon leader and said, "Are you thinking maybe what I am thinking? Is that why you brought me over here?"

Orr grinned and replied, "Dave, I've always liked young stuff but the youngest I've ever had was 15 and that's when I was younger myself. We're not going to hurt them and they are not virgins. I already asked the mother."

Davidson grinned and turned to the mother. "We both promise that we will not hurt your daughters in anyway however we would like to have sex with them. What you are doing here will not be reported and we will not take your equipment. However, we would also like to have some of the pictures to keep."

The mother quickly smiled at the two Marines and said, "Yes, yes, you may sex the little ones, yes." She turned to her daughters and rambled off some instructions. The oldest Ola took Dave's hand and smiled. She led him into a bedroom while Bill followed with the 11 yr old, Nena, holding his hand. The smallest, Laya, came in with her now naked mother who looked damn good for her age. Nena and Ola helped the men undress. As soon as they were naked, Laya got between Dave's legs and took his dick into her very tiny mouth.

"Oh gawd, this is something I never believed could happen." Said Dave looking over to see that the mother had Bill's cock in her mouth and was giving him a very experienced licking. Meanwhile, Ola and Nena were on the bed behind the men playing with their pussies and nipples to get wet for the fucking that was to commence shortly.

Laya was doing a pretty good job on Dave. She was licking his shaft and sucking on the mushroom head in such a delightful manner. Every 30 seconds or so, she would engulf the shaft and take him as deep as she could without gagging. Meanwhile, the mother was taking Bill all the way down her throat. Bill's eyes were as big as saucers as this attractive woman gave him very special attention. Finally, the mother pulled off and dragged little Laya from Dave's cock. "You no shoot yet. You sex girls now, yes!" she said.

Bill looked at Dave and said, "We can't stay out of contact for much longer or one of the NCOs will start looking. We can always get seconds whenever we are in the area." The mother nodded in agreement as Dave turned to climb between the legs of the 13 yr old brunette Ola with the nice tits. Ola was old enough to have pubic hair but Dave noticed that she was shaven as was 11 yr old Nena.

Dave moved forward and kissed the young girl on the lips. He held the kiss while he moved his hips forward and put his very hard cock at her pussy entrance.

"I have no intention of hurting you. Hopefully you will enjoy as I know you are not a virgin," said Dave. The mother immediately translated to the confused girl. Ola smiled and put her arms around his neck to get another kiss. Dave got position and eased himself into her wet tunnel. If Laya's mouth was good, this is heaven, he thought.

Bill was really glad that Dave was going along with this little venture. When he had first seen the stuff in the house, he knew what he wanted to do, fuck his brains out. Yet, Dave was senior man and could end up seeing Bill court marshaled. Now both were in this together. Speaking of in, he grinned at little Nena who was waiting with wide spread legs. The 11 yr old looked very much like her mother, long, light brown hair, slender with nice legs. Her mother had quite the rack but right now Nena had small breasts with lovely nipples. The girl was not a virgin but she sure squeezed Bill's cock the deeper he went.

Both Marines were having a ball screwing these two young girls. The mother was sucking on Nena's tits while Laya did the same for her older sister Ola. The girls were getting into the whole scene with gusto. They men were treating them a lot better then some men did in the videos they were involved in. They knew, even though they didn't understand the men, that they were willing to let their mother continuing making money. That meant food on the table for all four females. This was their only source of income. The Marines had also saved their village from the Serbs who had burned down so many villages and slaughtered everyone in them. Nena and Ola worked very hard to please these American men.

Dave was having an absolute ball with Ola. The girl didn't stop smiling at him and her hips met his on every stroke. She was rubbing his shoulders and would pull his face down for kisses. She turned and said something to her sister Nena whose pussy was chock full of Bill's cock. The mother quickly answered Dave's questioning look. "Ola say you are good man and she loves your cock, yes. She hope Nena like her man too, yes."

"You can tell Ola that she is a good girl and I like her very much," Dave leaned forward and kissed the girl again this time putting his tongue in her mouth. The girl responded in kind and giggled. Both men fucked and fucked the two little girls.

Bill asked, "Can Nena take it up the ass if I take my time?"

"Yes, she do that before and Ola too, but with boys, yes. You big men. Please not hurt," said the mother. She said something to the girls. The guys pulled out and the girls got on their hands and knees, both with looks of concern on their faces.

The mother quickly said, "You wait, yes." She went to a bed stand and brought back a tube of lube and gave it to Bill. He put some on Nena's lovely asshole and his cock. He handed the tube to Dave. Bill said to the mother, "I'm glad you thought of that, we really don't want to hurt them." The mother smiled in response and told the girls who visibly relaxed.

Bill had squeezed lube into Nena's hole using two fingers while coating his own cock. He put his cock to her hole and very gently eased forward until the head popped in. He held steady to give her a chance. He waited until he felt her push back a little bit with her hips. He pushed another two inches in and stopped again. Soon she signaled that she could take more. This continued until he was bottomed out in her bowels. He started a slow steady stroke until she was responding to each of his thrusts and moaning. Her mother had gotten on the side of the bed and played with her daughter's clit. Nena was enjoying the pleasant ass fuck from this big man who now had a finger in her pussy.

Ola was getting good treatment from Dave. She was a little more experienced in taking cock in the backdoor however that did not stop her appreciating that Dave was being very gentle and trying to give her pleasure. While riding her cute ass, he was playing with both breasts. Little sister Laya was working on Ola's clit.

Bill was in 7th heaven. He had dreamed so long of being able to fuck a girl as young as this and knew he was about to blow his load. He warned the mother that he was about to fill little Nena's bowels. Nena, on instructions, moved her hips faster and tightened up as much as she could. That was it for Bill, "aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh, geeezzzzzz, yessss!" He blew his full load in that delightful 11 yr old ass and held his cock there while squeezing the girl's nipples. Bill and the mother succeeded in bringing Nena to her own orgasm several seconds later. "ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" The little girl sounded off.

Ola, with little Laya now licking her clit, was next and preceded Dave by about 30 seconds. She was screaming her cum out in her own language. Her bucking hips drove Dave to the brink. With one final push, he held his cock in and fed her every drop of a very full load. "Yessssssssssssssssssssssssssssss, yeeessssssssssssssss, gawd, I've never felt anything as good as that before." He rolled sideways so he wouldn't crush the girl.

Everyone cleaned up, dressed and was very happy. The two platoons were there for another four days before being relieved. Bill and Dave were relieved everyday. They screwed Nena and Ola several more times. They both fucked the mother a couple of times and little Laya sucked off both men but they didn't have sex with her at the request of the mother.

Chapter 2

Spryfield USA- late 2000

Both Dave and Bill were out of the Marines and back in civvies. Dave had acquired an engineering degree while in the Marines while Bill had an accounting degree. Dave had Bill take over his accounting while Dave traveled the world working on various projects. Some of these he had created himself, while he also consulted for other larger firms.

Bill and Dave had discussed their Bosnian adventure a number of times. They were back in the good old US of A now and didn't think there would be anything like that happen again. Bill had found a very young girlfriend half his age, 16 yr old Edna Purcell. The girl dug whatever sex action Bill could think up. Dave was almost envious that Bill had the desirable little blonde. One night that problem was solved when at Dave's house, Bill was pretty drunk. Edna came nude into Dave's room and climbed into his bed.

"Don't worry! Bill knows. He's just too drunk to take care of me and I'm sooooooooo horny," cooed the 16 yr old. Dave was doubtful but didn't take much convincing when the little blonde went under the covers and started playing with his cock. Her tongue felt so good and it was definite that she had been well trained by either Bill or some other lucky guy. What Dave did not know, at the time, was that Edna had been a lesbian since she was nine yrs old. Bill had seduced the girl and she had fallen in love with him. Most of her oral expertise had come from licking pussy.

Dave just basked in the feelings this young teenage was giving him. Her expert tongue had him fully erect almost right away. To heck with this he though, I've got to see what this little blonde has to offer. He sat up and grabbed one of her legs, twisting her body around so that her feet were towards his head. He quickly spread her legs and moved his face towards her young pussy

"Stop!" Dave said to a very startled girl. She popped his cock out of her mouth and looked back at him.

"What's wrong?" she questioned.

"You're shaved! Inquiring minds what to know if you are a real blonde," snickered Dave.

"Yes, I am, dear sir, and please do not interrupt my sucking of your lovely cock," she giggled.

Dave pulled her hips closer and got his first taste of her 16 yr old bare pussy. Edna meanwhile took his cock right to the root. Geez, thought Dave, it's a wonder that Bill has a cock left. This girl could suck a golf ball through a garden hose!

He lapped at the beautiful pussy while finding and stroking the girl's clit. He soon wet a finger and pushed it right into her ass. Dave heard Edna moan and felt her wiggle her hips as she welcomed his anal intrusion. He soon had two fingers working up there and then three.

Edna was really working on his cock. She would let it withdraw right to her lips and then sink forward engulfing him right down her young throat. Bill had taught her well. She had sucked and licked so many girls and women she never thought that a man would ever capture her heart. She also really dug Dave and, truth be told, Bill wasn't that drunk. She had begged him to let her go to bed with Dave. He knew exactly where she was and had consented. Dave was a slightly bigger man than her Bill and his cock was also a bit larger, not that there was anything wrong with Bill or the pleasure he always gave her.

Both Dave and little Edna were well aroused when Dave pulled back and said, "Edna, I would love to fuck you."

"Bill is the only man that has ever been up my cunt, my ass also. How about you take my ass? I love having a hard cock butt fuck me," said the petite blonde, grinning at him.

She turned around on the bed and got on all fours. "Do you need lube?" asked Dave.

"I'm pretty sure that you have me stretched. Just take it slow, please." She replied.

Dave moved behind and soon had his hard cock moving up a very tight but wonderful ass. I've got to find me a girl like Edna, he thought, and this girl is an absolute gem!

Edna could feel every inch as he went deeper into her rectum. Bill had fucked her a couple of dozen times back there and she loved it. She really liked Dave so much but, for the time being, she would reserve her cunt strictly for Bill. Still she dug the way that Dave was taking care and working her clit as he filled her ass. He wants me to cum! That's the sign of a good man. I was right about him and I know why he and Bill are so close. Two peas in a pod, she thought. The young girl was moaning in pleasure, feeling Dave's fingers on her clit and the nice firm strokes of his hard cock.

Dave was getting close. If he had let Edna blow him any longer, she would have finished him off. He had been well primed when he had entered her tight, moist ass for the very first time. Bless you Bill for letting me bum fuck your little girlfriend. I just hope it will happen again.

That was it. Dave called it his 'freight train rushing into the station'. It was an expression Bill always laughed at. It was like roaring down the tracks! His balls were bloated and he tensed up in that tight young ass.

"Edna, my train's coming!" He heard her little giggle. "Ohhhhhhhh, yeeessssssssss, you beautiful, beautiful true blonde! Geeeeeezzzzzzzzzzzz, aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!"

Edna giggled again and then felt Dave unleash a hot load into her bowels. That, along with his fingering of her clit and her work on her own breasts, made her shout, "Here cums my caboose!" she wiggled her butt on his cock. She was giggling, moaning and screaming all at the same time! "aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, oooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh Dave, I feel your cum, sssssssoooooooo goooooooooddd!!!!!!"

They both collapsed in a heap. They cuddled and whispered and Dave told her that she was an exceptional young girl and he really meant it. They kissed for awhile and fell off to sleep, in the morning that side of the bed was empty as Edna had gone back to her true love.

Chapter 3

Bucharest, Romania-2003

Dave was in Romania working on a contract for a large European firm. One afternoon he happened to bump into an old Marine buddy from 1st platoon, Hotel Company, Harold Krysnick. They greeted each other like long lost brothers, which of course, being former Marines, they were. They agreed to meet at the hotel bar after work.

Dave and Harold met up a couple of hours later and the booze began to flow. Once they got past all the old war stories, they began talking the present. Dave explained his engineering gig and told Harold how Bill was his accountant. Harold lowered his voice after looking around the bar.

"I had a bunch of IT training in the Corps and it's paid off pretty good. I do lots of work especially here in the old Soviet Bloc countries as they are so far behind. You have to be careful though as the Russian Mafia have their fingers into everything. This time I'm here to set up servers for a bunch of their porn sites. You should see the shit these guys carry. The money is good. You just have to watch your step or you end up in a ditch with a slug in you head from a Makarov!" Harold said with very strong emphasis.

Dave was keenly interested in what Harold had to say as he remembered the woman and her daughters in Bosnia. He finally said, "Would you mind showing me one of the setups or would that cause you trouble?"

"I'm not sure why you would want to. Most of this porn is young stuff. These guys are raking in billions! That's with a capital B, dude!"

They agreed to meet early the next day and Harold would take him to where he was currently setting up new servers.

The next morning they met for a quick breakfast and Harold got them a cab which took them to a run down old industrial section of the city. There were few vehicles and everything seemed pretty rundown. Dave didn't comment as Harold unlocked three separate, brand new locks on a metal door. They went up some stairs and entered a very clean large room holding several racks of electronic equipment. Dave recognized servers plus other equipment and four monitors.

Harold turned on all the monitors and then tapped out a message on a keyboard. The monitors sprang to life with pictures of young girls sucking and fucking older men. One had a little blonde of about 8 yrs old sucking a huge black cock while another was deep in her tiny cunt.

The next monitor showed a 10 yr old giving a BJ to a man of at least 60 while her little hands were jacking off two other old men. The next screen over had a black girl with great tits. She was probably 20 but Harold said. "That girl is only 13, believe it or not. She is one of the favorite downloads so I'm told."

The last monitor had a young boy of six or seven sucking the cock of a teenage boy. Another teenager was up to the hilt in the little boy's butt while another stood by whanking on his hard cock.

Dave had always been interested in photography and his lust for young girls had continued to grow after Bosnia. His lovely sessions with the delightful Edna, there had now been several, continued to inflame his thoughts. Without getting too much in Harold's way, he wrung as much info as he could out of his former Marine brother. By the time they went back to the hotel, Dave couldn't wait to jerk off after all the kiddy porn he had seen that day.

He knew just how to contact Harold at anytime in the future. He had been informed the costs and work entailed in setting up a server site and which mafia palms had to be greased. The big things remaining, was to setup an initial contact list, a way to have people pay over the net with a secure credit card operator and of course, the models. Dave had lots to think about and he wanted to discuss it with Bill when he was ready to make a change in his life. It was to be another four years before event would happen to facilitate that change.

Chapter 4

2007-Spryfield

Major events overtook Dave early in the New Year. Both of his parents were killed in a car accident while Dave was in Brazil working on a dam project. He flew back as quickly as he could and was thankful that Bill, helped in no small part by Edna, had made many of the arrangements for the funeral. Dave was an only child and sole heir to a small fortune that the older Davidson had accumulated, by some very smart decisions, on the stock market. Dave also inherited a large home that his folks had bought just a few years before.

It was pretty well a month later when things had settled down a bit. Dave had returned to Brazil and finished up his job then refused any more projects. He had invited Bill and Edna over on this Friday evening. He had cooked a lovely meal and Edna had brought over a dessert.

She kissed Dave warmly on the lips when he answered the door. "Bill and I are so glad you are back. We only saw you every once in awhile before the accident and you had to take off right after. I missed you and something else, "she said as she squeezed the front of his trousers and giggled. Dave threw his head back and roared with laughter. He grabbed his best friend Bill and gave him a hug.

"That's the first god laugh I've had in a long time. Don't you take good care of that little sex machine?"

It was Bill's turn to laugh. "I do but what can I say. She loves you too, you big ape. We both do!"

They enjoyed their meal and retired to the living room with drinks in their hands. Bill and Edna filled them in on some local news and then Dave dropped the bomb.

"You are the closest people left to me in this world. I want to tell you what I've already done and what I would like to do, the three of us do." Dave certainly had their attention and they waited for him to continue.

"I've decided to close down the firm. No more running around every third world shithole. I've made really good money as you know Bill, plus I've got another 3 mill and this house from dad. I want to do something I've always wanted, photography," said Dave.

Edna and Bill just stared at him in shock. This was really out of the blue for Dave and right now it didn't make sense.

Dave outlined a plan to them. The property next to his was up for sale. He wanted to buy the house and land, tear down the house and build a 60x60 studio on the property to adjoin his house.

"That's just the first step. Remember I told you about running into Harold over in Romania and what he was doing? Well, I'm thinking of going into the porn business using the studio as a front!"

Edna gasped while Bill had a strange look go over his face. "You're thinking back to Bosnia, aren't you Dave."

Edna piped up, "What about Bosnia? You guys were almost killed over there!"

Bill placed a hand on her knee. "I will tell you all about that later sweetheart but it will make you horny!"

Edna laughed, "Oh my, something else to make me horny. Let me count the ways!" She leaned into him and gave him a very deep kiss.

"Before you horny dogs start making out on my sofa, may I please finished?"

They all laughed and Dave went on with the plan. "Look, there is lot's of legitimate work out there but the big thing is that it will add contacts to those I have all over the world. Harold can take care of setting up the servers and greasing the way through the Mafia over there. He can probably help us with startup contacts as well. We could have three sites. The first one would be 'Pretty Angels'. According to Harold, there is a fair bit of money in non-nude or nude modest shots of 6-12 yr olds where they don't show pussy or tits. The next would be 'Pretty Petals' with the same age group showing it all. The third site would be very explicit. 'Little Pink Cherries' can show them using toys or actually sucking cock!"

Edna was starting to squirm on the sofa, something that wasn't lost on Dave. "Still thinking of all those girls you licked?"

Edna's jaw dropped and Bill said, "Oh, shit! Why did you say that? Now she knows that I told you."

"I have a reason as Edna is going to be a very important partner in our new venture," said Dave. He motioned for Edna to stand up. She had on very tight top and equally tight slacks. She was barefoot.

"Look at her. She is 22 yrs old but doesn't look much different then when she was 16. She would be a perfect recruiter!

Edna indeed still looked like someone in their mid-teens. She stood barely 5' 3". Her short blonde hair and blue eyes, slender frame, tight butt and wonderful smile would make anyone, male or female turn their heads for a look.

Bill admired his lover and grinned. "I get it, we are mainly after young girls and Edna can easily work with them as she wouldn't come across as a threat. Plus, she likes the little ones anyway. Geez, Dave, you are a genius!" He pulled Edna back on the sofa and gave her a big kiss. "I guess I'll have to share you with a whole pile of little girls my lover." Edna's eyes lit up and she kissed him back.

They continued to discuss arrangement until almost midnight while consuming a number of drinks. Dave suggested that they couldn't drive so stay over for the night. They retired upstairs and Dave went in his private washroom to clean up for bed. He came out to a surprise. Bill and Edna were stark naked on his bed wearing big smiles.

Bill said, "It's her idea! She wants to consummate our partnership!"

Edna held out her arms to Dave and he walked to her. "You are both the men I love in my life. Tonight, I want to share with both of you. Dave, don't you want to make my little caboose come into the station?"

All laughed and got settled on the bed. Edna was on hands and knees above Bill while Dave got behind that beautiful ass. Dave let Bill get a good position and sink his already half hard cock into a dripping pussy. Dave fingered Edna's 'caboose' while getting himself hard. He finally, moved forward a bit more and guided his cock into her waiting ass. Once he was in, he got a rhythm while Bill pounded up her pussy.

Edna was soon moaning with the DP action. Bill was her lover and had his beautiful cock deep in her pussy while squeezing both her tits. Dave, who she thought the world of, was up to the hilt by now in her tight butt. He, thoughtful man that he was, stroked her clit to give her as much sensation as possible. No woman is happier than me having these two men to love, she thought. Dave just loved Edna's butt. Ever since that night, three years ago, when he had first had her ass, he had been lucky to have it several times since. He was never disappointed. She still seemed as tight as she did back then. He would do anything for his two best friends and he never felt better then he did with the two of them tonight.

Bill, for all the sex he had, on almost daily basis, since he took her cherries when she was 16, just couldn't get over how tight she stayed. She was so good at sex and would do whatever he asked. No man could ever ask for a better mate. She was much younger then him, but in her own way, very adult.

He stroked his cock in her wet depth feeling Dave's cock on the other side of the membrane. She had her eyes closed and a big smile on her face. Moans of pleasure were coming from her throat. He increased his stroke as he knew from experience, that she was almost there. What had she called it? Making her caboose cum! Dave and his expressions, now he's got her doing it! Bill grinned as he brought her and himself closer to climaxing.

Dave also knew that Edna was close. His own train was cumming and he wanted her to get off first. He felt Bill speed up so he increased his stroke in her wonderful, tight ass. This was it, a photo finish to the train station! Bill and Edna both came at the same time, screaming out their combined climaxes, "yesssssssssss, aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, yesssssssssssss, oooooooooooohhhhh ggggooooooooddddddd, yesssssssssssssssssss!!!!" Dave was right behind, as with steam and smoke, his engine raced in with a load of cum for Edna's caboose! 'Geeeeezzzzzzzzzzz, Edna, sqeeeeeeeeeezzeeeeeeeee, shittttt, yesssssssss, aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh fuck Edna!"

It took a minute or two for three hearts to slow down and for them to get untangled Edna turned to Bill and kissed him deeply. She then turned to Dave and gave him an equally big kiss. She said, "Now that's the way to consummate a partnership, right guys!!!"

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Father4Star12/13/2021OK, I'm not going to say too much on this opening of the storyline. A unique way to start into a porn industry involving minors/preteens. My favorite area. Even though some historical problems may exist, I'm for the fucking, not the historical accuracy. Most fantasy story tends to be lacking in that area and the physical too.

Heck I know several five-year-olds I'd love to shove my cock into and make pregnant. Fucking even six-year-olds needs to be done with caution. We want them back willing for more action.
Bob09/28/2021Very good story. Are you going to develop it further? Please?
Be sure to visits Harley589 section in the Guest Author page (linked above at the top of the story) to see what new chapters in this story have been posted.

~Chris
Paul09/23/2021Loved this story. Always dream about child porn backstories & how horny pervs can help needy moms & daughters (and sometimes boys as well). Would be great if some of the website customers got an opportunity to sample the fresh meat in person. Paul
LuckyNot bad at all, Timeline is a bit wonky but its shaping up to be good.

Honestly better off in Ukraine for the CP game historically but that kinda blows up the Marine angle. (I had UN/Euro mates on the ground there) and Bosnia's published history is way out of whack because of the political slant but if it gets hot, heavy and extreme it works in well.

Your writing keeps getting better man, Looking forward to the next chapters.
Anonymous09/22/2021Definitely looking forward to reading more!
Anonymous09/20/2021Timeline is wrong. 99 was Kosovo and no actual ground fighting took place there against Serbs. In Bosnia it basically ended in 96. I had a lot more details written, but my page reloaded and I lost everything. I spent a lot of time in both places.