I also posted about 30 stories on the now-suspended web site "Loliwood Studios," under the pseudonym Chris Jorgenson.
I hope at some point to migrate these stories here to this web site, but meanwhile you can access them by the above link. If you have any comments on these stories, feel free to complete the comments form on this page, making sure to fill in the story name in the Subject line. I can't update the comments on Loliwood Studios anymore, but I will include any comments on this page, below.
|I look forward to comments from readers. Please provide some feedback on my stories! Thanks. (Please note that I reserve the right to publish comments on my web site at my discretion.)|
Comments to specific stories are usually included at the end of the story itself; I also receive a fair number of general comments, unrelated to specific stories. Rather than responding to them all privately in email, this page is devoted to posting, and possibly responding to, comments from readers that are of a general nature. If you send me a general comment and hope to see a reply, please come here and I will try to update it as often as possible.
|cjockey2||Story being commented on: Kira
I think someone has read 'Jasmine the Schoolgirl'.
|You know, it's hilarious you should say that, jockey. Because when I first read your email I thought, "I've never heard of the story 'Jasmine the Schoolgirl.'" But in the back of my head I remembered that before I wrote Kira (long time ago, it was), I had read a story on ASSTR that I really liked, that I really thought was super hot. But I only had time to read half of it, and when I went back the next day to finish it, the story was gone. Deleted. I was depressed. But then I thought, oh well, I'll just write it myself!
So I wrote Kira. Quite honestly, I had completely forgotten about the story that was the progenitor until I read your email. Upon finding and reading "Jasmine the Schoolgirl," I now realize it must be the very story I read long ago! Pretty cool to have found it again after all this time, and for that I thank you, jockey. I only hope the original author won't be too upset with me! I shall email him if I can find his address or comments form.
By the way, I notice that the story is now (as of Dec 11, 2013) posted on ASSTR again. The author is listed as Khafi_Hafida. Here's a link: Jasmine the Schoolgirl.
|writerz01||Story being commented on: The Red Rooster
Very nice. Lots of arousing, dick hardening sex. Young ladies just wanting to learn and enjoy their lives. Thanks for sharing.
|Zack McNaught||Stories being commented on: Little animals stories (The Little Kitty-Cat and others)
Hi Chris, I've just finished reading your short series of stories about Cindy, the girl who likes to dress up. I was seriously impressed by your writing of her character, and of the situations, which had an air of believability about them which is so often lacking in stories about young girls.
I'm a fan.
Many thanks for continuing to write,
|Many thanks, Zach. I do intend to keep the little animal series alive, I was right in the heart of them when the Loliwood site closed down. Someday I will finish "The Little Teddybear," which is what I intend to have as the next in the series.
|Hills||Stories being commented on: The Kate Versus the Zombies series (Kate Versus the Zombies Part 1: Prologue and Patrol Boat et al).
Chris, it's been a long time since you stopped posting stories about Kate. I think if I were you that I might go back and write more about her and the family and their adventures since last you wrote of them. You have a great foundation with which to work with and I can bet that I'm not the only one that would like to see more of their stories. Think about it ok?
Thanks for all the great stories you have been writing.
|Thanks for the feedback Hills, and I am definitely glad you liked the Kate stories. As I think I said in the story summary, this tale is but a small part of a much larger tale I've had bouncing around my brain for a really long time. Kate, unfortunately, doesn't play as large a role in the remainder of the story, at least as I envision it. But since I've never written, and probably never will write, the other parts of the story I can do anything I want (ain't creative writing fun!), and so I will take your advice into consideration. I do like writing zombie stories, that's for sure!
|Grandpa Phil||Story being commented on: My Little Blowjob Girl
I read your story and enjoyed it very much. I actually read it several times and would have a good cum each time.
I have had many fantasy/masturbation sessions of my daughter when she was growing up and now do the same with my 3 year old granddaughter.
I plan to read and enjoy all your stories. Thanks for writing such a realistic and believable story. I hope all your stories are this good.
|Anonymous||Story being commented on: Strangers Have the Best Candy
True. Strangers do have the best candy. I learned this growing up on the streets of New Orleans. I got my first piece when I was six walking to school one morning. The man offered me candy and a ride which I accepted and ended up parked behind an abandoned house lying on the back seat with my dress rucked up to my armpits and my panties dangling around one ankle. While I sucked the candy he sucked by bald little pussy. After that day, I received candy many many times.
|Ulisse 2||Come tanti sono arrabbiato della perdita di lolliwood; Spero vi sia qualcuno che riprenda o rimuova gli ostacoli. Quello che non capisco perch qui in italia vengono censurate storie di sesso tra adulti e
bambini minorenni. Essendo lavori di fantasia indirizzati ai pedofili, io
credo che questi racconti siano una valvola di sfogo per chi ha
queste passioni. Io definisco "pedofilo virtuale" chi legge queste
storie e si masturba ripeto, SI MASTURBA SOLAMENTE. Chris siete
d'accordo con me? Una risposta grazie!!!
How many are angry for the loss of Loliwood; I hope you or someone are taking over or removing obstacles. What I do not understand is that here in Italy sex stories between adults and underage children are censored. As works of fiction aimed at pedophiles, I think these stories are an outlet for those who have these passions. I define "virtual pedophile" as someone who reads these stories and masturbates--MASTURBATES ONLY. Chris you agree with me? An answer thanks!
|Thanks for the interesting post, Ulisse 2. I do agree with you about how this fiction can be an outlet. I don't think Loliwood was closed because of censorship, I think it was just too much for the webmaster to handle. It got too big. Hopefully my erotic web site and a few others help in the void.
|Benj||I just came across your stories. Fucking Awesome!!! I blew a big load reading about young Haily in "Strangers Have the Best Candy" and am looking forward to reading more. I tend to like the stories about the more dominant man. Depending on my mood "consensuality" may be irrelevant. Personally i'm bi - dominant with kids and women, much more submissive with older teen boys and men.|
|Brian||Hey Chris, there was a series on Loliwood Studios called "The 5th Grade Harem". I don't know if you read it or not, but it was hot and was just getting good when they shut down for whatever reason (find anything out about that yet?). It was by a guy who called himself captain jack mehoff. The series, alas, remains unfinished. It would be great if we could get captain jack to finish it here as well as bring the first 6 parts. I recommend reading them.|
|Thanks for the recommendation, Brian, I'll look them up. Hopefully Mr. Mehoff (LOL) will see your note here and get in touch!