Return to Reviews


Return to Reviews

 

 

My fiction is publicly available on web sites that allow readers to post public comments about what they have read. These comments are an indication of the views of ordinary readers. In the interests of shameless and blatant self-promotion, I reproduce here those comments that have been complimentary. These comments are already publicly available.

 


 

One Snip Short



 

One Snip Short

 


 

Rajah Dodger

Very cool story!  Enjoyed it!

 

 

 

 

 

Literotica

Anonymous

I think that your story was romantic and beautiful in its own right. Good job. Keep on writing!

100%

 

 

 

 

 

Literotica

Anonymous

Read the Title of the Story


Good Lawdy Lawdy, do none of the readers read the Titles of the Tales?

This Title suggested the outcome of the ‘girl’, not going for the ‘snip’, though not the proclivities of the guy which was also a pleasant surprise.


And the tantalising ‘red herrings’ scattered throughout, mention of a haircut, snip snip, and the Restaurant Bill, “A snip under ...”. The red herrings were so well placed that they made me wonder about the girl really being a guy, or should I look for some other ‘snip’.


and then, Bravo Bradley, the “snap” at the end.

 

100%

 


 

 

Literotica

Shadownight_Keeper

Interesting

 

Well written, like the character development, subtle clues that only added to the story.

100%

 

 

 

 



 

Peace Returns

 

 

Peace Returns



 

Literotica

Anonymous in USA

I hated it-in a backwards kind of way

 

It took me a few paragraphs (ok, more than I’d like to admit) but this was a very original way to explore a life spiralling out of control.

 

Very consistent and well done

100%

 

 

 

Literotica

Anonymous in nedewS

!taerG

 

.levels many so on backwards was that, Wow.

Gonna check to see if you’ve written anything else now.

100%

 

 

 

Literotica

Anonymous

Great Writing

 

This is great writing, and one of the most original pieces I've read.

100%

 

 

 

 

Literotica

Anonymous in USA

GREAT STORY

 

What a powerful story. Another take on the downward spiral. This should be required reading for everyone who has ever taken that first step.

100%

 

 



 

 

Reality

 

 

Reality



 

X Wives

JoJo Jinx

I just read a new Bradley Stoke’s story over on ASSM. He calls it Reality but really it is about virtual reality.

 
It has some similarities to MMORPGs and some to Stanislaw Lem’s “The Cyberiad” but as always Stoke imbues it with his own particular flavour.


Click on over and give it a read. He’s one of my favourite authors.

 

 

 

 



 

Superslut


 

Superslut

 


 

Literotica

Bridget69 in Canada

Super!

 

I think that even the most ardent bible thumpers have this hidden persona.

100%

 

  

 

Literotica

hansbwl

Brilliant

 

So refreshing to read an original story. Very good!!!

100%

 

 

 

 

Snow White


 

Snow White


 

 

Literotica

onyxessence in USA

Nicely written

 

I liked the story; it's definitely one of the best written I've come across on this site. The characters were well written and the story was rich with elements of the unexpected. I particularly liked the realistic descriptions of the dwarves!

100%

 

 

 

 



 

Teen Spirit

 


Teen Spirit 


 

Literotica

J.Q. Hack in USA

Great story. I think the tone and mood you set in the story was spot on. Without seemingly too much effort you got what it’s like to be awkward and unpopular. The sex scene showed what a first time would be like -- not the day long marathons seen in many stories. Thankfully you kept the ending realistic and plausible.

100%

 


 

 

 

The Cream of Sheba

 

 

The Cream of Sheba



 

Literotica

Ton8ty

Wonderful! I loved it. However, I think that this tale properly belongs in the “How To” category. If more writers paid better attention to their audience, the quality of their work might improve significantly.

100%

 

 

 

Literotica

Boyd

Great

Hilarious!

100%

 

 

 

 




 

The House to Themselves

 

 

The House to Themselves



 

Literotica

noone269

Another great story

You have done it again, keep up the great work!!

100%

 

 

 

Literotica

TheCaptain

Damn fine work!

I thought your story was great! Much better than most, and definitely worth the read. Thanks for writing!

100%

 

 

 

Literotica

Anonymous in USA

MTV

 

Just a comment on the person who objected to the MTV: The breaks in between all of the action were intentional. It's a style of writing. It's metaphoric. Not all erotica has to be SEXSEXSEXEND.

Now, a comment on the submission, if you will: This was a great piece of writing; matured writing with naive characters. The child at the end was perfect. The pace and 60’s-with-technology feel were showing of a true writer. Having read this after suffering three paragraphs of a submission that the author was probably jerking off while writing, I am impressed. I don't view it, in retrospect, as a piece of erotica so much as a piece of true writing.


Well done.

100%

 











 

 

 

 

 

The Philosopher’s Tool


The Philosopher's Tool

 

 

 


Sticky Pen

TuDestino

Awesome

 

Wow that was like nothing I’ve ever read before. I really enjoyed it. I hope you’ll write more.

 

 

 

 




 

The Price of Prejudice


The Price of Prejudice

 

 


Literotica

Anonymous in USA

Amazing

 

Amazing story. I really felt the emotions of the two girls and the mentality of the prejudice was well done as well.

100%

 

 

 

 



The Pursuit of Manliness


The Pursuit of Manliness

 

 

 

 

Literotica

Anonymous in USA

Cute and hot

A fun, silly romp. Nice writing! 

100%

 


 

 

 

 


Vagina Dialogue


Vagina Dialogue


 

Ruthie’s Club

Poison Ivan

I doubt anyone who reads this newsletter knows this, but I have what I believe to be the largest collection of synonyms of the female genitalia ever collected. The list is getting close to 2000 words now. Some are funny, some are baffling, some are vulgar, and some are quite nice. We have the “Cunt Equals” box on the Club Cocktails page because I have a special fondness for the various euphemisms we use for that special part of the woman’s anatomy.


There are synonyms, and then there is Bradley Stoke’s new story, “Vagina Dialogues.” As the owner of the Not-So-Famous Pussy List, all I can say is, “Wow, you must read this story.” I thought it was funny and instructive. I think you’ll find it funny, at least.