My fiction is publicly available on web sites that allow readers to post public comments about what they have read. These comments are an indication of the views of ordinary readers. In the interests of shameless and blatant self-promotion, I reproduce here those comments that have been complimentary. These comments are already publicly available.
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Rajah Dodger |
Very cool story! Enjoyed it! |
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Anonymous |
I think that your story was romantic and beautiful in its own right. Good job. Keep on writing! |
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Anonymous |
Read the Title of the Story
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Interesting
Well written, like the character development, subtle clues that only added to the story. |
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Peace Returns |
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Anonymous in USA |
I hated it-in a backwards kind of way
It took me a few paragraphs (ok, more than I’d like to admit) but this was a very original way to explore a life spiralling out of control.
Very consistent and well done |
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Anonymous in nedewS |
!taerG
.levels
many so
on backwards was that, Wow. |
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Anonymous |
Great Writing
This is great writing, and one of the most original pieces I've read. |
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Anonymous in USA |
GREAT STORY
What a powerful story. Another take on the downward spiral. This should be required reading for everyone who has ever taken that first step. |
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Reality |
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X Wives |
JoJo Jinx |
I just read a new Bradley Stoke’s story over on ASSM. He calls it Reality but really it is about virtual reality.
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Superslut |
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Bridget69 in Canada |
Super!
I think that even the most ardent bible thumpers have this hidden persona. |
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Brilliant
So refreshing to read an original story. Very good!!! |
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Snow White |
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onyxessence in USA |
Nicely written
I liked the story; it's definitely one of the best written I've come across on this site. The characters were well written and the story was rich with elements of the unexpected. I particularly liked the realistic descriptions of the dwarves! |
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Teen Spirit |
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J.Q. Hack in USA |
Great story. I think the tone and mood you set in the story was spot on. Without seemingly too much effort you got what it’s like to be awkward and unpopular. The sex scene showed what a first time would be like -- not the day long marathons seen in many stories. Thankfully you kept the ending realistic and plausible. |
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The Cream of Sheba |
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Wonderful! I loved it. However, I think that this tale properly belongs in the “How To” category. If more writers paid better attention to their audience, the quality of their work might improve significantly. |
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Boyd |
Great Hilarious! |
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The House to Themselves |
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Another great story You have done it again, keep up the great work!! |
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Damn fine work! I thought your story was great! Much better than most, and definitely worth the read. Thanks for writing! |
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Anonymous in USA |
MTV
Just
a comment
on the person who objected to the MTV: The breaks in between all of the
action were intentional. It's a style of writing. It's metaphoric. Not
all erotica has to be SEXSEXSEXEND.
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The Philosopher’s Tool |
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Awesome
Wow that was like nothing I’ve ever read before. I really enjoyed it. I hope you’ll write more. |
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The Price of Prejudice |
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Anonymous in USA |
Amazing
Amazing story. I really felt the emotions of the two girls and the mentality of the prejudice was well done as well. |
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The Pursuit of Manliness |
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Anonymous in USA |
Cute and hot A fun, silly romp. Nice writing! |
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Vagina Dialogue |
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Ruthie’s Club |
Poison Ivan |
I doubt anyone who reads this newsletter knows this, but I have what I believe to be the largest collection of synonyms of the female genitalia ever collected. The list is getting close to 2000 words now. Some are funny, some are baffling, some are vulgar, and some are quite nice. We have the “Cunt Equals” box on the Club Cocktails page because I have a special fondness for the various euphemisms we use for that special part of the woman’s anatomy.
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