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My fiction is publicly available on web sites that allow readers to post public comments about what they have read. These comments are an indication of the views of ordinary readers. In the interests of shameless and blatant self-promotion, I reproduce here those comments that have been complimentary. These comments are already publicly available.

 

Amity’s Vow

 

 

Amiy's Vow


 

Literotica

kindredheart

Loved it!

 

You should be a LARPer, or at least write the backgrounds for those that do. I love your style, and the great images!


Thanks for the read

 

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Big Game

 

 

Big Game


 

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Anonymous in USA

wonderful story

 

Wonderful story. I really enjoyed it. Excellent discription of how various cultures can view things differently. Well done.

100%

 

 

 



 

Blessed by Nature

 

 

Blessed by Nature


 

parthenogenesis

Very well executed, as usual, Bradley.  I enjoyed the parallel universe setting.

 

 

 

Lusty Library

8archer8

Quite an interesting story.

 

This story had me wondering, confused, and asking if you knew where you were when you wrote this. Everything seemed to be a reality, but all in different time periods. Satellite television, slaves, excellent use of words when speaking... However, after a bit more reading, the fictional story line dawned upon me. Very interesting story. Very good writing.

 

 

 

Lusty Library

Tentativeness

Oh dear.

 

I was quite confused as well. You talked about it being the twentieth century and then went on about America's state of independence, or rather, its lack thereof and pornography on television. It was a lot to take in, politically and socially but I do believe I enjoyed it. I vouch for Nicholas, though. He seems to have more spirit, more zest in him than the Yves fellow. And the protagonist should be taken down from her high horse All in all, I'd say it’s a story well-written!

 

 

 

Lusty Library

ShyEric

Extraordinary.

 

A remarkable piece of writing bringing together colonial--post colonial history with erotica. Very interesting story line and conclusion. The gardener’s tools seem to bring Hedonists down to earth---even in “Eden.” Suggests the garden and the snake.

 

 

 



 

Bukkake Business

 

 

Bukkake Business


 

The Erotic Scream

V

Unusual & provocative


Bradley, you did an excellent job here. The story is so unusual, I found myself having to read on to find out where it might go. It is like a meandering forest path, slowly revealing delightful spots along the way.


Good job!

 

 

Literotica

WifeysSecrets in Good ole’ Midwest in the US!

I must say, after reading your message in your bio about your stories being “unconventional for erotica”, I was pleasantly surprised (and aroused) when I read Bukkake Business!


I do, however, wish that you explained the lives of these people more. I got the feel that they were Asian, but was this more of a “sci-fi/fantasy” world you created?

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Chums of the Ring


Chums of the Ring


 

 

 

Literotica

Omygod!


That was really, really brilliant. Hilarious!

 

100%

 

Literotica

PredatorSmile

A Hot Story!!!


I am a gal who loves stories about the lives and loves of gay and bisexual men! I love this story! It’s hot!!!!!!!!!

 

100%

 

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Anonymous in Phoenix, AZ

Hilarious as well as intriguing!


Brilliant parody as well as sexy. Tolkien must be spinning in his grave.

100%

 

 

 

 

 

Cottage Life

 

 

Cottage Life


 

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Anonymous in Canada

Utterly hilarious!


Brilliant satire, and very well written.  

100%

 

 

 

 

 

Creamfields

 


Creamfields

 

 

Ruthie’s Club

P. I. Rockwell

It was Umbra’s illustration of Creamfields (written by Bradley Stoke) that first made me sit up and say “Wow!” Not only is the picture beautiful in its own right, but it also is Stoke’s piece. The light, the movement, the atmosphere, the chaos and sexiness of the setting—it is a perfect companion to the text.

 

I love Umbra’s women. You can’t help but like the sex appeal of the dancer in Creamfields.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cyberwhore

 

 

Cyberwhore


 

Literotica

Gilaine

Wonderfully written...

I do not normally read sci-fi erotic stories, and I have no idea why I picked this one, but I am so glad that I did. The clarity of the writing and the depth of the main character and what he goes through is amazing.
Cannot wait to try out some more of the author’s work.

100%

 


 

 

Literotica

hazel_eyed_boy

What the last guy said

I don’t read the sci-fi stuff, but this one is excellent. I didn’t get a rise out of it, mind you, but it was such a good story. Anyway, this was excellent. I’d love to see more of your writing, regardless of its genre.

100%

 

 

 

 

 

Degrees of Intimacy

 

 

Degrees of Intimacy


 

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Anonymous in Europe

Fascinating

I’ve read all four parts and I am intrigued by your story. Very believable characters, strong sense of place, atmosphere and a feeling of reality. You make your characters come to life vividly and emphatically. Each of them are worthy of further investigations. I hope you will grant us so. Meanwhile I’m looking forward to the next four degrees of this intimacy.

100%

 


Smashwords

Cee Jay 

Brilliant writing in a story so engrossing I wanted more. I enjoyed feeling like I was there in all those different exotic countries and settings. The characters are each unique, well developed, and interesting. The relationships and the sex scenes were very satisfying. I would pay for a novella like this, but it was free. I will look for more from this excellent writer.

 



 

Devotion to Aphrodite

 

 

Devotion to Aphrodite


 

Literotica

Samuelx

A Hot Story!

Wow! That’s all I can say. Historical lesbian fiction? Hot!!! I liked the development of the story and how realistic you made it seem. Very nice!!!

100%

 

 

 

Literotica

Anonymous in US

Good for you.

Good for you. At first I thought you were going to end it with Diana converting to Christianity. Thank goodness you didn’t. It was a hot story and a sad tale. Thank you for presenting the Gods with compassion, especially the fair Aphrodite.

100%

 

 

 

Lusty Library

bintarab

Riveting story

Very elegant writing! Your characters are fully fleshed-out despite (I think) the difficulty in keeping them from seeming like caricatures, or otherwise 2-D characters. One of the things that makes this story so smooth is that you were very faithful to Diana's POV, and I experienced it all through her. Good job! The mood and atmosphere you created were perfectly matched to the story, and all the erotic parts were very much an organic outgrowth of it, not gratuitously stuck in there. Thank you for submitting this!

 



 

Divine Love

 


Divine Love

 

 

Literotica

Randy01

Very nice

I loved the story so far, please continue and let us watch what you so wonderfully have described in this first chapter.

100%

 

 




 

Door-to-Door Prostitution

 

 

Door-to-Door Prostitution


 

Literotica

Anonymous

That was something!

I'm just not sure what! Well written and entertaining, this story also had a little moral. This was clever and different.

100%

 


 

 

Literotica

Anonymous

Very nice

Well-written and fun to read. Now, I wait for the comments about the husband that are usually reserved for the wife in this story.

100%

 


 

 

Literotica

bornagain

Very well done

I think Jenny should get the same treatment from Cherry that the dumb sod is getting but cut him off from Cherry.

 

It isn’t right that the husband belittle the wife like he does just because she can’t produce children doesn’t give him the right to drag a hooker into the house right in front of his wife.

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Doubly Endowed

 

 

Doubly Endowed


 

Lewd Art

Jaxtraw

For a change, here’s an illustration I created for Bradley Stoke. The pic is for a short story called “Doubly Endowed“, the subject matter of which will be obvious (hopefully) from the pic! I heartily recommend his website, where you’ll find the finished, colour version of this illustration (Doubly Endowed can be found in the short stories section, page five).

 

 

 

 

 

Extracurricular Love

 


Extracurricular Love

 

 

Desdmona

Bradley Stoke has set up a wonderful scene by omitting rationalization or embarrassment. It’s the matter-of-factness that makes this rather fantastical setting come off as perfectly normal. It’s a college. A college devoted to sexual studies. (I think I might want to enrol!) It’s intelligently written with subtleties that glide the reader right along.

 

Very interesting premise with a nice story to go along with it.

 

I really enjoyed it! I think many of you might as well!

 

 

 

 

 

Fat Chance

 

 

Fat Chance


 

cmsix

I just read it and I liked it. I especially liked Fatima and also the fact that it ended with a little hope for her. I didn’t really like Freddy but he was very real.

 

 

 

 

 

Literotica

PredatorSmile

Fantastic Story! Excellent!!!

 

I love this story! It is so very much like my own tale. What a world!!!

100%

 

 

 

 

Literotica

Anonymous in USA 

Fat Chance

 

I myself am a Fat woman and every feeling that was written down on this story about how she felt about herself and how she saw herself was almost identical to how I am myself. It was as though someone had seen the thoughts in my head and decided to put them on a computer screen. Great depth with feelings. Amazing how right on this story was from a fat woman’s point of view.

100%

 

 

 

 

 

Frank Sinatra

 


Frank Sinatra

 

 

Literotica

Softly

You are right!

 

Ava is quoted as saying, “Frank is one hundred and thirty pounds of man, of which eighty pounds is cock.”


On another occasion, Frank was playing poker. Ms. Monroe came in naked. He told her, “Get your fat ass out of here.”


Those that knew him allege that he had sex with every major female movie star of his time.

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Heaven

 


Heaven

 

Kenny N Gamera

Nice. I found it less a story and more a poem (40%/60%).  The second time through I imagined a small jazz combo in the background, though it didn’t work. It wasn’t beat enough.

 

 

 

 

Yotna ElToub

I add my vote, but you are poetical here Bradley. Is this a new career?

 

Very nice, and I look forward to my old age ;)

 

 

 

 

 

Here’s Looking at You

 


Here's Looking at You

 


 

Literotica

Anonymous

I loved this sublime love story . . . 

 

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Literotica

Anonymous in Revolla

I loved

 

this story and the memories it stirred.

100%

 

 

 

 

 

How High the Moon


How High the Moon

 

 

 

Literotica

ungenderless

Romantic and sensual

 

I really appreciated the subject matter of jazz music in this story. There was a unique relation between Lynn’s growing lust for an admirer and the way her night on stage progressed. We also get a healthy dose into Lynn’s history, which makes me care about her more.

100%

 


 

 

 

 


Hung Over

 

 

Hung Over


 

Yotna ElToub

The reflection of the club and drugs scene is well done. As is the confusion we have all felt due to intoxicants in our time. The sex is casual, but the story expands on the unwanted side effects both of the sex and by implication the ‘club scene’. The writing is nicely detached which matches the style of the piece Clare’s final decision is nicely observed.

 

 

 

 

 

Koochy

 

 

Koochy



 

The Erotic Scream

Natalia

Classy
You really are a writer! Real atmospheric. I was amused to hear a Brit say, Fucking A. Kind of a more universal term than I thought.

 

 

 

The Erotic Scream

Jules

Wicked!
Do you know...I think I was at this party :) Impressive writing and hot pierced lesbian sex! Sums up North London parties brilliantly. Loving your work.

 

 

 

Literotica

Anonymous

THAT IS SOME VERY GOOD WRITING

I enjoyed getting lost in the details as they come out. Your sentences so clearly describe actions as thoughts occur I could see her moving to kiss her new lover. That description, "tasting sweat and navigating the contours of the hard reddish skin of the aureole of motherhood," just awed me.


Lonely as a Cloud

 

 

Lonely as a Cloud



 

Literotica

Anonymous

Refreshing even while sad.

Nice to see something that takes a somewhat different view of things.

100%

 

 

 

 

 

Love Is Blind

 


Love is Blind 


 

Rajah Dodger

Awwwww...

A lovely little story, elegantly described.

 

 

 

Literotica

madengineer3

True Love

 

It is not often that I read a story where the essence of true love is demonstrated. The closing lines of this story indicate exactly that. This is good writing.

100%

 

 

 

Literotica

TiggerToo

Thank you so much!

 

I enjoy reading about fictional but realistic people who have persisted in overcoming life’s adversities to their great benefit. Could I be that strong?


We have a deaf man where I work and we all make an effort to include him in our socializing. He is the nicest person and we’re great buds.

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Literotica

RedHairedandFriendly

Beautiful reflections. . .


This was a moving write. Thank you so much for it.

100%

 

 

 

Literotica

Anonymous

Probably not the best reason to like it


Anyone who does not shy away from human nature to refer to having a crap in the morning (without making a fetish of it) has got to be commended

100%

 

 

 

Literotica

masked_author 

Wonderful


I really enjoyed this... it's a unique perspective to take, and what I really enjoyed about it is how you kept up the little details about the perspective: the steps she took for example, the feelings rather than the sights. It's a great read. Well done!

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Not Naked in School


Not Naked in School

 

Literotica

Anonymous

Cool

Very original. 

100%

 

Tenyari

Dressed in School?


What is more perverse everyone being dressed and just a few people nude? Or everyone being nude and just a few people being dresse?

 

Bradley Stoke did a humorous short on this variation - where a girl had to go to school clothed and not let anyone touch in a world where everyone was nude and highly sensual.