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"No" by Gpkn (sex with DJ) 8, 7, 7
"No" by Gpkn (firstname.lastname@example.org). The narrator is a late-night disk jockey. "No" is
his name for a sexy lady who calls him in the wee hours - as in "No Name."
She talks to him on the phone and then meets him, and they make passionate
A story like this has the potential to be more than we have here. It's not a
bad story, but it doesn't come close to exploiting the opportunities for sex
between a DJ and one of his groupies.
Ratings for "No"
Athena (technical quality): 8
Venus (plot & character): 7
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 7