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Wow, can't wait for more! An intriguing read.
Well written. Real characters with some depth.
Very hot. A nice beginning. Looking forward for new adventures
I really enjoyed chapter one! Thanks! I like the way you developed the characters and their personalities so much.
Great beginning.. Hope this series doesn't "peter out" too soon. (Edirors Note: All nine chapters are basically completed)
Excellent - see where you are going. (Editors note: Perhaps, perhaps not...)
Your stories are written so good I get a hardon from it. Thanks for supplying your writing.
Pretty good story, lets see what the next chapter brings.
Really liked it. Look forward to more.
If this isn't a true memory, then you are a fantastic writer. (Editors note: Pure fiction... ;)
You are a storyteller! I'm enjoying your Terry/Honeysuckle tale. Just started reading the "Diary". The sex is good, but the tale itself is so very well told that it really didn't matter if there was no (alright - some) sex.
Wow, great, imaginative story! Well-written, and with little of the stupidity I often find in this genre. As a woman, I loved this story. Time to go touch myself!
I read both chapters back to back and was completely involved in the plot. Very easy to read. I like the story a lot. Will look forward to more chapters.
Man, I sure hope there are some nice long chapters about Daddy getting his share of Terri over and over. (Editor's note: We'll see, after all this is a fuck story)
I'm eagerly awaiting chapter 3!
Well I read and enjoyed....but then I saw the end....and thought, well, more to come sooooooooon
There is a lot of boring, rubbish stories around and its a lot of "work" to find stories that are well written, with some story structure and a bit realistic
You've sold a man whose mind is on something else on the idea of reading for the content. You should be proud - I'm certainly impressed.
I've read the first 3, and I'm hooked. You're a gifted writer.
I enjoyed the story as much as the sex, keep writing.
...hoping for more!
Love it. Can't wait for the next one.
...great story-telling,really turned me on; 2 thumbs up.
This story is getting hotter, as the chapters continue... Keep up the great writing.
Loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter. This is the hottest series since Lori, Neighbors Delight.
Well written - good diary interludes. Kinda ill, to be honest - psychologically, this is truly disturbing. however, it is steadfastly strong in description and color. Well done.
Read these first five chapters in one evening; a compelling story, I will be reading your other works. Are the "Social Mores" books a real series? (Author's note: As a kid back in the sixties, I read a series something like this, but it was all in one volume. I have racked my brain, but I can’t recall the name.)
It just keeps getting better...........many thanks....
I grew up in New Orleans around the time your story is set. The local color brings back the rush as much as anything: being a high schooler at the old Ben Franklin in the courthouse on Carrollton Avenue... making love at the Lake Front... Pontchartrain Beach... Spanish Fort... The more you pack this story with that stuff the better it gets for me! (Author's comment: Where y'at?)
Best erotic story I've read in a while.
This is a fantastic story. The diary-memory format keeps the story exciting and fun to read. Your writing is damned near flawless... (Authors note: flawless, but... I stand corrected!) I am looking forward to the rest of the story, very sexy stuff indeed.
This is one of the best stories I've ever read! It has everything in it, love, sex, incest...
Congrats. Each Chapter gets hotter and hotter.
So far this reminds me a lot of Nick Scipio's "Summer Camp" series. I am very impressed. (Authors note: To paraphase a certain hack Senator from Texas, 'I'm a fan of Nick Scipio and I'm no Nick Scipio!" Still... Gosh!!!!)
Waiting longing for every new part.
I especially appreciated this story as I lived in New Orleans for over 30 years, and the "places" are authentic. Great writing style!
I love your story. I am also from NO and loved the Beach. (Pontchartain Beach... note, there are no actual beaches in New Orleans, mud flats, yes, but beaches no. An historical aside, Pontachartain Beach was located at the lake terminus of the Milneburg Railroad, which Elysian Fields Avenue now follows from the River and which was the second railroad built in the United States.)
Wow. Excellent as always. Thanks for the read. Looking forward to the next chapter.
This is an incredible story!
Wow, Art. You've actually outdone yourself on this one. Absolutely brilliant. Somehow you've included all of the old cliches in a context that's new and exciting...and I love your characters. I want to just hug Terri. Well done! (Authors note: Clichés!!! Clichés!!! What... the big dicked high school football jock or the big-breasted blonde whose daddy has turned her into a nypho fuck-bunny? Clichés indeed! ;)
God I love this story, I'm hoping Pepper gets involved in the depravity.
I have read all and look forward to the next chapter with a !@#$%^&*() on...
Wow. Topped the preceding chapter again. You're on a roll.
Wooooo, just like I hoped, Pepper's getting...
This is the only story I make a regular point of checking back after every day to see when the next chapter is up. It continues to be a fantastic piece, and I'm both impressed and tantalized by your restraint, the way you're teasing things out with delicious deliberation.
I would like to have your kind permission to translate this epic into Swedish. (Uh, yeah... sure, I guess)
Different...some sad parts...thanks
Wow, just gets better and better. Thanks.
Best erotic story I've read. wish there was more, especially with Pepper and Terri
(Note from Art) Thanks to the reader who alerted me to the broken link!
I am looking forward to see how it continues and then ties back into the first chapter and how all of that comes to be. What an amazing slut you write about.
Your Terri would be the Maria from my circle. Damm nothing she could not do.
...even with the erotic parts, it feels like it is not the main objective, it actually tells a story, and I love it!
Another keeper. Thanks.
Well it's getting close... she is starting to ask to be done.... nice.. OH so nice
Holy smokes! Or should that be smoking holes?
Wow! What imagination and writing skills. I am a fan. Thanks.
That's my kind of party girl!
Thanks for putting your efforts out there to be scrutinized by everyone and their dog.
Love the series... interested in seeing how it ends...
Hail Mary, Mother of God... I'm with Julian on this!
Very nice so far. Typically a series tends to go over the top as the author tries to add more and more with each chapter. So far you haven't done that...
I am very interested in where this is going to go.
Excellent job once again. I am almost sad that its coming to an end, but I am curious as to how the story does get tied up.
This story should be published. Excellent work!
Awww, I'm going to miss those kids!... Really one of the best stories out there!
Kudos on a lovely series. Simply put, my thanks.
Jeezus, can we have a happy ending for once?... This is too much like real life, instead of a story, where people get the kind of closure that doesn't usually come to us. (Editors note: The story ended the way it began, with Terri walking out, leaving her past behind her and Jimmy losing her forever. From the very get go there was no way that they would live happily ever after.)
This was by far, the best story I've read in long, long time. Thanks!
Is this tale real or not? There are so many little details that normal "imagined" stories don't include that I'm having a hard time telling.
Absolutely amazing. Great job. I know it's fiction, but between you and me, is there any fact beneath it? Thanks!
Great series, loved every sentance! Hope you find her.
The whole diary-series makes a really good read - you really put some effort in there. Nice description of the place, the characters and details.
This is a great story. You kept it in context with minimal spelling errors and correct personal referral. I had to read the whole thing to be gratified, in a short time. Thanks.
I just wanted to say, because I know I haven't before, that this story has given me more orgasms than my last three boyfriends combined. Too often we have to choose (on ASSTR) between perversion and quality storytelling, like there's an inverse relationship. This is the series that really proves that you can have both and that they can both be better for it!
I have read a lot of erotic stories but this is by far the best.
This is the best story that I read in ASSTR.
Like a romantic Greek tragedy ending in "life goes on". Forget erotic, it is one of the best books I have ever read, and at 68 I have read a great deal of them.
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