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Great read. Good character development (so far), an interesting story line, and believable relevant issues.
Another great story with huge potential. Thanks.
Hot, I caught my daughter and her high school sweetheart screwing, never looked at my daughter in the same father/daughter way...
I like this story so far. Please continue.
My taste is for a story with a developing plot and some detail that is close to reality. You have a talent for plausible stories that contain an excellent mix of sensuality and realism that keeps me coming back for more.
You've got a good basis for an excellent story.
So far, so good... I'm dying to read more... Keep it up!
This is a good start, the story builds well and you are giving some good details of the characters. I already identify with the father, but I'm anxious to see what will develop with the "friend of the girlfriend".
Loved It. Very Hot. When's the next chapter?
Great writing - keep it up - story sure keeps mine up.
Excellent! I just read Chapter 2 and I can tell that this story is going to be up to your usual very high standards!
Awesome story! Keep going with it.
Very hot! And what makes it more so is that it is believable and well-written.
I enjoy voyeurism myself and felt something wicked uncoiling in my pants when you mentioned that Brandi wasnít too quick to get dressed when Hank was around.
I generally read the Ďset-upí to the sex part and then skip the action because it is usually presented as the samo-samo, but not this time.
Fantastic story! Now, I want to know WHERE she learned her skills!!!
Nice story. Flows well, good content, doesn't suffer the usual unexpected jumps in story nor grammar and maintains interest all the way through. I think I'd class this as the unexpected treasure of the week.
You're a man who understands the delights of young flesh. This latest story proves that again.
I can't wait to see where it goes, and neither can my libido.
Loved it, wish it was me.
Wow, thanks - I am really enjoying this! Can't wait for Chapter 4!
I must admit that you have certainly done your best to make this DELIGHTFUL story as realistic as possible.
Note that sex WITHOUT condoms is rather important to this 'Hopeless Romantic' because the addictive nature of the resulting sexual pleasure should force the participants into forming a long term sexual AND EMOTIONAL relationship.
More, more! This is very sexy, very good.
Enjoyed your new story series - you write well and the story line is one I suspect many of us have either done (I have) or fantasized about.
A lot of this Brandi story is quite hot, and it is well written (refreshingly). It is just too much of a male fantasy for my taste. (Editor's note: And how do you taste, sweetie? ;)
Nice to see a happy ending. I should be so lucky!
All a can say is wow... I really enjoyed the story. Wish there was more, but why spoil a good ending?
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