|Check out my stories.||Want to see what other readers think about my stories?||Gentlebutfirm created and maintains my website for me. Have a look here.|
|Here are some comments on my writing and my website that aren't specific to one story.|
|Mike T||Most stories need more "realism" added -- more little bloopers that happen in real sex and help you relate to the story. I find your writing, however, refreshingly real in this regard. No matter how much of a stallion you are, there are going to be those times when you get her hair tangled up in her bra hooks as you're trying to strip her in an oh-so-sexy way. I think on a deeper level, this helps give people some self-reassurance too. "So what if I accidentally grazed his cock with my teeth? I don't have to be a perfect sex-bomb to please my man in the bedroom."||I'm glad! Realism is definitely what I aim for!|
|Allen||I just fininshed reading one of your stories, It was very , very good , I love reading erotic stories and this one was at the top of the list, I plan on comming back for more....thanks again|
|Ripley26||I'm a pretty voracious reader (especially once I've found someone who writes with both style and substance) and I've devoured the entire library you offer through ASSTR.
So far I haven't found one piece that I didn't genuinely enjoy. The approach in your writing and content of the pieces you've presented are really something unique. I look forward to your future works.
i saw your website today, and let me tell you it is a very good
looking, neatly organised site. I have been of many asstr author's
sites and yours is the best. Keep up the good work.
|Gentle does that for me. Have a look here.|
|anonymous||wanted to tell you I have been reading some of your stories and enjoyed the hell out of them.. Nice descriptions and the mental processes connected are unique.. thanks..||Unique? Are you calling me weird? Oh good!|