Date: Mon, 13 Dec 2010 00:03:04 -0600 From: ryan rizzler <ryanrizzler@gmail.com> Subject: "A Top's Transformation-8" Warning: This story explicitly details sex between males. If you either do not want to read about this, are under age in the region that you live in, or it is illegal for you to read this in your country, then read no further and leave. No part of this story may be re-published elsewhere, either electronically or in print, unless permission is given in writing by the author. Thanks to everyone who has written me to say they have enjoyed the previous chapters. I appreciate your encouragement and emails. This is a true story (as with the other chapters in this series) but I have changed the names of the participants, to respect their privacy. If you haven't already read parts 1 through 7, I recommend you do so first, or else some of this won't make any sense to you. ************************************************** "A Top's Transformation - Part 8 " by Ryan Rizzler ryanrizzler@gmail.com As I am gaining my senses, I know either I stop them now, or accept whatever is going to happen. Its all too much: The cock on my left drilling my mouth...the cock on the right that I am jacking....Dan's mouth sucking me expertly ....his finger slowly working in and out of my hole....even knowing that Mark is seeing all of this is starting to turn me on even more. I know deep down inside that there is no way I want them to stop. I want to be these guys' whore and take whatever they decide to give me. Dan knows it, too. He knows they have me right where he wants me. "Give him some more," he says. Again the cock in my mouth is pulled out, and the bottle is shoved under my nose. As I inhale, Dan starts to work a second finger into my shaved hole, as a cock is shoved back into my now eagerly waiting mouth. My mind is already spinning from everything they're doing to me. The guy on the left, who's cock is fucking my face says " Make him take us both!" The guy on the right moves forward and begins to push the head of his cock into my mouth too. I think "There is no way I can take both these cocks in my mouth at once" and start to pull away, but both these guys are holding my head in place. I have no choice, though in the back of my mind, I know I really want them to force my mouth to be something it has never been before: A fuckhole for two cocks at once. "You hungry, jock boy? Open Wide!" that voice on the left taunts, clearly loving that I am submitting my mouth to them. Slowly they stretch my jaw wide open until they are both in. Together, these two cocks have double raped my mouth, yet I am more turned on than I can remember ever being. I reached around and pull them both toward my slutty mouth, as I try still to swallow even more of their cocks. "Fuck, now he's trying to take more! Fuck yeah! You WANT 'em now, don't you? " the owner of the cock on my left taunts again, already knowing the answer. As I nod yes, I can feel Dan is now trying to get a third finger into my hole. I am so turned on by the cocks being forced into my mouth that I don't even try to stop him. After a few minutes of effort, Dan comes up off my cock for a nanosecond to announce "He's got three fingers in him!", before resuming inhaling my cock. "...AND two cocks!" the guy on the left replies, laughing. "Mark, are you seeing this?" "Fuck YES!" Mark roars, sounding almost like he is going to bust a nut. "Okay, let's pump his mouth a little," the guy on the left says gleefully, and the guy on the right joins him in humping my skull just a little while it is trapped in their hands. As I take both of their cocks and Dan's fingers, my mind realizes that once again, Dan has succeeded again in getting me where I am weak and my hole is hungry. But this time he made sure others would see it and get to enjoy using me too. I also know I am in total heaven being treated this way by these guys. I am totally under their control and am loving being used by them and everything they are doing and saying to me. All of it. And I want more. "Give him some more party favors, before we...." Dan ordered, and the two cocks are pulled out of my aching jaw. As I inhale the bottle under my nose, the anticipation of what is coming next is killing me. The cock on right is immediately shoved all the way into my mouth again. I feel the aggressive guy on the left reach down and grab hold of my makeshift blindfold, apparently to remove it. As he pulls it off, I look up at him and its Kyle, looking me right in the eyes as he starts pushing the head of his cock into my mouth again, to join Big Mike's cock, which is already in there, as he leans in from my right. Worshiping at my cock is Dan, as Mark stands at the foot of the bed, stroking his cock and loving the show. "Who's the alpha jock top NOW?" Kyle roars, as he tries to force more cock into my mouth. "You LOVE the way we're treating you right now, don't you?" I nod yes, sucking his cock hungrily. "Dan told Mark and I about dominating you, and told us that you're dying to bottom," Kyle informed me. "Mark didn't believe it. So say it in front of him. In front of ALL of us! Say you WANT it!" Kyle taunted, as he and Big Mike pulled out, in order to hear what they were all wanting to hear. Dan's expert fingers had my hole so hungry for the real thing, I was totally ready. I wanted to be fucked by a real cock. "Fuck yes, I want it!" breathed, as I panted for air. Obviously, Dan hadn't shared this last tidbit with Big Mike, who, a little surprised, asked "Wow, so he's gonna lose his cherry right in front of ALL of us?" as if I wasn't even there. Dan immediately came up off my cock. "Hell, before it's over, he might lose his cherry TO all of us!" he taunted, smiling at me. "Dan, I don't know, that's a lot of ....." I started. "That's not the way you were talking when I had four fingers up your ass!" Dan interrupted tauntingly. All the guys roared at hearing this. "Four fingers? No shit!?? " Big Mike asked in amazement, then turning to sneer at me. I was about to lose my virginity. But to whom? Dan got up off the bed. Thinking it was him, I was a little surprised. But then I realized he had just moved to get out of the way and make my hole accessible to Mark, who already had a condom on, and looked like he couldn't wait. I couldn't believe it. Total bottom Mark, who usually couldn't wait to have my cock in him. I was about to lose my virginity in front of a bunch of guys, and to the kid I had been pounding unmercifully all semester. Kyle and Big Mike, who were on each side of me, lifted my legs up and apart, as Mark scooted forward on his knees. The look in his eyes was like a predator who was moving in on his prey. Dan moved forward behind him and I could tell he was playing with Mark's ass, as Mark took a big whiff from the bottle. "I'm so gonna fuck the shit out of you!" Mark gritted through his teeth as the effect hit him. I knew Mark had never fucked before, and didn't think he'd ever even wanted to, but as he inched forward to my hole, it was clear that at that moment, he really wanted to fuck me pretty badly. We were both going to lose our cherries at the same time, though they were different cherries. Kyle lay down next to me on my left, and started going crazy chewing and sucking on my nipple. I knew he had obsessed over my chest for a long time, so wasn't all that surprised. Mark had me by the ankles now, and it felt bizarre and hot at the same time as he pushed my legs back, popping my ass up in the air, just like I had done to him so many times, just before mounting him. I couldn't believe it. Here my jock top ass was pointed up in the air, about to become a bottom for the kid I had been slamming for so long. As Mark rubbed the head of his cock back and forth against my shaved hole, Dan shoved the bottle under my nose, apparently to kill off any last bit of resistance I might be feeling. Little did he know that there basically wasn't any resistance left. Between Kyle aggressively working my nipple with his mouth, Mark grinding his cockhead around my now hungry hole, and the effects of the bottle now hitting me too, I could not have possibly been any more willing to be fucked! Dan pulled the bottle away, lay down on my right with his head on my abs, and swallowed my entire dripping cock until I felt his nose pressing into my balls. Not only was he doing what he loved most, he was going to get a close up view as Mark entered me. When Mark paused with the head of his cock pressing against the opening, our eyes locked. I could see vengeance in his eyes as he slowly started pushing the head into my willing hole. As I opened my mouth and started to gasp, Kyle saw his chance to take what he'd wanted for a long time, as his tongue pushed its way into my mouth, kissing me, as I moaned. While Mark's cock slowly pushed into my hole, Kyle shoved more and more of his tongue down my throat. It was as if he was trying to rape my mouth with his tongue, as Mark did the same to my ass. "Slowly go all the way in and then stop, Mark" I heard Big Mike instruct. When Mark had fully complied, he barely sighed " Oh fuck!....its....all the way...in!", obviously surprised at how good it felt to have his cock in my hole. Immediately, Dan came up off my cock and got up to see. I realized Dan had so much wanted to suck my cock as much as he'd just wanted to have my cock in his mouth when I was penetrated for the first time. Standing beside the bed and watching, Dan yelled "Fuck yeah! The big jock top losing his cherry.....FUCKING HOT !" he crowed as he high-fived Big Mike. "Hold still, just like that, Mark!" Big Mike instructed, as he pushed Kyle's face aside, and slowly pushed the full length of his cock into my mouth, until my nose was buried in his pubes and his balls were against my chin. "Okay Mark, slowly start to pull back out" Big Mike ordered, as he too withdrew from my mouth. As he slowly started to push back in again, he told Mark " Okay, now go ahead and fuck him, but go slow at first...." Dan handed Mark the bottle, and Mark inhaled deeply. As it hit and as Mark slowly began deliriously fucking my hole in earnest. The feeling of having both of my holes simultaneously penetrated by two cocks was more incredible than anything I had fantasized. I was in an unbelievable ecstasy like I had never felt before, laying there moaning and taking both cocks like a total submissive bottom whore. But what surprised me was that not only was it hot that these guys were just taking what they wanted from my body, but also that the other guys were seeing it happen to me. We went like that for several minutes. Kyle and Dan were staring at my hole, mesmerized by watching it take cock for the first time. Sometimes Kyle would glance at my face to see my expression, but Dan's eyes were totally transfixed on my hole, as Mark's cock slowly went in and out of it. After a couple of minutes watching Mark and Big Mike using both my holes, Dan seized the opportunity to not only change things up again, but to also dominate me just a little more. "Mark, hold on a second..." Dan ordered, and Mark froze. Dan looked me in the eyes. "Reach around and feel his cock as it goes in you!" he ordered as he grinned. Part of me want to tell Dan "Fuck you!", but part of me also thought it was so fucking hot that he was ordering me to do that. Dan knew which part of me would win out. I reached around and wrapped my hand partially around Mark's cock as it began sliding back in to formerly virgin hole. It was incredibly hot, feeling the shaft of Mark's cock as he eased back into me and slowly resumed fucking me. For some reason, I slid my hand up and felt the lips of my ass as they puckered out around Mark's cock. It was fucking incredible! After a few more minutes, again, Dan seized the opportunity to humiliate me a little more in front of the guys. "Okay, that's hot, but I wanna see him SITTING on it, and RIDING it, the way a REAL bottom does!" Dan ordered, looking me in the eye. I just froze, as Mark and Big Mike both pulled out. "Let's pick him up, " Dan ordered as he and Kyle both jumped up onto the bed. Everyone except Mark began grabbing my arms and legs and lifting me upright inot the sitting position, while Mark lay down on his back, holding his cock pointing upwards. Mark was now clearly getting into controlling me as much as the rest of them were. And so was I. It was an incredible feeling to be picked up by several guys and lowered onto a waiting hard cock, without any say so about it, as Mark's cock again pushed into my now hungry hole, until I was sitting on him and his cock was fully buried. "He took that like a champ!" I heard Big Mike exclaim from behind me, as his hands let go from underneath my armpits. "He took it like the bottom slut he is now!" Dan corrected with a touch of glee, looking at me again, as he said it. "All right, you know what to do," he said, shoving the bottle under my nose again, "Start working that cock with your ass!" he ordered as he laughed. I was humiliated, but I couldn't help myself. The feeling of a real cock fucking me had been too incredible for me to be able to even pretend I wasn't in heaven taking it. Like a whore, I began riding Mark's cock. "There's nothing hotter than watching a submissive bottom fucking himself, by riding a guy's pole!" Mike said to the others as he laughed. I knew Mike was right, from all the times it had been my cock those bottom guys were riding. I'd always viewed it as the fall of the last the shred of dignity for a bottom guy who would do almost anything just to keep getting his hole drilled. And now I was doing it. After a few minutes of everyone watching me silently riding up and down on Mark's cock, Big Mike came over and lay down next to Mark on his back, watching me for a moment while stroking his cock. I couldn't look him in the eye. Big Mike knew I was lost in the intenseness of being fucked, and since I had been okay with being humiliated like this in front of the group, Big Mike made his move. He stated flatly "Something that I've been wanting to do all night...." as he rolled over face to face with Mark, "...is kiss your cute face." I knew Mark had been eyeing Big Mike all night, so Mark offered no resistance as they began to make out right in front of me, while Mark continued to thrust his cock up into my hole. Mark knew I wasn't going to say or do anything to stop him. I was lost in the new incredible experience of riding a rock hard cock and loving every inch of it. "So you guys are gonna just make out right in front of him while Mark fucks him?" Kyle asked, obviously amused at the situation. "Mm Hmm..." Mark replied with a giggle, as Big Mike drove his tongue further down Mark's throat. Part of me was a little resentful at them doing this in front of me, but part of me also thought it was hot that they were making me watch, while I was getting fucked by my own bottom boy. The fact that I only continued riding up and down on Mark's cock like a total slut pretty much let everyone know that at this point, I would probably submit to whatever they wanted to do to me. I felt Dan step up onto the bed behind me, and move up next to me. "You're loving that cock in your jock ass, aren't 'ya buddy?" he sneered, as he grabbed a handful of my hair and forced my mouth down on his cock. My only response was to moan around his cock, as I sucked it like a total slut. After making out for a few more minutes, Big Mike looked into Mark's eyes and said "You did a great job of opening him up, but now I'm gonna show you how to really fuck him!" Big Mike was talking about fucking me like I wasn't even there, or had any say so about who would push their cock into me next. It was humiliating, but at the same time so unbelievably hot! I was now just a hot muscular body with a couple of tight holes for everyone in the room to use to get off. And at that moment, that's all I wanted to be, as I kept riding Mark's cock, and slurping away on Dan's. Big Mike rolled back over on his back, started stroking his cock and said to me "That night you and I both fucked that kid......when I was standing behind you, every time you drove it to him, I was thinking that your ass was hotter than his! And in a minute, I'm gonna have my cock IN that hot ass!" he said triumphantly, for the whole room to hear. It was hot hearing him say this, but I didn't respond. Still sucking Dan's cock, I glanced at Mark, who continued thrusting his cock up into me. I knew Mark had feelings for me. But since I'd been pounding his butt all semester, so far my getting fucked had been sort of a flip flop for us, by him fucking me. But my being fucked by another guy right in front of him was another thing. I wasn't sure Mark wanted to see the top he had feelings for get fucked by another guy. Man, was I wrong! An evil little smile came across Mark's cute little face. "Yeah, go for it! Pound his jock ass!" he said to Big Mike, though he continued looking me straight in the eyes. By that time, Big Mike had had a chance to really work his cock to being rock hard, and he was ready to take my hole. "Okay, time you had a real top man fuck you." Big Mike ordered dramatically, as he held his cock so it was pointing straight up. "And THIS time you're gonna sit on it on your own...Aren't 'ya, STUD?" big Mike taunted, especially emphasizing the word " stud" at the end. "Fuck yeah, THIS I want to SEE!" I heard Dan say, pulling his cock from my mouth and stepping off the bed and around behind me for a better view. I just nodded, completely humiliated, as I slowly came up off Mark's cock as ordered and stood up. But if I was so humiliated, why was I getting up and moving over to lower my hole onto Mike's cock ? As I slowly lowered myself to be fucked by Big Mike's cock, I finally admitted it was because I LOVED being their slut and the way they were all using me and humiliating me. I wasn't just willing to tolerate it, I loved it! Here I was, in the middle of the bed, riding Big Mike's cock in full view of the other guys and even though I couldn't take all of it, I was totally loving them treating me like this and using my hole. Dan stepped up and shoved the bottle under my nose again, and I inhaled. As it hit me Dan ordered, "Now go all the way DOWN on it!" in that voice that made me weak. After several minutes, I had managed to slowly ease a little farther down on Mike's cock farther than I had previously been able to, but I still wasn't able to take all of it. The incredible mixture of pain and pleasure and them being in control of my body had me almost reeling. But I couldn't go any deeper. "Fuck, it's gonna split me in two..." I said, as I paused for a moment to try to relax. "Don't just sit there, RIDE IT!" Kyle demanded, like someone who had paid a lot of money to see a show, and wasn't getting his money's worth. Hadn't I done enough already for a guy who'd just lost his virginity? After several more minutes, I was able to go up and down again...a little. "ALL....the....way....DOWN on it! ", Dan repeated more sternly. His voice ordering me was such a fucking turn on, it made me want to take all of Big Mike's cock in my hole. "I'm...trying...." I breathed, but I was still having trouble. Finally, without saying a word, Dan got up on the bed and stood up close behind me. His hairy legs and his cock pressed against my back. He grabbed my jaw forcefully with his hand and shoved the bottle under my nose again. I couldn't have refused if I had wanted to. As I inhaled, I could feel a little precum oozing out of his cock and onto my back. He pulled the bottle away and put one hand on each of my shoulders. "ALL the fucking way DOWN ON IT!!!" he ordered, as he leaned forward onto his hands and bent his knees, so his full body weight pushed me all the way down onto Big Mike's cock. "AAAAAH, FUUCK!!!" I moaned out half in pain and half in total ecstasy. Dan's body weight forced me to take the full length of Big Mike's entire cock to where my butt cheeks were resting on his legs. Showing me no mercy, at the same time, Big Mike pushed up with his pelvis making sure he was fully in, balls deep. My best friend was helping Big Mike rape my hole. I almost came from both the penetration and from being manhandled by them like that. Mark must have already been pretty close, and I guess seeing them do this to me was too much for him. " Oh fuck...." was all he said, but you could tell he was there. I thought he would just lie there next to Big Mike and shoot, but I guess he wanted to join in on the dogpile of what they were putting me through, too. He stood up and stepped up next to me and blew shot after shot all over my chest. Though I was surprised he wanted to do that to me, I totally loved it. Mark had taken my virginity, encouraged Big Mike to fuck me, and was now marking me as well, while the rest of the guys watched. Seeing Mark do that triggered Kyle. Not to be outdone by Mark, he stepped up on the bed and stood over Big Mike, straddling him and facing me. Without saying a word, he grabbed the bottle from Dan, shoved it under my nose, and I inhaled long and deep. Then he stepped closer, grabbed a handful of my hair and buried his cock in my mouth as far as he could, as Dan, still behind me, pushed on the back of my head, too. "Yeah, now we're all raping BOTH your fucking holes!....Shove it all the fucking way down, Kyle!" Dan said, pushing on the back of my head, clearly thrilled at having found yet another way to dominate me in front of the guys. My face was again buried in Kyle's pubes as I swallowed the full length of his cock, while my other hole continued submitting to Big Mike's cock, as he started slowly screwing me. As I moaned from the two cocks I was being forced to take, Kyle began to really fuck my mouth hard, clearly intending to get off this way. While everyone looked on, he face fucked me mercilessly, as I took the full length of his cock and his balls slapped against my chin. Without being told to, I reached up and started to work his balls and jack him, as I sucked too. I was trying to assist my mouth as it did its best to suck him off to completion. "Yeah, you WANT my load now. Don't you, you fucking jockslut?" Kyle gloated. I looked up at him and nodded. I had completely surrendered to submission at this point. As their whore, I wanted for them to use me with their cocks to get off however they wanted, and I could tell this was how Kyle wanted to get off. Just as he was about to cum, Kyle pulled my mouth off his cock by his handful of my hair, and pointed his cock at my face, fully intending to finish his domination of me by giving be a facial. When the first shot went all the way from my left cheek, down my jaw and my neck, I realized Kyle was a big shooter. He moved my face around with his fistful of my hair as the second shot went from the other cheek, across my lips, and onto my chin. He fired onto my face again and again, while he still clutched a handful of my hair for control over me, making sure my face was fully coated. When he'd finished shooting, I had cum all over my face, dripping off my chin and running down my neck and chest. As a reward for the excellent blow job I'd given him, Kyle gave my face a hard slap with his slick cock before he stepped off the bed. Through all of that, I'd continued riding up and down on Big Mike's fuck stick, which was drilling my hole. "What a fucking slut!" Dan said to the other guys as he threw me a towel. "Even while taking Kyle's load, he still kept going up and down on Mike's pole!" he pointed out to the others. They all chuckled in amazement, as I wiped off my face. It was humiliating, but also hot at the same time, as I still continued to impale myself on Big Mike's cock. "Put him on his back, Mike" Dan ordered, like I was just an object. Hell, I was! I was their group fuckhole, and I was loving it! As I raised up off Big Mike's cock, they immediately grabbed me and rolled me over, manhandling me like I was a sack of grain or something. As soon as I was on my back, Mike pulled my ass to the edge of the bed, where he was standing next to it. He lifted my legs, lined up his cock with my hole, and in one move buried it all the way into my ass. As I moaned out, I heard the guys all exclaim "YEAH!" in unison at how hot it was seeing Mike forcefully taking my hole that way. Dan moved in and started basically doing deep pushups crossways over my face, aggressively driving the length of his cock down my throat. I could tell that everything they'd all done to me so far had clearly driven him to a whole new level of arousal. "You're gonna cum for us with Mike's cock up your ass, like the bottom slut you are now, aren't you?" Dan taunted, as he face fucked me hard. Sometimes, after he'd bury his cock to the pubes, he'd wallow it around in my mouth a little, for extra measure. I just nodded and moaned "Mm hmm", doing my best not to cum yet, as Big Mike continued screwing my hole like the expert top man he was. He began really long dicking me the full length of his cock now. I was barely touching my cock to keep from cumming, but the two of them working both my holes and treating me this way was just getting me closer and closer. The fact that all the guys were watching them do this to me was making it even harder for me not to cum. "Raise his legs up higher!" Dan said to Big Mike. Big Mike stepped up onto the bed, lifting my legs to where they were almost pointing straight up, while he never missed a beat, as he continued to fuck me with that rock hard cock, clearly loving being in my hole. With Big Mike almost standing up on the bed lifting my legs up, and Dan basically riding my mouth with his cock buried in it, I was practically standing on my head. Sensing that I was really close, Dan ordered, "Don't cum until I tell you!" I didn't say anything, concentrating on sucking his cock. I had sucked him so many times, I knew exactly what to do to make Dan cum while blowing him. Then, as his breathing got heavier I also started working my cock more, too. Mike's cock was really pile driving me, and it was hot that it was he who was controlling my getting fucking now, instead of me. It was hot that they were both using my body for their own pleasure, and hot that we had an audience as well. Dan pulled out of my mouth and stroked his cock fusiously as he did a hit from the bottle. Then he shoved it under my nose one last time. Right after it hit me, he ordered "Open your mouth and aim for it!" in that tone he knew I would obey. As ordered, I turned my face up toward my own cock, and opened my mouth. Mike's cock drilling my hole finally me pushed me over the edge, and Dan and I moaned in unison as we both began firing. My best friend had orchestrated my losing my cherry, becoming a sluthole for he and his friends, and now, while the guys stood around us watching in awe, together he and I both unloaded on my face and in my open mouth, as I was being fucked. It was the most the intense orgasm I'd ever had, and I honestly thought I might pass out, but thankfully, I didn't. When I'd finished cumming, Mike slowly lowered my legs, and a few momenst later, shot his load on my chest, while I reached up and worked his balls with my hand. I'd not only lost my virginity, I'd been fucked by two different guys, I'd sucked 3 cocks (including two at once), every guy in the room had shot on me, and two cocks had shot in my mouth. One of those was my own, and the other was Dan's. It had been an incredible experience! No, I hadn't been DP'd, but realistically, I probably couldn't could have handled it my first time to bottom. I hope you have enjoyed reading about this as much as I enjoyed re-living what was one of the hottest times of my entire life. If you would like to, feel free to write me at ryanrizzler@gmail.com