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Chapter Seventeen: Fantastic Whore

>From the moment Susan Richards accepted my cum, I knew that Phoenix and I had
found the part of her personality she suppressed - Malice. Only by weakening
Sue's mind and properly... stimulating her were we able to get this far, the
beautiful, slender Invisible Woman carefully gathering the cum I had coated
her with, still sniffling her tears away as she ate my cream.

"How goes the battle, Sue?" I enquired, my prick beginning to stiffen again at
the sight in front of me. "How does Malice feel to you now?"

"It's becoming stronger," she admitted slowly, her eyes slowly closing as the
effects of my cum seeped into her bloodstream. "God your cum is good shit... I
feel so... dirty..."

I smiled as I watched Susan succumb to the mind-deadening cream. Phoenix had
described the sensations to me after I had first transformed her. The feeling
of alcohol misting over your mind was her analogy, only my jism was much more
concentrated, attacking and numbing all inhibitions whilst at the same time
causing a deep, insatiable hunger for orgasm. Before my eyes I could see it
happening, Malice becoming stronger as the rational, restrictive aspects of
Sue's personality were temporarily quietened.

"Tell me about Reed... I want to know..."

I sighed. Maybe this wasn't going to be as straightforward as I had hoped.
Only the aspect of the Invisible Woman I wanted to destroy would want to know
about her husband.

"I will show you exactly what your husband is up to," I told her. "But I am
going to need a lot more persuading, you know."

"I want to know... I've got to know... I'll do anything..."

"Anything?" I questioned, quite surprised at this capitulation.

"I'll let you fuck me if you want... but I've got to know."

"I'm not going to fuck you, Sue. Not yet. But I think that Phoenix would like
to play with you. Do what she says to the letter and we'll let you in on
everything you need to know."

Once again I thrilled to the sight of fear dominating Susan Richards. It was
clear that she'd never been with a woman before, and as uncertainly she turned
to Phoenix, I saw her swallow apprehensively.  Phoenix smiled and pulled her
into her arms, mouth open as she closed in on Sue's lips, her tongue already
beginning to thrust into the Invisible Woman's mouth even before contact was
made. I heard a muffled yelp from Susan and a satisfied moan from Phoenix.

The sight before me sent new urgency into my erection. Susan's slender form
was dominated by the luxuriant, curvaceous voluptuousness of Phoenix's form,
her astounding body seemingly absorbing her partner into her. It took all of
my self-control to keep myself away from Sue's cunt, allowing my consort to
run the show. Susan had already tasted me - now it was down to Phoenix to
break her down still further.

I could feel her telepathic feelers stretching into the Invisible Woman's
mind, seeking out the darker aspects of her psyche, willing the long tamed
Malice to return to the fore. My consort's hands were everywhere, at once
massaging her back, before moving down to caress her buttocks lightly, then
savagely digging deep into the cleft of her ass cheeks, fingers seeking out
her untouched anus. Sue pulled away, shocked.

"Don't... don't... t-touch me there!"

Phoenix just smiled sweetly, again taking her in her arms, pulling her closer.

"Deny me again and I will... hurt... you," she threatened, sitting down on the
couch. "Now come here, slut. I want you to feel my breasts."

Fazed by Phoenix's intimidating tone, Susan sat down in front of my consort
and tentatively reached out with both hands, seeking out her massive breasts,
marvelling as they seemed to expand under her caresses. Phoenix grew hotter
with each caress.

"Harder... do it faster!" she hissed. "Pinch my nipples!"

Mesmerised by Phoenix's body, Susan did just that, increasing her speed,
digging deeper into the firm flesh, pinching down hard on the swollen tips,
the red-haired beauty gasping and squirming at the masturbation her tits were
enduring. Sure enough, her cream began to gather on the ends of her nipples,
my cock throbbing as Sue dipped her head down, her tongue carefully scooping
up the proffered drops of milk.

"Good girl... yessss... now stroke it... stroke it hard..."

Susan pulled her head back, moving both her hands around one breast, both
thumbs resting on Phoenix's nipple, slowly developing a rhythm as she pulled
at the flesh, then stroked back. The milk began to dribble profusely from the
heavy tit, smearing over Susan's hands as she upped the tempo until Phoenix
screamed in release, thrusting her torso forwards, hosing our prey with her
precious milk. Sue continued the ecstasy by diving down onto the other
leaking tit, sucking for all her worth, forcing her new mistress through
another orgasm, both her hands again pulling on her breast, milking it like a
cow's udder as she drunk deeply from my dark lover.

"You're going to be so... good," Phoenix complimented as her climax subsided,
her hands holding the drenched Invisible Woman to her tit. "So fucking good."

The look on her face when she finally managed to pull away from the red-haired
woman's breast flesh said it all. As well as the expression I could feel the
evil of Malice coming to the fore, the sensation driving new lusts through me.

"I've got to cum," Susan murmured, her voice now altered as Malice became more
dominant. "I need it in my cunt... God I fucking need it!"

Now was the time to test just how successful Phoenix had been.

"That's fine, Susan. I'll give you the most incredible climax you've ever
experienced if that's what you want. I'll fill your cunt to overflowing with
my cream, I'll make you feel better... dirtier... than you've ever felt... or
you can see your husband. It's either one or the other"

Malice wouldn't care about Reed Richards. She would stop at nothing to feel
the sensation of my cock deep in her pussy, spurting the life-altering cum
inside of her, guaranteeing her continued dominance.

"Show me my husband."

Once again I sighed. Malice was becoming more powerful with each passing
moment, but despite Susan's continued degradation, she was holding on, the
prize of seeing her husband keeping her mind together. I knew that this would
happen. I had planned for it. In fact, it was essential to Sue's submission
that she did so.

"Okay, Susan, you've earned it."

Phoenix gently pulled the Invisible Woman back on to the couch with her, the
heroine seemingly accepting her intimate caresses over her breasts, down her
stomach and across the downy hair on her pussy.

"Reed Richards was invited to the Hellfire Club two days ago," I began,
pointing to video footage of the Fantastic Four's leader meeting with
Sebastian Shaw. "We've noticed that since your son is a mutant, he's taken
quite an interest in the global mutant he should. How is your
husband to know that he is in fact walking into a trap?"

I press a button on the video remote, the scene cutting to Richards clamped
down on an operating table, quite naked, a pained expression of resistance on
his face. Behind him stood Emma Frost, her mind straining in concentration,
her hands locked onto his temples. Betsy Braddock is carefully pulling on his
cock, her mouth dancing around it, moaning around the base of it.

"What you're seeing there are two of the world's most powerful telepaths
polluting his mind. Psylocke is stimulating his body both mentally and
physically, driving him ever closer to climax, but denying him the final
release... The White Queen is forcing certain... images... into his mind."

Sue's attention is firmly placed on the monitor. I can see her love and
concern for her husband, but at the same time I can feel Malice's arousal at
the scene, particularly on the wonderful expressions of desire on Psylocke's
features as she teases Richards' body beyond human endurance.

"What is the white whore doing?" Susan asked... but I'm sure it was the deeper
voice of Malice creeping through.

"There are some quite unpleasant things happening in the Hellfire Club. There
are many men there with disgusting perversions. The reason they go there is
because the club's whores will do anything to get their clients off. Emma is
sifting through their minds, pulling out the most heinous abuse the whores
have been given, pumping all of this into Reed's mind. He's only feeling what
those men feel, not the pain or the humiliation the girls endure- just the
thrill of absolute possession, the thundering orgasms of total control over
willing, suffering young meat."

I saw Susan began to cry anew, head held in her hands, her gaze still locked
on the screen as the man she loved was slowly robbed of his great integrity.

"If it's any consolation, Emma told me that his resistance was quite unlike
anything she'd ever come across before. His love for you was his only
defence... but up against the powers of those two women, he never really
stood a chance."


Susan's grief was tangible. I could sense her own integrity start to lose its
cohesion, the power of Malice slowly gaining more ground in the battle for
her enviable body as she continued to respond to Phoenix's insistent
stimulation of her flesh. My own lust grew still further and I felt no relief
as I reached down to masturbate at the scene in front of me. The insistent
urge to cum all over this bitch swelled within me.

I pressed the remote again, moving the video on to the final capitulation of
'Mister Fantastic'.

"I think this says it all. The young mutant Jubilee recently 'joined' the
club and your husband is her first man. We'd given her some psionic
treatment, deadening her mind to the upcoming trauma, and I think she's going
to need it."

The room hadn't changed but Richards was still securely strapped down, alone.
The White Queen paraded the lithe young form of Jubilation Lee in to the
room, clearly against her will. The young girl was quite naked, apart from a
revealing see-through teddy. Emma left the room laughing, and I awaited the
moment of release, where she would allow Richards full control of his amazing
elastic body.

Poor little Jubilee didn't have a hope in hell of resistance as Mister
Fantastic's powers returned, instantly allowing him to flow like mercury
through the clamps, his body arching towards the young girl. His flesh was
like a vast blanket, reaching out over the distance between them, his body
taking the form of giant hands which clasped Jubilee tightly, denying her any
kind of escape. Within seconds the majority of his mass was flowing around
her body.

"Stop it! No!" she screamed almost constantly, eyes shut tight in despair.

The look on Reed's face was somewhat different, the expression one of pure
lust, the desire to procreate warped and twisted into an urge that could not
be ignored. He didn't say a word. Instead he concentrated on his actions,
quickly using his pliable body to rip off the small lacy lingerie that
protected Jubilee's body from its inevitable destiny.

Reed Richards' body returned to a semblance of humanity as his allowed his
erect cock to pop into view, his hands resting on Jubilee's kneecaps, forcing
her bent legs apart as the junior X-Man struggled with all her might beneath

"This is it, Susan," I breathed. "The moment your husband not only commits
adultery but becomes a child rapist too."

There was a clear view of Reed grimacing in primitive joy as he sank his cock
deep inside his adolescent victim, his face screwed tight in sexual desire,
his teeth clenched, emitting an evil hiss as Jubilee whimpered in pain at the
penetration, her first cock.

I stopped the tape. Susan had collapsed to the floor, shivering, but was still
looking intently at the screen, hunched on all fours.

"I can show you the rest if you want, Susan," I offered. "It doesn't take him
long to shoot off in her snatch, but the poor guy's been taken to limit of
climax and denied orgasm for the last 24 hours. He fucks everyone of her
holes. Later on he even uses her mouth, cunt and ass simultaneously. It's
kind of weird watching a rapist at work with those kind of super powers."

"What do you want of me?" she asked, and now there was no mistake. Malice was
in control.

"It's very simple," Phoenix explained slowly, her eyes still locked on
Susan's slender body, eyeing her rounded buttocks. "We can see Malice inside
of you and she is a vision of perversion... of horrible lusts... a dark angel
of sexual dominance"

"The perfect body for the ultimate whore," I summed up. "And we want to give
it to you."

Malice's smile was seductively evil as she leaned forward, licking the palms
of her hands before laying them on my prick, using both hands to milk my
leaking cock, her lips descending to suck on the head of my pole as more
precum spurted from the tip. I gasped at the ferocity of her suction, coupled
with the coaxing swipes of her tongue.

"You know," she started, pulling away from my cock for a moment, "this would
be so much better for you if I had a tongue stud."

She started sucking again, continuing the milking action with her hands until
Phoenix reached over and pulled her head back, turning it and kissing her
deeply, resting her own body on Susan's back, her hands reaching underneath to
squeeze her swelling mammaries.

In a sudden attempt to gain dominance, Susan wrestled Phoenix to the ground,
her tongue diving into her armpits, a scene I remembered from Stephanie's
submission to my consort. Her tongue dove deeply into each, feeding on her
richly arousing pheromones straight from the glands, one hand on Phoenix's
breast, the other snaking down between her legs.

Phoenix gasped as she found her cunt being roughly taken by Malice's digging
fingers, the former Invisible Woman slowly licking her body, moving down to
her cunt before burying her face in the juncture of her thighs. My cock,
still demanding orgasm after Malice's ministrations, could no longer be
ignored. Malice's ass was raised right in front of me as she continued to
suck Phoenix dry.

I moved behind her, pulling her buttocks apart and exposing the little anus
to my ravenous gaze. Anticipating the upcoming sodomy, my cock belched out a
load of creamy jism, which I scooped from her ass cheeks and smeared over her
pucker. Then slowly, agonisingly, I pushed my gushing shaft into her rectum,
sighing at the incredible friction, the flesh yielding beneath the insistent
thrusting of my prick.

Several mini-orgasms later I knew that I had given our ass enough of my cream
to fulfil its purpose. Roughly I pulled Malice away from Phoenix, my cock
springing free as I twisted her around and pulled her legs apart, my cock
quickly settling into her soaking cunt, again coating her insides with my cum
before I pulled out savagely, jerking myself until I crossed the line, my
tortured balls despatching load after load of viscous cum with which I would
transform Susan Richards forever.

After the requisite loads landed on that stunning face and chest, Phoenix
smeared her cunt juices over her features, reaching forward to molest Susan's
breasts, rubbing in the jism that landed on those precious globes. I pushed
my still rock-hard cock into her snatch again as Phoenix leaned forwards and
kissed me deeply, our minds meshing as Malice writhed beneath us. The energy
bird construct formed around my dark consort as we reached into Susan's mind,
making the evil of Malice as physical as it was mental, her body beginning to
transform in the triangle of sexual gratification. All three of us came with
an intensity that threatened to unhinge our minds as Phoenix's energy
engulfed us all.

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