Stories To Be Critiqued
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Here are the stories currently up for critique.
|88.||Slow Cruise, by Gray Beard (MF, slow, rom)|
|87.||Taken, by Jack C Lipton (FM rom 1st oral)|
|86.||Laura, by Altan (exhib nosex)|
|85.||The Deal, by Conjugate (MF, oral, light bdsm, cons)|
|84.||Keiko, by Naive |
|83.||Hell Hath No Fury, by Alexis Siefert and Shon Richards (Myth, MF)|
|82.||Rumors of Glory, by elle`attend |
|81.||Winter Nights, by Dryad (MF, Cons, Fantasy)|
|80.||Lap Dancer, by Katie McN |
|79.||Fire, by john (love story)|
|78.||Chocolate Knights and Chocolate Daze, by Gary Jordan (MF, rom, cons, oral, anal, light bondage, wl)|
|77.||Denver Gwen (part 2), by Poison Ivan (MF MMF oral anal)|
|76.||Denver Gwen (part 1), by Poison Ivan (MF MMF oral anal)|
| ||Stories From Previous Weeks|
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review as many stories as they are comfortable with. Before commenting,
read the entire story and all the comments made so far.
Remember: focus on constructive criticism. For each piece, reviewers
should post two positive comments and two suggestions for improvements.
Please, try not to repeat!