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I am happy to announce I have finished the rewrite and completion of the story formally known as Tim, the Teenage MC!
Because of the scope of the rewrite and the fact that it goes beyond Tim's teenage years, I have titled it The Chronicles of Tim Brandton and is broken up into 9 books totaling 3,186,739 words.
Book 1: 355,094 - 24 chapters - Love's Shepherd - April 85 - June 86 - 8th-9th grades
Book 2: 365,786 - 22 chapters - Love's Masters - June 86 - April 87 - 10th grade
Book 3: 369,151 - 26 chapters - Fractured Souls - April 87 - July 88 - 11th grade
Book 4: 300,919 - 19 chapters - Heart's Blooming - July 88 - August 89 - 12th grade
Book 5: 372,210 - 26 chapters - Emergence - August 89 - December 90
Book 6: 469,788 - 28 chapters - The Gathering of Hearts - December 90 - December 91
Book 7: 270,905 - 20 chapters - The Path of the One - December 91 - December 92
Book 8: 448,581 - 25 chapters - Destiny's Choice - December 92 - December 93
Book 9: 234,305 - 15 chapters - Two Worlds - January 93 - November 97
The original story was 1,303,407 words. In Chronicles, the timespan the original story covered is 1,649,160 words. Keep in mind that the longest Harry Potter book was 257,045 words so that more than a full length novel of new material just within the story you may already have read! Most of the new material is in the first two books.
The Chronicles of Tim Brandton is currently being posted to storiesonline.net three chapters a week. I will be posting it here and on mcstories.com, but I need to make adjustments to my publishing scripts to output files formatted for these sites. Once I have that working, new chapters may still lag behind storiesonline.net.
Below is the original story (Tim, the Teenage MC) last updated back in November of 2008. Chronicles will be posted as a seperate story linked from my homepage.
(TP-Mast = Telepathic sharing
while masturbating)
** denotes the section contains a graphic or other media type related
to
that part of the story
Chapter I: 8th Grade, Spring 1985
Part
1 - The Beginning
(mc, mm-masturbation)
Part
2 - Controlling
One's Power
(mc, m-solo (sort of))
Chapter II: 9th
Grade, Fall 1985
Part
1 - Love,
Life, and the Power
(mc, mf-TP-Mast, mfm-TP-Mast)
Part
2 - The Rules
of the Game
(mc, implied mm oral)
Chapter III: 9th Grade - Winter 1986
Part
1 -
Three Heads are Better than Two
(mc, mf oral)
Part
2 -
Curiosity and the Cat
(mc, brief Mf-anal)
Part
3 -
The Horror of the Power
(mc, Mm, Mf, Mfm)
Part
4 -
A Little Help From Your Friends
(no sex)
Part
5 -
Let's get naked
(mf oral)
Part
6 -
Romp in the Park
(mc, exhib)
** Part 7 - A Day With
Dear
Ole Dad
(mc, oral mf mF MF)
Part
8 -
To Fuck, or not to Fuck
(mc, oral mf)
Part
9 -
Make Love to me - Round 1
(mc, mf)
Part
10 - Make
Love to me - Round 2
(mf, mm, mmf)
Part
11 - Make
Love to me - Round 3
(anal mf, mfm)
Chapter IV: 9th Grade, Spring
1986 - Brad
and Sandi
Part
1 - Sharing
With My Buddies
(mc, hyp, mm-TP-Mast)
Part
2 - Brothers
and Sisters
(mfmm-TP-Mast, f-solo w/toys, mf incest)
Part
3 - Your
Sister, Your Slave
(mc, incest mf, mfmm)
Chapter V: 9th Grade, Spring 1986 -
The North Mansion
Part
1 - Mother,
Father, and My Lovers
(mc, oral
mf & ff)
Part
2 - Are You
Free This Evening? (Or A Slave?)
(fff, mm foreplay)
Part
3 - Chains
of Slavery
(mc, mf)
Part
4 - Pop Go
the Cherries
(fm, mmf)
Part
5 - Sex Goddess
I Call Mom
(oral mF)
Part
6 - Winding
Up Another School Year
(mfm)
Chapter VI: 9th Grade, Summer 1986 -
Summer Camp
Campers
Part
1 - Off To
Summer (Sex) Camp We Go
(mc, mfmm, mf)
Part
2 - The Girl's
Showers
(mc, mf, ff)
Part
3 - Summer
Time Fun
(mc, mf, oral mf, mm)
Part
4 - It's
Good To Have Friends
(mc, TP-Mast)
Chapter VII: 9th Grade,
Summer 1986 -
Summer Camp Counselors
Part
1 - Don't
You Just Love Surprises
(mf)
Part
2 - Lessons
of Love
(mc, oral mm mf, mfm)
Part
3 - Lessons
of Sex (or, Fuck Me Teach')
(mm, mf, mfm)
Part
4 - Lessons
of Trust
(ff, mf, mfmf)
Part
5 - Whole
Lot'a Suckin' Goin' On..
(oral mf mm)
Part
6 - Will
You Be My Slave Tonight?
(mc, Mf,
mf)
Chapter VIII: 9th Grade,
Summer 1986 -
After Summer Camp
Part
1 - Life
After Camp
(mc, mf mfm)
Part
2 - It's
My Orgy, And I'll Watch If I Want To
(anal mf, mfm)
Part
3 - Who's
The Master In This House?
(mc, mf)
Chapter IX: 10th Grade,
Fall 1986
** Part 1 - Rings of
the
Master
(mc, mf)
** Part 2 - Rings of the
Slaves
(mc, oral mf)
Part
3 - Rings
of Love
(mc, mf)
Part
4 - A Day
With the Slaves
(mc, mf)
Part
5 - The Drug
Deal
(mc, mf)
Part
6 - Dreams
People Share
(mc, mf, ff, fisting)
Part
7 - Holly's
Favorite Dicky
(mc, mf)
Chapter X: 10th Grade,
Winter 1986/87
Part
1 - Life
Support
(no sex)
Part
2 - The Dance
of Sex
(mc, oral mf, mf)
Part
3 - Twosomes
and Threesomes.
(mfm)
Part
4 - Parental
Secrets
(mc, oral mf, mf)
Part
5 - Tim's
Family Christmas
(mfm)
Part
6 - Sweet
Sixteen
(mc, mf)
Part
7 - Choices
In Sexuality
(mc, mf, mfm, oral mm)
Part
8 - Brother,
Sister, and the Teddy
(mc, inc, oral
mf)
Part
9 - LeAnne's
Animal
(hyp, mf, mf oral, mf anal)
Part
10 - The
Making of a Slut
(toys, mf, ff, oral, anal)
[Part 10 - Segments from LeAnne's
journal, not told from Tim's point of view]
Chapter XI: 10th Grade,
Spring 1987
Part
1 - An Adventure
with LeAnne
(mf, drugs)
Part
2 - Awakenings
(mc mf)
Part
3 - The New
& Improved Tim
(mf, fat)
Part
4 - Domination
101
(dom/sub)
Part
5 - Your
Subconscious is Thy Master
(no sex)
Part
6 - Police
Action
(mc, mm, mf, anal, rape)
** Part 7 - Apartments 6c and
9c
(mf, very young incest)
Part
8 - In the
Name of Fatherhood
(mc, mf)
Part
9 - The First
Signs of Spring
(mf)
Part
10 - Jack
and the Teddy Bears
(mf)
Part
11 - Ghosts
of Lovers Past
(mf oral)
** Part 12 - The Power of
Dreams
(mfm)
Part
13 - Where
the Path Leads
(mc mf)
Part
14 - Prisoners
(mm)
Chapter XII: 10th Grade,
Summer 1987
Part
1 - Deeper
Into the Depths of Hell
(MC, mf, mfm,
mm, brainwashing)
Part
2 - The Price
of One's Soul
(mc, mf, anal)
Part
3 - Hope's
Last Chance
(mc, no sex)
Part
4 - The Little
Girl Inside
(mf, anal)
Part
5 - Sisters
of Deceit
(mc, mf, mffff, ff)
Part
6 - The Deal
of My Life
(mc mf)
Part
7 - Deceit
is a Traitor's Motto
(mc, mf, drug)
Part
8 - Final
Farewells and Hello Agains
(mf)
Part
9 - Fate
and Luck
(mf, oral)
Part
10 - A Day
of Fun with Holly Quinn
(mc, mf)
Chapter XIII: 11th Grade,
Fall 1987
Part
1 - Musical
Bodies
(mff bodyswapping)
Part
2 - Pocket
Knives and Pornos
(mc mf, mm oral incest)
Part
3 - Best
Friends
(mc mf)
Part
4 - Enough
Love For Everyone
(mf)
Part
5 - Doing
It For Love
(mc mf)
Part
6 - The Quest
for Sarah Begins
(mc)
Part
7 - Family
Matters
(no sex)
Part
8 - College
Life
(mf oral)
Part
9 - All According
to Plan
(no sex)
Part
10 - Losing
Control
(mm light rape)
Part
11 - Give
Me Some Dirty Sex
(mm analingus, anal)
Part
12 - Boy-talk
(no sex)
Part
13 - Party
Animals and Party Poopers
(mf oral)
Part
14 - Joey's
Darkest Hour
(no sex)
Part
15 - Rat
Hunt
(mc, mm, mf)
Part
16 - Richardson's
Suite
(mm)
Part
17 - A Symbol
Is Mightier Than a Sword
(mc, mm,
mf)
Part
18 - A Choice
of Families
(no sex)
Part
19 - Shit!
It's A Connor Family Reunion!
(no sex)
Chapter XIV: 11th Grade,
Winter 1987/88
Part
1 - Boyfriend, Girlfriend,
and the Sight
(no sex)
Part
2 - Traveling Companion
(mmm)
Part
3 - Symbolic Relations
(mm oral)
Part
4 - Our Parents' Wishes
(mc, fmf)
Part
5 - Moving In Pains
(mmm oral)
Part
6 - Southeast Fringe
Benefits
(ffm, ff)
Part
7 - Getting Down
to Business
(mc, mff, mf, ff)
Part
8 - Crash Course
Under Fire
(mc)
Chapter XV: 11th Grade,
Spring 1988
Part
1 - Un-welcome Home
(no sex)
Part
2 - Sex is for
friends, Love is for Lovers
(mfm)
Part
3 - Wedding Bells
(mc mf)
Part
4 - Slaves Young
and Old
(mc incest mf)
Part
5 - Male Ego
(mm)
Part
6 - Troubles of
Sexuality
(mm)
Part
7 - Vision of the
Damned
(mc mf rape (sort of))
Chapter XVI: 11th Grade,
Summer 1988 -
Nathan & Joey
[As told by Joey]
Part
1 - Nathan, My Best Amigo
(mc, mf, ff)
Part
2 - Fruits of This Land Be Ours
(mc, mf)
Part
3 - The Joys of Enslaving and Raping
(mc, mf)
Part
4 - The Pit
(mc, mf)
Part
5 - Bewitched
(mc, mf)
Part
6 - Bonds of Loyalty
(mc, mf)
Part
7 - Escape to Witch Mountain
(mc, mf)
Chapter XVII: 12th Grade,
Fall 1988
Part
1 - Rebirth
(mc mf, breast feeding)
Part
2 - Big Shoes to
Fill
(mc mf)
Part
3 - Tests of One's
Character
(no sex)
Part
4 - Back to School
Again
(mf)
Part
5 - King of Sluts
(mc mf)
Part
6 - Love at First
Sight
(mc mf ff fmf)
Part
7 - Romancing a
Lonely Heart
(no sex)
Part
8 - Giving Up the
Throne
(mf ff bodyswapping)
Part
9 - Thanksgiving at the Corrigan's
(no sex)
Part
10 - Aid for Heartaches
(no sex)
Chapter XVIII: 12th Grade,
Winter 1988/89
Part
1 - Chains of Love
(no sex)
Part
2 - The Unwanted Gift
(no sex except making out)
Part
3 - Woman's Right
to Change Her Mind
(no sex)
Part
4 - My Student and
Lover
(foreplay)
Part
5 - Teacher's Day
Off
(mf)
Part
6 - Her First Day
Out
(mc oral)
Part
7 - Birthday surprises
(no sex)
Part
8 - Final in Telepath
101
(foreplay)
Chapter XIX: 12th Grade,
Spring 1989
Part
1 - Changes in
the Wind
(mf, mm oral (brief))
Part
2 - Nothing's Stranger
Than Love
(mf)
Part
3 - Lee and Me
(mf, anal)
Part
4 - Attacks of
the Heart
(fmm)
Part
5 - Just the Three
of Us
(mf)
** Part 6 - Graduation day
(mf, mfm)
Chapter XX: Summer 1989
[T] = told by Tim [J] = told by
Joey
Part
1 - Flight 689
[T]
(no sex)
Part
2 - Empathic History
[T]
(mc, mf)
Part
3 - Loves Slavery
[J]
(mf)
Part
4 - Pieces to a
Vanishing Puzzle
[J]
(mf oral anal)
Part
5 - Return to Witch
Mountain
[J]
(mc, mf)
Part
6 - Twinnocence
[T]
(mc, mf)
Part
7 - Hidden Memories
Revealed
[J]
(mc, mf)
Part
8 - Filling the
Needs of One
[T&J](mc,
mf)
Chapter XXI: Fall 1989 -
Spring 1990
Part
1 - Searching For
the Pigments of Your Self Portrait
(mff)
** Part 2 - Revealing Truth with
Every
Brushstroke
(mf)
Part
3 - The Greatest Tests Are From Within
(no sex)
Part
4 - Suzi's toys
(mc, mFm)
Part
5 - Fitting In,
Again
(no sex)
Part 6 - A Lover, A Dreamer, That's me
(ff)
Part 7 - A Pickled Matter
(no sex)
Chapter XXII: Summer 1990
added November 28th, 2008
Part 1 - Family Surprises
(mc, m masturbation)
Part 2 - The Group
(mc, mf, ff, mff)
Part 3 - Beyond the Boundaries of Sex
(mc, mf, body swapping)
Part 4 - Higher maintenance
(body swapping, mf, incest)
Part 5 - Starships and Queens
(mc, mf, mff, mm, mfm, all very brief)
**
Part 6 - Sir Eric Roberts of Atlantia
(no sex)
Part 7 - For the Love of the Queen
(mf)
Part 8 - Virtual Timality
(no sex)
Telekinesis isn't something I feel fits in _The Book_'s universe. Remember, my goal here is for someone to be able to read _The Book_ after reading my story and not find any really strong conflictions between the two. While _The Book_ never mentions telekinesis or empathy in any way, and even though I have added empathy, I have made empathy a distictly seperate ability and such would not directly conflict with _The Book_'s ideals.
As you have suggested, telekinesis would most likely be related to telepathy, but nowhere in _The Book_ has that been mentioned. The Book's form of telepathy depends on the use of symbols. Whether these symbols have any true physical form or are simply the mind's representation of the processes going on in one's head is a matter of conjecture. But I feel in that universe telekinesis would be unrelated and completely seperate to telepathy.
Telekinesis will play an important role in the finale, but not in the sense you probably have been thinking of. And there already has been two seperate uses of that universe's telekinetic abilities in the story so far, but I don't expect anyone to even hazard a guess at what they are.
"Oh that reminds me, when Tim is floating his mind around, that's more a form of astral projection than simple telepathy."
Not the way he does it. The way I've been developing the physics of the symbols, the transmission of one's thoughts/symbols does not depend on the distance between the two and occures instantaniously. However, because the brain is flesh and blood and therefor doesn't operate instantaniously, one can sense and defend themselves when another mind is preparing to probe or attack them. They don't actually sense the probe itself, just the person's intentions before releasing the probe.
When Tim went mind hopping, he first had to use his telepathic senses to find a mind who was in the direction we wanted to go, then opened a partial two-way with them. His telepathic range was only limited by his ability to distinguish who's thoughts belonged to whom before locking on to that person's mind. The more he did this, the better he got, and by the time he was at the summer camp, he could lock onto another's mind simply by initiating a specific responce while listening to their voice over the phone.
If Tim had figured it out back when he had mind hopped to Brad's house, he could have simply said something over the phone to Brad to get Brad to emit a specific thought which he could have focused his telepathic senses on detecting. When using the telephone, Tim actually isn't interested in what they say since that comes after what they think. But then their voice does help him by giving him a feel for what they had thought the fraction of a second before it traveled down the phone line and through the air to his ear.
People who were physically near his location were easier to lock on to because he received more of their thoughts than the others further away. Like the sun being easier to locate in the sky than a particular star. A lot of those stars put out more light than the sun, but because the sun is so much closer to us... well, you get the idea.
When Tim forms the two way with that other person, he uses their own telepathic senses (which everyone has a small amount of, even though I haven't stated it in the story yet) to find the next person to hop to. Once Tim can distinguish a single person's thoughts from the background noise, he can usually keep a lock on them by making them repeat a certain thought which he keys in on. Like I mentioned in the story, the limiting factor isn't the distance between Tim and another person's mind, it's the number of other minds between them.
Hmm.. I'll have to
add that to the FAQ or something.
(well, this is the something... heh)
FAQs:
Last updated on February 12th, 2020 at 5:30 pm CST (-06:00)